Reviews for Kage SexbombBy : SniperJoe |
Continuation please
What a chapter
Awesome chapter, it looks like Kushina is starting to lose it
Very nice I like! Are you planning to bring kushina into the real world? Any chance of seeing Kurenai? Perhaps when he gets back from the three year training or after pain attacks?
Awesome
This... isn't terrible.
Like, no, I'm geniunely surprised by this chapter. Somebody posted it in my discord and said it wasn't 'so-bad', so I decided to check it out. And this isn't terrible. Frankly, this is pretty good, and I'm going to commend you on that as I should, because there's no point in not giving credit where credit is due.
The scenes between Kushina and Naruto in the beginning are very sweet. Him being pushed on a swing by his mother, something he always wanted as a kid; Kushina teasing him over his conquests. It's all very wholesome and sweet, which makes the next half of the chapter all too good.
Of course, Kushina's fall is rushed to our eyes but in the context of the story, you've made it clear with the Dream numbers that it's a long time coming. Going from her barely able to comprehend Naruto's sexual prowess, to desperately trying to arouse her unwilling son, to just... well, it's good. That's all I need to tell you.
The ending is a little weak, but a cliffhanger is never not effective and I find myself curious about what you'll do with the next chapter. Should be rather interesting.
Of course, this doesn't make up for the shitshow that was the earlier chapters, but still, this is... good. Really good; I'm very, very impressed, Mr. SniperJoe. Very impressed. Good work on this chapter, and I'm hoping that future ones will continue to be as solid as this one is.
Great chapter. Also one bit for more Kushina chapter's.
that's some pretty sweet chapters you've uploaded since i checked in last.
awesome!
Still doing gods work you are.
Didn't think Kushina would fit into this at all. Good to see you are making it work.
I look forward to her eventual dicking.
Well shit he’s got his mom after his d I sure he hope he doesn’t have to deal with the horned milf *hint hint*
Nice lil chapter of I could make a vote it would be another sarada and sakura chapter with more bashing of sasuke or a cho cho and kurai one both mother daughter pair is hot
Awesome that you introduced kushina. Your story is one of the VERY few stories on this website that makes me keep on coming back. Keep up the good work
Hello i am a fan of your work and think you are a very talented writer. you excell at creating vivid scenes that are very detailed and original. i hope you continue writing more chapters. it seems that you favor ino but i would like to see a chapter more focused on hinata
how about a kin-tayuya tag team ? i like them very much xd
The best Milf forever, and the truth chapters without sex are good for the development of the character or in this case Kushina, who little by little falls into depravity because of his son and his conquests. Without her being aware of herself.
I hope more of her especially and any other girl in this story.
Mikoto Uchiha
Tsunade Senju
Samui
Anko
Mei Terumi
To name a few. Keep up the good work.
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