I hope you post the chapter of Tsunade getting pregnant soon

So BigE shows his true colors what a whiny fucking hypocrite even his apology and I use that word loosely was half-assed. What little respect I had for him is gone completely 

anyways it’s great to have you back this story is a gem and I’m glad you didn’t forget about it

Hey man, glad to see your back! Really enjoy your work. If you're looking for a more hardcore idea, I would suggest maybe Tayuya or Fu, both have been shown to be more durable than normal, Tayuya with her curse mark and Fu being a Jinchuriki. 

Sigh thank you man just simply thank you for brining  some sense of sanity to this place i've had enough of big e's self righteous sasuke cucks naruto harem bullshit too and he has the gall to criticize your work when each and every story he shits from his asshole is like sasuke fucks naruto's wife and daughter he's happy with it boom done that in itself spells no rhyme nor reason and even the latest shit fest he shat love lust and friendship is way to predictable all i see is a sasuke cucking naruto with hinata being his virtual love slave while he puts a big damn smile on his face no seriously bige is a hypocrite you know how many naru/harem stories he wrote and barely even finished them and even then in some of the stories naruto is always dominated somewhat right he doesn't have the right to tell you to write something original when he's been wanking sasuke and bashing naruto for years "he dosent't like bashing naruto" cough yeah right he is also one of the main reasone why i didn't even bother to look up naruto fanfic's on this site anymore if any of you like naruto as a character i can exactly tell you how love lust and freindship will end sasuke gets hinata and sakura naruto smile like a whimp end of story so just warning you from now stay away from big e rant over welcome back sniper joe did you try out the jerk chicken and pork they had there?

Short chapter, but I loved the contents. Naruto starting to bend Tsunade to his will not through physical strength, but but his sheer stubbornness and strength of will. It fits so amazingly well with who Naruto is a a character, I can’t help but love how it works in the context of the world you’ve set up with. 

Id actually love to see a chapter where he manages to utterly break a girl before he even fucks her or touches her, just through his stubbornness and willpower. Could be what you  use Shizune for if you’re still not sure what to do with her. Or TenTen, since there’s no real plan for her as of yet. 

Actually, if you can manage something with the Princess from the first movie or Shion from the first Shippuuden movie, those would be great. He basically won them both over with his extreme stubbornness. In this universe, he’d break them into his without laying a finger on them. 

Keep at it, you’re easily one of the better writers on here. 

Yeah, I noticed that review that a certain wannabe Uchiha cuck lord left. While I can understand his attempt to give "constructive criticism", I found it to be utterly ironic that he preached originality whereas none of his stories possess a smidgeon of it. I honestly thought about messaging him on fanfiction (how generous of him to plug his FF account and discord), but he really isn't worth the time nor the effort.And where are all of these Naruto/Harem stories he mentioned? Kage Sexbomb is one of the very few that I've come across that hasn't been totally abandoned.

In short, fuck him and his stories. He's one of the reasons why I don't bother searching the Naruto section of this site very often anymore. He's so thirsty for Sasuke that it's just fucking sad.

Anyway, ideas for this story. I'd like to see Tsunade explored more in the future. We've had a Tsume chapter (two really). Karui could be interesting, but cucking Chouji? I don't know. Shizune, despite being somewhat unassuming, would be good. I'd also be down for Kushina and Kurama at some point. What about Mebuki Haruno? She's not a woman you see with Naruto very often. Given his relationship with Sakura, Mebuki wouldn't be a stretch in this story. Yoshino Nara could be another, especially since Shikaku died during the War. Was Ino's mother ever introduced in canon? Inoichi died during the war too. So she could be an option.

What about women who live outside of Fire Country? Mei Terumi, Mabui (the Raikage's assistant), Samui, Shizuka etc. Someone who would be interesting, given their past and her role in the Icha Icha movie, would be Koyuki Kazehana. Perhaps she and Naruto could have hooked up during his training trip or something. Or she stopped in the Leaf during a diplomatic mission, etc.

Hardcore smut no plot next chapter? Hoping for Tenten she keeps trying to add plot but Naruto just uses her and she realizes she is as useful a woman as she is a kunoichi and breaks down crying as she licks his cum off the ground.

I see that I probably came across the wrong way, and I apologize for that. Yes -- I've written SasuHarem before; but I've also written NaruHarem, multiple Naruto stories, a Hinata story, an OG story, not to mention a multitude of other things. I love SasuHarems and NaruHarems, Sasuke-anything and Naruto-anything.

Again, that offer to talk is still wide open. I'm not going to try and shove Sasuke or whatever down your throat -- Naruto is fine. Hell, I've written a few Naruto harem stories of my own.

This chapter was an improvement, by the way, if a little short.; as I said before, you really do have a lot of talent. I'll keep this short, so I'm just going to wish that you've had a wonderful day. Cheers! Don't forget about my offer, :)

talk about a fking tease  but love it.  i still want my Chocho / Hyuuga Hanabi / Sarada in a 3some

Short, but it was still a fun and good read. I really enjoyed the glimpse of Tsunade's mentality; a self-confident woman with an unmatched drive to pursue what she wants, and get it how she likes it.

Only to be denied! You should continue exploring this element to her. It will be so satisfying when they do become intimate—or more like he conquers her.

Naruto's little speech is so true. A subtle nod to canon if there ever was one.

Great chapter.

Also I just want to let you know now don't listen BigE, dude doesn't know shit about originality, majority of his stuff is recycled "sasuke cucks Naruto" bullshit dude has no place to be talking about originality.

Hell I know he's written the same plot like 3 times.

You're doing great and frankly he's claiming he doesn't care about the sauce getting cucked but he has a clear preference here, and honestly looks like he's trying save face by saying that.

Here's a suggestion: why don't you try something... original?

Look, I could honestly care less about what you do to Sasuke or Sai or Shikamaru or whatever. I cuck Naruto and other people in my own stories, so it's only fair that you can do the same; but really man, you're just... what?

Here's the plot of your story. Naruto is the Hokage; girls like Naruto because... he's... uh... what? He's nothing. He's some generic carbon copy protagonist that jumps back and forth from being the 'nicest guy in the world' to demanding women call him master and calling everyone bitches. You claim that you have problems cucking the other guys 'because of problems with their scenario', but your inital scenarios are... awful anyway.

Take Sakura for example. Sasuke bets her body for... some reason. Naruto is just randomly stronger than Sasuke for... some reason. Then Naruto rapes her and suddenly she's broken and loving his cock. Then he indorcrinates and fucking her underage daughter. I- I don't even know what you were trying to go for, man. It's downright silly. You try to paint Naruto as 'in the right' and as some 'good guy', but he does nothing but be a rapist pig who goes out of his way to enslave women and imasculate everyone around him. Why do you even have any pretences of him being good?

The cream of your story would probably be the 'Onsen' chapters, considering there are five of them. Let's see - wanking off Hinata again and again, constantly repeating how 'amazing her body is' and stuff like that. More pointless Sasuke and Sai bashing that doesn't even contribute to the smut or the plot. Naruto manages to block a Susanoo arm with one finger? Seriously dude, and people call me a wanker. Ino detoriates from loving wife to cum slut in the span of like.. ten minutes.

The Inuzuka and Hyuga chapters. So... jesus man. Did you even try with these? The plot of these is literally 'Naruto rapes the clan head and all the others fall in line like bitches becuz inuzukas' and 'Naruto destroys and puts most of the clan in the hospital so six women jump him becuz hyuga submission'.

Not to mention the blatant misoginy just plastered across your fiction. Constantly talking about how women 'deserved' to be chained to a strong man, calling them bitches and whores with no hint of self awareness...

Out of all these chapters, the wedding one is probaly the strongest. There's no needless bashing, and whatever bashing there is (the plug thing for insance) actually contributes to the chapter and adds a level of sin and hotness. Good stuff there.

... even then it isn't that good. It's suffering from the aftereffects of your previous chapters, and is so poorly paced and cobbled together I can't believe you didn't rewrite it over. Seriously.

What's my point?

Come up with something original. With something good. With something that actually has a degree of thought and characterization put into things. Don't just write stuff for the sake of writing stuff.

I can't emphasis this enough. Spend literally an hour plotting out how your fic is going to go - how things work, how things act and what your characters do and don't like. The plot. Do this, and your fics will be ten times better. Avoid needless bashing. There's a difference being cuckolding a character and going out of your way at every opportunity to bash them.

And for the love of god... edit your fucking work before you post it. That last chapter has so many grammar mistakes I wanted to tear my eyes out.

I sincerely hope that you read this and see what I'm trying to say, instead of going 'REEEEEE' and deleting it. Fuck, I'm legitimately trying to help you here man. I'll even give you an offer: contact me. Message me on fanfiction.net (you can find a link to my profile on my profile here), contact me via email (again, profile) or join this discord: https://discord.gg/2NVGKH4. Because you have a lot of talent that's just being wasted, and I don't think that's fair.

Hope everything went well in Jamiaca. A friend of mine enjoys your work and he was concerned - glad things are going well even if you're experiencing writer's block. It happens.

great to see you writing again your work is some of the best on this site.

As for ideas how about Naruto's and Hinata's honeymoon. Where did they go? Did Naruto or Hinata have any plans?  DId the other know about them? What (or who) were they? Where there any curdious hosts? How was Sakura holding up during that whole week?

You could also go into Naruto's and Hinata's 1st time. Where/When was it? Was it Naruto's 1st since Tsunade? Did Hinata practice to get as good as she is for their 1st time or is she just naturaly that gifted?

There is also how did Sakura get pregnant seeing as seeing as she is disgusted by Saskue.

Hmm. I can understand where you're coming from. As for suggestions, I'd be interested in Naruto's interaction with Tsunade to be expanded upon. She pretty much made him promise to conquer and impregnate her once he was strong enough. Did he ever live up to that promise?

I am really glad to see you are back. I wondered what happen to you. The new chapter was pretty good. It felt like more like a scene rather than a chapter since the action was them simply moving to the master room. I hope the next chapter is the threesome. I can't really help with Karui ideas but there are other females you can try. How about Moegi? She might not be a hot bombshell but she has the unique angle of having called Naruto "boss" for a while. You can try some sort of Office boss/Secretary scenario. Karin could also be a choice as well. I mean she is a full blood Uzumaki something that this Naruto should fine very important.