Reviews for Kage SexbombBy : SniperJoe |
Hmm. Yeah, it's a bit odd that we're finally getting Hinata chapters, but I'm fine with it lol. Though I was really hoping for more Kushina and Tsunade chapters. The Kushina especially, not just because of the taboo, but because I'm confused as fuck about the setting. And not in a bad way.
Something else I'm curious about. What the hell does Kurama think of what Naruto's been up to? He's quite different from the Naruto he befriended, though not necessarily in a bad way. He may not even care.
Any chance we could get a Mebuki chapter? The premise could be something like she finds out what's going on with Sakura, and attempts to convince Naruto to stop, only to end up being seduced by him. Or Kizashi's libido has sharply declined, and she's tempted after coming across Naruto and Sakura or something. There could be a variety of scenario's that lead Mebuki to Naruto.
Just a couple of ideas. If you aren't interested in including Mebuki, that's cool too.
Such an odd mix of intense filthy debatchery and sweet pure love. Got to hand it to you, man. You blended the two together amazing well. Hinata being incredibly terrified to admit her secret fetish for fear of being hated seemed extremely in-character for her, despite the source material never touching that specific area.
Porn that makes you feel is so rare these days, and I’m glad you’re one of the ones that can pull it off. Great job as always.
Of course, that’s not to say I don’t enjoy the moments where Naruto is more of a harsh Dom to other girls, but NaruHina really does require that sweetness angle to make it feel legitimate.
Heres hoping for that fully mind break chapter sometime in the next handful of chapters or so!
nice chap. i usually dont like hinata, but these last two chaps are great.
also "sakura 2 and 3" yes please! or some more scenes with Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke.
sakura is my favorite girl by FAR! and id love any you add of her :D.
but whatever you write. ill be here to read it :)
Damn, I loved how submissive Hinata is.
I think someone has already asked to see Kurenai, but I thought of what I think is a decent way to incorporate her.
It would have to take place before Naruto and Hinata have kids.
Kurenai could come to ask Hinata to take care of Mirai, reason being maybe her and Anko have a prior arrangement. Hinata would say she couldn't because she too had something to attend to(could be a clan thing or something with Hanabi).
So she suggests Naruto being free. Kurenai is reluctant, but Hinata insists because she wants him to have some experience handling kids before they have some of their own. Reluctantly agreeing, Kurenai gives Naruto a long list of what to do and how. Naruto laughs and says he got this, Kurenai leaves after he convinces her.
Once she comes back she notices Naruto is a natural with kids. Mirai becoming extremely attached to him after just the one day.
Seeing this, Naruto becomes her go-to babysitter for Mirai. By proxy Kurenai becoming closer to him as well. One day, Kurenai comes home early only to find Naruto having sex with Hinata or Anko seeing as they are both close to Kurenai. As they do the do, Naruto complains saying they have to be quiet seeing as Mirai is a sleep.
Kurenai just stands there overwhelmed. Never having seen one of her closest friend/student in such a way is aroused. Her repressed urges slowly begin to rise to the forefront of her mind. She slowly leaves once again in the distraction coming back later after they're done.
She continues to ask Naruto to help babysitting, subconsciously hoping to see Naruto in the act again. Sure enough it happens again. She gives in and gets aroused setting him in the act. She tries to hide as she pleasures herself, until Naruto catches her after dismissing whoever was his partner was this time. Finally Kurenai gives on to her temptation and kisses him fiercely and she becomes yet another conquest for Naruto.
Damn, didn't intend for this to be so long. I just want to see some Kurenai and Naruto action...
Possibly one of the best stories on this site, just please don’t flip it to whatever happens to almost all storys go through, like flipping it to sasuke or making naruto a girl “shudders”, but more importantly your doing an amazing job and I hope to see more.
Wow, a different style once again.
More of a teasing chapter. Very much a talking one.
I can see why you would make this and post it earlier over on FFN.
I think it's a hell of a tease though and I hope there is a Hinata 2 very soon.
I'll stay tuned for next saturday.
This is a great story. It's good to see Naruto being the king for once.
That was a surprisingly sweet chapter! Also, I think there's a bigger audience for NGE smut than you might think. Just put out some of your ideas and we'll tell you what we think of them.
That was fucking adorable and sweet and perverse as all hell and I love it. I know I’ve said it before, but I really love how you handle NaruHina in the fic. It’s so rare to find good NaruHina smut like that. Really glad she got her own chapter after all this time.
Great chapter m8. I like how you have naruto be firm and demanding but also gentle and caring when it came to hinata. I'm also curious about how naruto "trained" hinata and how their first time together went. As for the milfs part, I guess the only ones you can do at the moment without Edo Tensei would be Tsunade obviously, Kurenai, and mabe even adult Hanabi and Moegi. I'm assuming the milfs that would fall into the Edo Tensei category would be Mikoto, Kushina, Mito, and Konan if she counts. Ultimately it's up to you on the way you handle it. But great work so far m8
Great chapter. Even though I would have loved to see their actual first time (unless you have already done it and don't remember it.) I do like this insight into both of their characters. Humanising Naruto really helps the overall story.
For the Yandere character or someone who can just keep up with Naruto a good option could Tayuya if you go with the whole fan canon about her being an Uzumaki. Karin could also work out and you can also play with the idea that Naruto is projecting his anger for Sakura (most likely before he wins her) onto Karin because of her obsession with Sasuke.
As for the MILFs. Well if you don't like yhe whole Edo Tensei+Rinne Rebirth route that brought back Madara, then honestly I don't think there is anything else. You might have to start fishing around in other anime universes. Could just go crazy and have Naruto come accross the Dragon Balls, make a wish, and then Whis or one of Zenos's Angels just shows up to confiscate them since this is the wrong universe.
A very good chapter, the truth Hinata was not my favorite character of the series, but over time began to be my favorite.
I hope more of Kushina, Tsunade and if possible to future Himawari.
Another couple idea that I would like is a Fem Kyuubi something that I would like, there are not many stories of this type of couple.
And to revive the MILFS, this is difficult, if it has to be by method of the series itself. If it were for other methods yes, but I can not think of one.
Keep up the good work.
incredible chapter, hot and very telling, part of it I'm sure is that hinata is my favorite naruto girl. the way that naruto is slowly truly owning hinata yet as much as she wants to give in she is still fighting herself till she gave him what he wants. both in allowing him to work for her and to effectively allow naruto to turn her into a proper Uzumaki. by his standards. to expose her self fully to him. it's a perfect dom/sub relationship with care on both sides.
This latest chapter is amazing though I thought it would’ve been Naruto actually taking Hinata’s virginity still I enjoyed it very much thanks for the update
I feel a little sad for the attendant that she’ll never get any. Before I read she won’t be satisfied I thought maybe some other guy would fulfill her needs but I guess not. Good story as always and I gave you a follow on ffnet.
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