Reviews for Kage SexbombBy : SniperJoe |
Chapter 2
Yes! Fuck Sasuke!
Rather, don't fuck him. Cuck that guy.
Chapter 1
Oh my god, go on.
Some douche in Ficwad named funkmasterjo stole your story my guy.
Love the story. Hoping for a chapter where on a important mission Naruto underminds and belittles Kurenai in front of the client.
As always another awesome chapter and another heart felt thanks from another fan!
after the long break b/w chapter 13 and 14 things are looking good for Kage Sexbomb again. Though I love the way you are handling Ino ( my first anime crush) I just wanted to make a suggestion and post in a few important names.
Please consider doing Tenten, Temari and Kurenai. I know you already have Anko and Shizune along with Tsunade to write about, but please do consider these names as well.
cheers!
do you plan on adding tenten soon or a kunoichi from another village like temari kurosutchi or one of the girls from kumo?
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Damn, Naruto just keeps on breaking Ino's mind over and over again to the point where she's just speaking random nonsense. And hinata, sakura, and that stranger lady are just watching it all go down lol. Nice chapter my dude
Are you seriously anxious about including more Ino? Helllllll no! It’s hot as hell! I want more! Maybe even a pregnancy involved. I’m assuming he’s already impregnated tsunade, which by the way you need to include in the present chapters and not just the past ones, so what’s stopping him from spawning a few (read many, many, many) kids with his girls?
although I will point out that at the beginning there were quite a few typos and missing words, so I’m the essence of giving criticism please take more time. As much as I want these chapters every day (which I know is impossible to ask of you) I don’t want the disconnect when i’m in the middle of reading and have to re-read a line 3 times to see what it really meant. Other than that, keep em coming!
I like the fact that you like Ino so much in this story. By all means, please don't stop including her in future chapters after you're done with the 'Onsen' chapters.
For the love of god do a Tenten
Good chapter bro
Okay that one was weird. Hot but weird. Oh well, keep up the good work. :)
Hey man I am really loving the new chapters, glad to see you back as you're one of the few people around that still writes Naru-harem stuff. Recently I've had little reason to check the site as it's all either yaoi or Sasu-harem or Naruto getting cucked... come on.
I'm sure you already get tons of suggestions as for what girls to include. I'd be happy to read whatever it is you do next, but one thing I'd really like to see more of is some more scenes of interactions between the girls, maybe when Naruto's not in the room since when he is they (and the scene) naturally gravitate around him. An example would be a snippet of some of the "lessons with Shizune" that Hinata refers to here, or something with Tsunade and Shizune as they seem to have an interesting relationship!
Anyway thanks again for making this site worth checking again.
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