Shit. Yeah, I can't say that I blame you for losing interest in writing this. Granted, we readers sure as hell aren't, but I can imagine that it has gotten a bit stale for you at this point. I'm not sure what your word count is up to at this point, but I'm sure it's currently sitting at 100k words. That's a lot for a smut fic, albeit possibly the best I've ever read. 

I do hope that you continue this, even if you have to include more chapters such as these to rekindle your interest. If not, I hope to see a couple of loose ends tied up before you possibly stop. Like Tsunade and Kushina in particular, even if it's merely one more chapter each. The Tsunade plot line was really intruiging, since she essentially sent him on this path. And I've already expressed my interest in the Kushina plotline, so I won't get into that again. 

But this was an interesting look into how others percieve this situation. Although the idea that Naruto is becoming a dictator is a bit of a stretch. Whilst he has been selfish to some extent in this, it has never been at the cost of Konoha as a whole. The closest he came to such a thing was during the Hyuga and Inuzuka chapters, but even then it was really more for the good of Konoha and it's citizens than any self interest. And it's clearly been stated that Shinobi prefer civilian women anyway, rather than Kunoichi. So they really shouldn't be as salty about the situation as they apparently are. Especially since he hasn't even cucked anyone aside from Sasuke, who made the stakes for their wager to begin with. As far as we know anyway. 

On another note, I found your LOZ stories. Damn, I had no idea that you wrote those as well. I'd love to see Hero Breeding Tales possibly be continued in the future. It's probably one of the better LOZ fics on here. 

Anyway, thanks for the update on how you're feeling about this story man. 

Sorry about the first wall of text I sent up I got pretty excited and rambled one thing I just wanted to point out as an error would be that it's not the 3rd great shinobi war it was the 4th the 3rd would be the one that Tsumes generation fought in with the Sandaime leading  the village. I Can honestly say I don't enjoy this sight much but your story is here and its one of a few reasons I personally even search here and while I do enjoy this story I would not be adverse to you starting another though I'd prefer this were wrapped up or kept on the side with an update now and again though that's ultimately up to you as the author. I do understand that a new story prompts a reinvigorated hype as its new it'll garner more reviews because there is less to go back and reread and you don't know where the story will head which leads to us the readers drawing conclusions and hyping the next chapter so we can read and learn more of the story and the world you create and shape in it. Oh shit sorry for this new wall of text.

I love the smut of this story ever since I first discovered it but I loved chapter 26 so much I like the inclusion of what the rest of the world or atleast those who hold power and influence in Fire Country are beginning to perceive Narutos accumulation of power with the women he's collected through the words of Koharu and Homura.

I've always been a big fan of Military dictators and Paternal Autocratic governments in fiction and history as I find them to be rather fascinating in their goals, beliefs, and therefore how they justify their actions. Despite this being smut I saw Naruto as essentially a commander accumulating a great deal of power, popularity, and influence through his actions whether intentional or not he is becoming a figure that can influence the nation at large and possibly other countries should he which it. Whether or not he wishes to admit it his actions have been rather autocratic though he's more of a Paternal Autocrat wishing only for what he perceives  as the best for his people he's the father of the people protecting them from both those who would endanger them from the outside and from their own actions.

 I like the realisation and self questioning of whether  or not he is a dictator at the end which he is a dictator in a long line of dictators for Konoha but it's his actions which define whether he is a benevolent dictator for his people benefit or simply a lustful megalomaniac bent on his own self pleasure no matter the cost. I think he's the former personally he has been somewhat selfish but he's never done something that he believes will harm the village and the people he's been dutifully loyal in his goals for his home it's just a matter of whether  or not his power will corrupt him in the end.

Something I'd like to point at though for Naruto is his "crossing the Rubicon" moment is over he's past the point of backing down he can't back track at this point he can't even resign or retire early cause it'll cause upheaval in the rank and file. At this point for his opposition whether they want to admit it or not better to have him in power than risk a military revolt which could lead to a coup or perhaps a civil war that even Naruto can't fully control or consent against.

I certainly hope you do continue this story, though I can understand gradually losing interest. This is easily one of the best five I’ve seen on this site, and this chapter was no exception. I was absorbed in the storytelling going on and how a world like the kind you’ve set up in the lemons works. Especially with that last bit about Naruto’s strength and the repercussions of it. 

While I will still read any fics you put out on here, I do hope you end up sticking with this one, even if it’s only a chapter every few weeks or so. I feel there’s still a lot of potential for both plot and lemons left to be had, and I look forward to seeing where it hopefully goes from here. 

hey sorry i havent reviewed in a while i just got caught up i would like to thank you for continuing your story it is by far my favorite lemon work i have read i hope you keep writing but dont feel pressured to only work on this you are very talented if you have another project to work on go ahead just come back to this when you have some inspiration

Lotta walls of text in this. Also, I think you repeated some lines a little bit.

I've always quite enjoyed this story. Your descriptive language is always very fun and it's utterly shameless in what it's trying to do, which is part of what makes it so great. It doesn't hold back.

In regards to waning interest, that's a shame to hear but not too surprising, you've been working on it for some time. If you give it a proper ending and wrap things up, I think it'd be something to be proud of.

In regards to lacking attention, honestly, that's just the thing with this site. It's a fairly low traffic site. You should post it on Fanfiction.net or AO3 if you want more attention I think.

Your story is very good with story time line. But you ruin it with Kushina chapters. I always waitting  Tsunade and 14 years arcs. But you decide it with Kushina alive. Man, how dissappoited I am.

I'll admit, I like the story elements probably just a bit more than I like the smut.  I like the smut, too, but in smutty stories that are really plot heavy, the smut is like a reward for sticking with it, and is more satisfying for it.

still waiting on for the following

Chōchō Akimichi

Hanabi Hyūga

Sarada Uchiha

Tenten

Temari

Moegi Kazamatsuri

Samui

Ayame

Tsume Inuzuka

Hana Inuzuka

Mabui

Mebuki Haruno

  okay so i would like to see the following girls in a showdo clone gangbag or something 

As I mentioned in my other revuew on another site I love this chapter and the direction you are going with this story. Honestly I think it really shows how much you matured as a writer since the beginning.

And you are right about this site dying, the UI is horribly outdated and makes it very hard for new fandoms to thrive. The absence of a search bar itself is an outrage.

I would strongly advise you to migrate to HentaiFoundry(dot)com as soon as possible. Your Naruto centered story would he very welcome there and the community is a lot more active there.

Regarding this fic in particular. Honestly? I think it is getting to them time for you to finish up. Narratively, it wouldn't make sense for Naruto to reakise he is begin to resemble a dictator, but keeping having sex with powerful Kunoichi. Maybe finish up a couple of plot threads, add 1 or 2 girls and then finish things nicely. You can always save your ideas for another fic.

One thing I would appreciate for the future is if you tried having longer chapters maybe, even if it results in a shorter story overall. And maybe focus more on individual relationships. Smaller Harems probably? I am personally a big fan of NaruHina and feel like we didn't actually see much of them in this fic. Naruto "winning over" Sakura could also be a pretty nice storyline when fleshed out. Where as instead of raping,mind breaking, and then making her his cum dump it is more a gradual process (maybe starting from when they are genin or he comes back from his training trip)

Hell I don't know if you know about BigE2955, but he has two main series about Sasuke cuckolding Naruto (one where it gets out of handed and ends up being a Naruto bash, and another where  it is a mutual undsrstanding and everyone is happy) but I always wanted a Naruto version of those. It could even be involving another couple (Ino/Sai, Choji/Karui, Shika/Temari are possible candidates). You already have a foot in that territory with how you treated Ino in this story so you would just have to make it go all the way.

Basically, I am saying that I would love to see you go from writing great smut with a bit of story, to a good story with great smut.

Hey, I love this story, and yes, there's a draught of quality het stories on this site and in general.

So when I read that it's demotivating that no-one reviews, I made an account specifically to tell you i like your story.

keep up the good work!

Honestly, I think this site is dying. Like, this is a site from the early-mid naughties, and it still looks the part. It lacks a lot of the functionality that one would expect from a site like this, and if you look at the younger fandoms, like RWBY, My Hero Academia, Zootopia, ETC...  there are little-to-no stories for any of them on this site. Most of them are using Hentai-Foundry, Archive of our Own, or other, more modern sites for their stories. Maybe it's time to look into moving on to greener pastures.

Still love this story, by the way, one of my absolute favorites on this entire site, and whatever you do, I can't wait to see what comes next.

very nice build up/aftermath. to me the build up and aftermath is more important than the actual porn. and the lack of it is the biggest criticism i can give you as a writer.

as to "starting a new fic" i am SO down for that :D 

maybe one where my girl sakura gets a happier ending than "chooses the wrong guy, then gets relegated to unloved-cumdump"

So when will Kushina actually get to properly suck her son's cock?