Reviews for Kage SexbombBy : SniperJoe |
Another awesome chapter dude. The lemon was awesome as always. I loved how hinata was during the chapter and the smut. You made her so shy and cute but at the same time managed to make her so damn kinky and hot as the smut went on. How you handled anko was also nice. She was so confident in her abilities as a "slut" and thought mabe she could handle naruto. Boy was she wrong lol. Making her loyal to naruto and to naruto alone despite her past adventures was a nice touch. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update
This was a great chapter. I'm not that much of a fan of Anko; she's all right, but not that exciting in my opinion. However, I did enjoy your portrayal of her.
Hardcore slut. And the tongue—kinky.
The dialogue had me laughing a lot. And Hinata as well. I shook my head when I read "Wan"; you had her barking in Japanese onomatopoeia. That was just adorable which made the situation weird as well, cause you know...
A wild slut was being tamed.
Looking forward to more chapters; until your next update.
fantastic update love to see more of this line. seeing the way early Hinata is with Naruto is great. given what happened with pain ark you referenced gives Hinata a great digestion above most of the girls being a naruto manic and then Anko the unconquerable owned completely. its great.
That is one hell of an update, man. I think I’ve only ever seen one other doc that had a NaruHinaAnko scene, and this one blew the other way out of the water. Really enjoyed the hints to future chapter scenes, seeing how Naruto and Hinata interacted before getting married(seeing how he treats her really helps shows the love within the context of the world and story) and seeing where Anko started out compared to the first chapter.
Also glad to here this will be a multi-chapter scene. Seems you got a great bout of inspiration and I hope it stays with you. Keep at it!
It really shows that with this chapter you were greatly inspired. Great job as always and the proper introduction to Anko was the best I could have hoped her. I love Hinata in this chapter and the contrast to Anko played off super well and there were so many things that clicked together. Loved all of it so far and there's still more potential with "Alley" so I'm hoping for a quick update. The only "negative" thing I'll say is that it is a shame that Temari doesn't do it for you. I think she would be perfect for this story but of course if you're not interested in her don't force yourself to include her .
Awesome man can't wait to see more
I love the story between Naruto and Tsunade. I need more of it. It's different from the other chapters. Are we going to meet Tsunade at the present time with their child
This is some of the hotest shit I've ever read, I seriously hope that you update this soon. I got a few ideas you can try if you are still interested.
Kurenai: It would start early on her naturally being interested in the boy that favorite student had a crush on. She'd want to make sure he was worthy of Hinata. Of course slowly she'd be entranced by Naruto and for a while she'd lie to herself saying everything that she was doing with him was Hinata's sake, so that he'd be able to satisfy her. Later she'd no longer to be able to resist being with Naruto even when she was dating Asuma it would be Naruto that she'd want. After Asuma's death it was for comfort, or at least that is what she'd claim, that she was still a desirable woman and not some glass figurine like Team 10 and Kiba and Shino would treat her while pregnant.
Mirai: I think she'd be a lot like Sarada having a male figure in her life to replace her dead father. She'd grow up with similar conditions and desires.
Himawari: What girl wouldn't want thier father's attention especially when he was paying so much attention to other girls, seeing how happy they are with her father and feeling jelaousy (Sarada and Mirai especially). She'd wonder why and be desprate to find out so that she can draw Naruto's attention to her. Finally she discovers why and implements the actions.
Karui: This would start when she, Omoi, and Samui go to Konoha to get informaton on Sasuke and things would start as normal. Only when when she tries to attack Naruto, without Omoi being there for whatever reason, he would turn things on her and things would escalate from there. In the background Samui would eventually turn up while Naruto was fucking Karui and get turned on from watching them and eventually join in.
This way you at the very least can get a single chapter with Karui without having to cuckold Choji yet.
Chocho: Well she was convinced that Choji wasn't her real father and after catching her mother with Naruto on more then a couple of occasions she thinks that she has finally found him and desperately wants a piece of him for himself.
A chapter with Naruto and the girls that consider him to be thier father, or is her father,
Temari: A possible chapter with Shikamaru being kept busy working for Naruto and then being generally lazy when he gets off work she feels a little neglected, underappreciated and wants to be reminded that she is desired and coveted which Naruto is more then happy to do.
These are just a few prompts I thought of whether you find any of them worthwhile or not is inconsequential because again I just hope you update this, and Hero Breeding Tales, soon.
Hey if your still looking for a bases for a new chapter try using sumire kakei something along the lines of repayment for all the trouble she caused or to be taught the true way to be a great leaf kunoichi by Naruto
Can't wait for the next chapter
Dude yes! I didn't even realize that you updated! This is honestly one of the VERY few stories on this site the I actually enjoy. And I loved these past few chapters with Naruto totally breaking Ino mentally and I'm also left wondering on how Tsunade ended up being handled by Naruto since she seems to be the dominant type and is crazy about him. Can't wait to see how that played out. As for the next update I really wouldn't mind another Hyuuga chapter, maybe with Hanabi and Hinata having a threesome with Naruto in the Boruto era. I always liked the idea of Naruto going at it with the Hyuuga sisters especially since Hanabi ended up becoming quite the beauty and Hinata being a total milf. Ultimately its up to you and thanks for keeping this story alive and I'm glad that you're back m8. Hope to see a new update soon
I'd like to suggest a few chapters with Sarada at varying ages seeing Naruto fuck her mother regardless of her presence in the room they are currently copulating. Maybe a few where she also get used to being the Hokage's new bitch. A chapter that show the origins of Shizune and Naruto's physical relationship would not be amiss either. Maybe one where Naruto and Hinat have to juggle in between their physical needs and the good example to give to their children?
Love this story, glad to see it continuing and glad to see someone with a similar mentality to me towards Naruto Harems (I can't stand Sasuke personally).
In regards to why you get so many people suggesting Tsunade, I think it's probably because of how interesting and unique the setup for that scenario was, combined with the fact that it stands out as incomplete. The Hyuuga one is more or less satisfied (you can add more, but the core of the idea is complete), same with the Onsen, but that one's only still at the start.
In terms of ideas, one suggestion I could offer would be something detailing Naruto's interactions with Shion, following the events of her movie, specifically the fact that canon Naruto unknowingly promised to give her a child. Perhaps this Naruto would make the same promise without knowing, or perhaps he would have realised, but either way, Shion coming to Konoha to collect on their promise is something you could play with.
I really enjoy how you handle the Tsunade/Naruto interactions, especially when Tsunade lets her lust rise to the top.
I'm just enjoying this story very much, overall.
Reposting review for the latest Onsen chapter because of spelling errors.
Good to see you back again.
Sorry to hear about the writer’s block with the characters you were trying to focus on. Kurenai could be a good character to make a chapter for. Since Asuma dies and she’s no longer pregnant, she doesn’t have the distraction from not being regularly used and fucked. And Naruto was the only other Wind User in the village.
Not sure what you had planned for Shizune, but she could be sent by Tsunade to be Naruto’s first conquest of a girl/test his training she’s been putting him through. Depending on if either Shizune or Naruto knownits a year, but it’s up to you.
Could also make them take Tayuya prisoner and Naruto is the one to break her into confessing Orochimaru’s secrets with Anko watching, which in turn gets her interested in him and wanting the same treatment.
It was really good to read a good quality NaruHarem again. They’ve been severely lacking on here, and yours was always one of the good ones.
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