Reviews for Kage SexbombBy : SniperJoe |
Great chapter m8. I like how you have naruto be firm and demanding but also gentle and caring when it came to hinata. I'm also curious about how naruto "trained" hinata and how their first time together went. As for the milfs part, I guess the only ones you can do at the moment without Edo Tensei would be Tsunade obviously, Kurenai, and mabe even adult Hanabi and Moegi. I'm assuming the milfs that would fall into the Edo Tensei category would be Mikoto, Kushina, Mito, and Konan if she counts. Ultimately it's up to you on the way you handle it. But great work so far m8
Great chapter. Even though I would have loved to see their actual first time (unless you have already done it and don't remember it.) I do like this insight into both of their characters. Humanising Naruto really helps the overall story.
For the Yandere character or someone who can just keep up with Naruto a good option could Tayuya if you go with the whole fan canon about her being an Uzumaki. Karin could also work out and you can also play with the idea that Naruto is projecting his anger for Sakura (most likely before he wins her) onto Karin because of her obsession with Sasuke.
As for the MILFs. Well if you don't like yhe whole Edo Tensei+Rinne Rebirth route that brought back Madara, then honestly I don't think there is anything else. You might have to start fishing around in other anime universes. Could just go crazy and have Naruto come accross the Dragon Balls, make a wish, and then Whis or one of Zenos's Angels just shows up to confiscate them since this is the wrong universe.
A very good chapter, the truth Hinata was not my favorite character of the series, but over time began to be my favorite.
I hope more of Kushina, Tsunade and if possible to future Himawari.
Another couple idea that I would like is a Fem Kyuubi something that I would like, there are not many stories of this type of couple.
And to revive the MILFS, this is difficult, if it has to be by method of the series itself. If it were for other methods yes, but I can not think of one.
Keep up the good work.
incredible chapter, hot and very telling, part of it I'm sure is that hinata is my favorite naruto girl. the way that naruto is slowly truly owning hinata yet as much as she wants to give in she is still fighting herself till she gave him what he wants. both in allowing him to work for her and to effectively allow naruto to turn her into a proper Uzumaki. by his standards. to expose her self fully to him. it's a perfect dom/sub relationship with care on both sides.
This latest chapter is amazing though I thought it would’ve been Naruto actually taking Hinata’s virginity still I enjoyed it very much thanks for the update
I feel a little sad for the attendant that she’ll never get any. Before I read she won’t be satisfied I thought maybe some other guy would fulfill her needs but I guess not. Good story as always and I gave you a follow on ffnet.
Do you have any ideas for an NGE story? Also, how many kids will Naruto spawn? How will they be raised?
I can't review each chapter individually right?
Uh. The most recent one was amazing.
I understand your concerns about going overboard on Ino.
But IMO it's hot AF and hotness is justice.
Goddamn it's hot.
Chapter 1: Amazing start. What the fuck how have I never seen this?
I came here from ffn. I just googled your story.
I made an account just to review.
I saw a review commenting on the fact they thought there was new stuff in chapter 2, so I went and gave it a re-read myself. You only really added to a couple parts, but what you did add definitely improved an already pretty damn good chapter. Expanding a bit on Naruto’s feelings at the time, putting more context as to why exactly it was happening, it’s all great stuff.
Now to read the fic over again to see if there’s any other new stuff.
Dude if you’re going RTN, I’d really like to see the following.
Minato cucked by Naruto fucking Kushina.
Menma cucked as Naruto 3somes both Hinatas.
Sasuke shamed as Naruto fucks RTN Mikoto.
either a chapter for each or all in one chapter - Ino and RTNIno, Sakura, Hanabi, etc.
More Kushina!
ok I'm rereading this, and for a change reread the saruka chapter, i don't know if you changed it in response to bigE and his bull or just to improve your own story but if someone reads it now and doesnt have a clue how the world of this story works there complete morans or willfully stupid
Nice story. Could you make a sasuke ntr fanfic?
To bigE
As I said get the fuck out of here!! Your Idea of the world ouside Naruto Harem is what Link29 said! So don't go here and critisize an author that actually LIKE a NarutoxHarem! It a Fanfic, sniper joe can make Naruto as strong as possible, even blocking a susanoo with just a finger and curbstomp your pwecious sasgay! Don't like it? Go jack off to your precious sasgay out of here you hypocrite!
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