Eh. Fair enough regarding the Mebuki thing. Truthfully, I don't think she's that hot either. But she's not someone you typically see in smut fics. Also...not gonna lie, Sakura's reaction would probably be pretty fucking hilarious haha. She treated Naruto like complete shit the majority of the time for years. And not only has he turned her into his slut/mistress, but her mother too. It's like the best kind of karma. 

Anyway, no big deal. It was just an idea anyway. Have you considered including women from the non-canon arcs and movies? Like Koyuki Kazehana for example. By the end of her movie, she was pretty attached to Naruto. And that was in a universe where he wasn't like he is in this one. It's implied that she goes on to star in Jiraiya's Icha Icha movie after the fact. That could be a point of interest if you were so inclined, i.e. Jiraiya coerces Naruto into appearing in the film with promises of teaching him jutsu during the time-skip. If not, that's fine too. It's your story afterall.

While I find the taboo between Naruto and Kushina to be interesting, I actually find these chapters to be a refreshing change so far. While the hardcore lemons are excellent, the slower, more teasing, chapters are equally as good. And while my interest in this dreamworld is still piqued, but I can wait for the reveal. 

Thanks for the pretty conistent updates man.

Are you going to work on any of the other stories you've written? Or work on a new one?

This may be my favorite chapter yet narrowly eclipsing Hyuuga 2. I like your Hinata, you managed to make her perverted and depraved enough to be the perfect partner for Naruto without even changing her canon personality that much. 

Obviously maledom/femsub is your thing, or at least with this story, but would you ever consider writing a fic with femdom? Could be F/F or F/M idc, just really like the way you portray dom/sub relationships and I'm into both ways so that would be awesome to see.

really great chapter, though the choking thing really isn't my kink you managed to porta it really well as part of a loving dom/sub relationship between naruto and hinata. very few people who write any kind of BDSM involve that or even the mention of aftercare that you did with the plans naruto had latter and the pure trust hinata has for naruto just made the whole thing hotter. 

Clap Clap Clap Clap that was simply beyond words sniper one of the most vivid awesome lemons i've ever read and of the fact that you brought the pure love and trust naruto and hinata had for each other along with the awesome sex to go with it was just icing on the freshly baked cake that was your chapter just clinches it man just wow sniperjoe wow you should try braching out to hentai-foundry as well with your works too it's good to get another chapter from you too this was an amazing lemonade you wrote.

Its always good to see another upload from you.

Also feel free to do what you will with what I suggested for Kurenai. If you feel it wont fit what you have for the story, then by all means don't use it. I won't hound you about it because I love how thought out your work is. Keep up the good work.

Hmm. Yeah, it's a bit odd that we're finally getting Hinata chapters, but I'm fine with it lol. Though I was really hoping for more Kushina and Tsunade chapters. The Kushina especially, not just because of the taboo, but because I'm confused as fuck about the setting. And not in a bad way. 

Something else I'm curious about. What the hell does Kurama think of what Naruto's been up to? He's quite different from the Naruto he befriended, though not necessarily in a bad way. He may not even care.

Any chance we could get a Mebuki chapter? The premise could be something like she finds out what's going on with Sakura, and attempts to convince Naruto to stop, only to end up being seduced by him. Or Kizashi's libido has sharply declined, and she's tempted after coming across Naruto and Sakura or something. There could be a variety of scenario's that lead Mebuki to Naruto.

Just a couple of ideas. If you aren't interested in including Mebuki, that's cool too.

Such an odd mix of intense filthy debatchery and sweet pure love. Got to hand it to you, man. You blended the two together amazing well. Hinata being incredibly terrified to admit her secret fetish for fear of being hated seemed extremely in-character for her, despite the  source material never touching that specific area. 

Porn that makes you feel is so rare these days, and I’m glad you’re one of the ones that can pull it off. Great job as always. 

Of course, that’s not to say I don’t enjoy the moments where Naruto is more of a harsh Dom to other girls, but NaruHina really does require that sweetness angle to make it feel legitimate. 

Heres hoping for that fully mind break chapter sometime in the next handful of chapters or so!

nice chap. i usually dont like hinata, but these last two chaps are great.

also "sakura 2 and 3" yes please! or some more scenes with Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke.

sakura is my favorite girl by FAR! and id love any you add of her :D.

but whatever you write. ill be here to read it :) 

Damn, I loved how submissive Hinata is.

I think someone has already asked to see Kurenai, but I thought of what I think is a decent way to incorporate her.

It would have to take place before Naruto and Hinata have kids.

Kurenai could come to ask Hinata to take care of Mirai, reason being maybe her and Anko have a prior arrangement. Hinata would say she couldn't because she too had something to attend to(could be a clan thing or something with Hanabi). 

So she suggests Naruto being free. Kurenai is reluctant, but Hinata insists because she wants him to have some experience handling kids before they have some of their own. Reluctantly agreeing, Kurenai gives Naruto a long list of what to do and how. Naruto laughs and says he got this, Kurenai leaves after he convinces her.

Once she comes back she notices Naruto is a natural with kids. Mirai becoming extremely attached to him after just the one day.

Seeing this, Naruto becomes her go-to babysitter for Mirai. By proxy Kurenai becoming closer to him as well. One day, Kurenai comes home early only to find Naruto having sex with Hinata or Anko seeing as they are both close to Kurenai. As they do the do, Naruto complains saying they have to be quiet seeing as Mirai is a sleep.

Kurenai just stands there overwhelmed. Never having seen one of her closest friend/student in such a way is aroused. Her repressed urges slowly begin to rise to the forefront of her mind. She slowly leaves once again in the distraction coming back later after they're done.

She continues to ask Naruto to help babysitting, subconsciously hoping to see Naruto in the act again. Sure enough it happens again. She gives in and gets aroused setting him in the act. She tries to hide as she pleasures herself, until Naruto catches her after dismissing whoever was his partner was this time. Finally Kurenai gives on to her temptation and kisses him fiercely and she becomes yet another conquest for Naruto.

Damn, didn't intend for this to be so long. I just want to see some Kurenai and Naruto action...

Possibly one of the best stories on this site, just please don’t flip it to whatever happens to almost all storys go through, like flipping it to sasuke or making naruto a girl “shudders”, but more importantly your doing an amazing job and I hope to see more.

Wow, a different style once again.

More of a teasing chapter. Very much a talking one.

I can see why you would make this and post it earlier over on FFN.

I think it's a hell of a tease though and I hope there is a Hinata 2 very soon.

I'll stay tuned for next saturday.

This is a great story.  It's good to see Naruto being the king for once.

That was a surprisingly sweet chapter! Also, I think there's a bigger audience for NGE smut than you might think. Just put out some of your ideas and we'll tell you what we think of them.

That was fucking adorable and sweet and perverse as all hell and I love it. I know I’ve said it before, but I really love how you handle NaruHina in the fic. It’s so rare to find good NaruHina smut like that. Really glad she got her own chapter after all this time.