Is this Kushina real or is it just a figment of Naruto's imagination? Because if she isn't real, he can fuck her all he wants with no concequences.

Damn, man. You’ve gotta do more Kushina. My preference for lemons usually isn’t the Naruto is a sex god who breaks every woman in the series, (though I do like mindbreak just not the sex god) but you write it really well. The teasing especially is great, though I hope it leads up to something good slowly. This reminds me a lot of God of Fertility in the slow build, though that one had loli which I’m not too much a fan of. 

Excellent chapters
Fabulous story
The truth you overcome with each chapter.
I hope to see another chapter with Sarada or Hanabi.
Will Shion or Shizuka be in the future?
Keep it up.
Luck

To BigE2955

you really got some nerve saying some ignorant shit. Of course you have a problem with this fic since your boyfriend sasuke is being cuckold and this is a naruto harem fic. Seriously man? Your whole comment was pathetic and hypocritical at the same time. If this story had sasuke instead of naruto you would’ve already fapped to it. But hey that’s nothing new coming from a 21 year old basement bottom dweller making money off of Naruto fanfics using mommy’s internet. Seriously man your profile, and biography on HentaiFoundry screams “hypocrisy”

Good chapter bro

I think there are other places besides AFF that would like Eva smut. Have you ever heard of The Fanfiction Forum?

Nicely done.

Has anybody here ever read a blond mother lover it’s a Naru/Kushi Naru/Miko ntr fic that’s really good and about 8-9 decently lengthy chapters. Also well done on this chapter it’s fun to see Kushina willing to cross that line for Naruto

Great chapter,

All hail character development chapters. Seeing how you seem to be expending the fic and trying to do more. Are you planning on adding girls from other villages? Or are you keeping it for another fic?

I do also appreciate the references to the backstory of this fic. We have seen Naruto dabble in NTR and take wives? But we have yet to know what exactly happens when they go back to their husbands/bfs.

Sakura 2 or a Sakura/Sarada chapter is beyond overdue at this point. The fact that your fic reminds me of Sahara Wataru's doujins also helps with that.

I don't think we have had a chapter where a girl comes to Naruto purely for sex instead of him seeking them out or seducing them. I do also wonder how this Naruto deals with the eventual fangirls that comr with his status of Hero of Konoha and Saviour of the Ninja World.

Eh. Fair enough regarding the Mebuki thing. Truthfully, I don't think she's that hot either. But she's not someone you typically see in smut fics. Also...not gonna lie, Sakura's reaction would probably be pretty fucking hilarious haha. She treated Naruto like complete shit the majority of the time for years. And not only has he turned her into his slut/mistress, but her mother too. It's like the best kind of karma. 

Anyway, no big deal. It was just an idea anyway. Have you considered including women from the non-canon arcs and movies? Like Koyuki Kazehana for example. By the end of her movie, she was pretty attached to Naruto. And that was in a universe where he wasn't like he is in this one. It's implied that she goes on to star in Jiraiya's Icha Icha movie after the fact. That could be a point of interest if you were so inclined, i.e. Jiraiya coerces Naruto into appearing in the film with promises of teaching him jutsu during the time-skip. If not, that's fine too. It's your story afterall.

While I find the taboo between Naruto and Kushina to be interesting, I actually find these chapters to be a refreshing change so far. While the hardcore lemons are excellent, the slower, more teasing, chapters are equally as good. And while my interest in this dreamworld is still piqued, but I can wait for the reveal. 

Thanks for the pretty conistent updates man.

Are you going to work on any of the other stories you've written? Or work on a new one?

This may be my favorite chapter yet narrowly eclipsing Hyuuga 2. I like your Hinata, you managed to make her perverted and depraved enough to be the perfect partner for Naruto without even changing her canon personality that much. 

Obviously maledom/femsub is your thing, or at least with this story, but would you ever consider writing a fic with femdom? Could be F/F or F/M idc, just really like the way you portray dom/sub relationships and I'm into both ways so that would be awesome to see.

really great chapter, though the choking thing really isn't my kink you managed to porta it really well as part of a loving dom/sub relationship between naruto and hinata. very few people who write any kind of BDSM involve that or even the mention of aftercare that you did with the plans naruto had latter and the pure trust hinata has for naruto just made the whole thing hotter. 

Clap Clap Clap Clap that was simply beyond words sniper one of the most vivid awesome lemons i've ever read and of the fact that you brought the pure love and trust naruto and hinata had for each other along with the awesome sex to go with it was just icing on the freshly baked cake that was your chapter just clinches it man just wow sniperjoe wow you should try braching out to hentai-foundry as well with your works too it's good to get another chapter from you too this was an amazing lemonade you wrote.

Its always good to see another upload from you.

Also feel free to do what you will with what I suggested for Kurenai. If you feel it wont fit what you have for the story, then by all means don't use it. I won't hound you about it because I love how thought out your work is. Keep up the good work.