Thanks for another update I was running out of stuff to read and congrats on making me feel bad for Sai, seeing how Sakura turned out he really should’ve known better oh well.

Great chapter once again. I am really enjoying these recent chapters mainly because they feel different and change up the formula. I am looking forward to chapters with more of a storyline to tie them together.

Talking about changing the formula, I was wondering about some of the plans you have for your future pairings. Obviously she would still a sub who was having the best sex of her life, but more in a fantastic hook up kinf of way instead "I want to build a shrine dedicated to you." The ladies who would be perfect to fulfill this role would probably be the female jinchuriki. You could use their increased stamina. At this point I don't think anyone would hold it agaisnt if you brought back Fuu and Yugito from the dead.

Another thing I was wondering is if you ever considered dabbling into genderbend stuff. MOstly because I feel like it would be th eultimate humiliation for someone like Sasuke if he got hit with a temporary cross between the Sexy Jutsu and Fuinjutsu. You could stretch it out over a few chapters if you wanted to show him slowly stop fighting it or whatever. Or you could have a softer route and go with someone like Sai who just really felt curious about how sex felt and since he can't get hard, then he should probably try it as the other gender.

On a more tame note, with the addition of Kushina, I am also looking forward tomore MILFs coming soon. Mei and Tsume need some loving. Ayame is also almost old enough to be considered one depending on when in the timelineyou decide to add her.

Best of Luck

LordSinnoh

Admittedly, the incest stuff with Kushina really isn’t my thing, which is why I didn’t review them. But they were still very well-written, so I hope you didn’t feel discouraged to write them. 

As for the new chapter, I liked mixing things up by giving the perspective of someone other than Ino in the situation. It helps make the situation feel fresh despite being the seventh of a series. I also really appreciate the extra details you had to show how much he loves Hinata. Obviously something like that can get lost in a story like this, but you seem to take special care to reaffirm his feelings for each girl, and that elevates the story above other “character fucks all the girls” harem fics. 

I’d actually be interested to see him use his...let’s call them talents, in some sort of interrogation factor, having to break one of the enemy shinobi. You hinted a little bit at it in the Alley chapter, and I’d be interested in seeing that explored in a chapter/series of chapters. If it’s more about breaking the woman than actually loving them, would Naruto be rougher/harder? Could he end up fucking a prisoner so hard she permanently breaks? Could someone like Tayuya, Kin, or Konan been broken so throughly that she’s nothing more than some panting sex pet kept back at Naruto’s home in the yard?  I’m rambling a bit, but hopefully I sparked some unrest in a chapter. 

Keep it up, you’re stuff is always engaging. 

Another great chapter man! And I gotta agree, the Kushina chapter was hot as shit! If you're still looking for ideas for more girls, maybe try the girls from the Road to Ninja movie? That could put a twist on the regular ones, a more assertive Hinata, mousy Ino, etc.? Anyway, can't wait to see the next chapter from ya!

still waiting on for the following

Chōchō Akimichi

Hanabi Hyūga

Sarada Uchiha

Tenten

Temari

Moegi Kazamatsuri

Samui

Ayame

Tsume Inuzuka

Hana Inuzuka

Mabui

Mebuki Haruno

  okay so i would like to see the following girls in a showdo clone gangbag or something 

nice chapter I actually feel bad for the attendant maybe you should give her a turn next lol

Great chapter. A bit disappointed that this isn't Kushina 3 but oh well. Like how it was from the perspective of the attendant. Loved hinata in this. She was hot. Can't wait to read more

For the longest time I couldn’t log in but I’ve been keeping up with the updates and I tell ya man I love each and every one though the alley chapter has to be my new favorite I hope another one comes soon also I’d like to see a chapter where Sasuke actually tries(and fails) to get Sakura back

Sorry for not reviewing chapter 19 earlier. I actually saw it a little after it was released, and I actually clicked on it to read it... but, well, stuff came up and I wasn't able to get around to it until now. And, since I've seen that you have updated the story again, I'm going to review chapter 20 in this one too, because why not.

Chapter 19:

This chapter was an excellent follow up to the previous one. If I had to be honest, this is by far the best chapter of your story yet. It's impressive to see how much you managed to top the previous one.

Kushina is...

You write her very well. I adore the way you've written her in this story. It's... great. That's all I can say: it's truly, truly great. My favorite part is when Kushina hesitates to fuck Naruto -- mostly because it's just great.

She's wanted a man for so long. She's seen what Naruto can do. She's fantasized herself in their position. She's begging, wanting, needing it... and then the moment comes. And she realizes how fucked up it is, and how much she doesn't want it despite the fact she needs it at the same time. Absolutely brilliant.

I've always been troubled by your characterization of Naruto in this story, but it's fine here. It doesn't detract from the chapter at least. It's the perfect contrast to the 'eager at first, relunctant in the moment' Kushina.

The ending is nice. The fact that Naruto still doesn't fuck her is probably my favorite part -- you're learning to pace yourself. To build up the reader's anticipation until the chapter when the good stuff finally happens. That's an important thing to do.

Again, good job. Can't wait to see Kushina 3.

Chapter 20:

Am disappointed this isn't Kushina 3. T___T

You got few reviews from that last chapter? What... the fuck?

I'm actually surprised by that. Because honestly, that was the best chapter of this work, and I don't have much faith in your readers if they refused to review that. Damn.

Ugh.

I fancy myself... not a fan of your onsen chapters.

They started off decent enough. But after that scene with Naruto blocking Susanoo with a finger -- a scene which had me laughing with hos absurd it was -- the quality... plummeted. The scene with Ino getting broken was pretty good, but it's clear you're just beating a dead horse by this point.

And I hate the fact that I feel like you're doing it just to bait some more reviews from your readers. I really do.

This one is... okay. I read it. It didn't really speak to me like the Kushina ones did.

Call it the lack of 'plot'. Yes, this is smut, but plot always improves it. The fact that the Kushina chapters had a coherent story to follow, the fact that they were well paced and that there was a degree of sin to it... well, it made it much better in my opinion.

This? This is just mindless smut. Which isn't a bad thing necessarily, but considering this is chapter seven of the Onsen series, I'm disappointed. You could have come up with something original; I know you could have.

But, you've impressed me before. Chapters 18 and 19 were great, and I'm confident chapter 12 will be too. Keep it up -- you're improving. You're doing far better than I originally thought you would, I'll admit that.

Also, that offer to join my discord from way back when is still on the table. I really do prefer delivering reviews in person... makes it a lot easier to get a reply from the person I've giving it to. Here's the link if you're interested: https://discord.gg/4qdeJcx

Ciao!

Again, another great chapter. I wonder what type of kinky stuff naruto has planned for hinata and sakura. I feel like I shouldn't be too worried about sai finding out what naruto and Ino have been doing. I mean he did basically ask naruto to be the man Ino needs and wants. Still I want to see how sai reacts since he didn't seem bothered by the idea of it. Good update m8, I shall await for your next chapter

i think this is probably the hottest chapter you have written so far. as for the end of, lemans age, i doubt it just like everything sex-related as there a rise and fall like the tides.

Good chapter bro.

This is the shit plz update soon need to see what happens ... for research 

Great chapter, kushina is getting lost in the pleasure and the tabu itself. The sweet words of her son are making her lose her mind. I can not wait for the next chapter.
And since we are in the topic of incest, how about a chapter of Himawari, but already big and with the body of Hinata and Kushina.
Keep up the good work.

Great work on the chapter with kushina i know incest is taboo but i would like to see a chapter about himawari