I've always quite enjoyed this story. Your descriptive language is always very fun and it's utterly shameless in what it's trying to do, which is part of what makes it so great. It doesn't hold back.

In regards to waning interest, that's a shame to hear but not too surprising, you've been working on it for some time. If you give it a proper ending and wrap things up, I think it'd be something to be proud of.

In regards to lacking attention, honestly, that's just the thing with this site. It's a fairly low traffic site. You should post it on Fanfiction.net or AO3 if you want more attention I think.

Your story is very good with story time line. But you ruin it with Kushina chapters. I always waitting  Tsunade and 14 years arcs. But you decide it with Kushina alive. Man, how dissappoited I am.

I'll admit, I like the story elements probably just a bit more than I like the smut.  I like the smut, too, but in smutty stories that are really plot heavy, the smut is like a reward for sticking with it, and is more satisfying for it.

still waiting on for the following

Chōchō Akimichi

Hanabi Hyūga

Sarada Uchiha

Tenten

Temari

Moegi Kazamatsuri

Samui

Ayame

Tsume Inuzuka

Hana Inuzuka

Mabui

Mebuki Haruno

  okay so i would like to see the following girls in a showdo clone gangbag or something 

As I mentioned in my other revuew on another site I love this chapter and the direction you are going with this story. Honestly I think it really shows how much you matured as a writer since the beginning.

And you are right about this site dying, the UI is horribly outdated and makes it very hard for new fandoms to thrive. The absence of a search bar itself is an outrage.

I would strongly advise you to migrate to HentaiFoundry(dot)com as soon as possible. Your Naruto centered story would he very welcome there and the community is a lot more active there.

Regarding this fic in particular. Honestly? I think it is getting to them time for you to finish up. Narratively, it wouldn't make sense for Naruto to reakise he is begin to resemble a dictator, but keeping having sex with powerful Kunoichi. Maybe finish up a couple of plot threads, add 1 or 2 girls and then finish things nicely. You can always save your ideas for another fic.

One thing I would appreciate for the future is if you tried having longer chapters maybe, even if it results in a shorter story overall. And maybe focus more on individual relationships. Smaller Harems probably? I am personally a big fan of NaruHina and feel like we didn't actually see much of them in this fic. Naruto "winning over" Sakura could also be a pretty nice storyline when fleshed out. Where as instead of raping,mind breaking, and then making her his cum dump it is more a gradual process (maybe starting from when they are genin or he comes back from his training trip)

Hell I don't know if you know about BigE2955, but he has two main series about Sasuke cuckolding Naruto (one where it gets out of handed and ends up being a Naruto bash, and another where  it is a mutual undsrstanding and everyone is happy) but I always wanted a Naruto version of those. It could even be involving another couple (Ino/Sai, Choji/Karui, Shika/Temari are possible candidates). You already have a foot in that territory with how you treated Ino in this story so you would just have to make it go all the way.

Basically, I am saying that I would love to see you go from writing great smut with a bit of story, to a good story with great smut.

Hey, I love this story, and yes, there's a draught of quality het stories on this site and in general.

So when I read that it's demotivating that no-one reviews, I made an account specifically to tell you i like your story.

keep up the good work!

Honestly, I think this site is dying. Like, this is a site from the early-mid naughties, and it still looks the part. It lacks a lot of the functionality that one would expect from a site like this, and if you look at the younger fandoms, like RWBY, My Hero Academia, Zootopia, ETC...  there are little-to-no stories for any of them on this site. Most of them are using Hentai-Foundry, Archive of our Own, or other, more modern sites for their stories. Maybe it's time to look into moving on to greener pastures.

Still love this story, by the way, one of my absolute favorites on this entire site, and whatever you do, I can't wait to see what comes next.

very nice build up/aftermath. to me the build up and aftermath is more important than the actual porn. and the lack of it is the biggest criticism i can give you as a writer.

as to "starting a new fic" i am SO down for that :D 

maybe one where my girl sakura gets a happier ending than "chooses the wrong guy, then gets relegated to unloved-cumdump"

So when will Kushina actually get to properly suck her son's cock?

Fair enough about the non-Kunoichi rule. There are still plenty of potential candidates to possibly explore if you were inclined. Kurenai was brought up a while back, and that has potential. Somone that I had honestly forgotten about, due to her not having a prominent role in the story, is Yugao Uzuki. She's a member of ANBU who isn't used very often. I'm pretty sure she was only around Itachi's age too, so she woulnd't be drastically older than Naruto. She, like Kurenai, had a lover that was murdered. And since she's in ANBU, she's probably pretty repressed. It would kinda be Naruto's duty as Hokage to see to that, especiallly since she's been shown to occasionally act as a Guard for the Hokage.

Anyway, I'm really digging these slowly drawn out Kushina chapters. It's clear that things are escalating, but it's kinda nice that it didn't devolve into straight fucking right away. 

I found the perfect image to explin what could be the solution in between Kushina's new desires and not cheating on Minato because Naruto respect his father. Here it is! http://pictures.hentai-foundry.com/v/Vestrille/171928/Vestrille-171928-Naruto_003.jpg

I don't think Naruto's the only one with blue balls after this chapter. Also, TFF has a discord channel. Hawk's on there and it's much more active if you wanna join.

Very good chapter.
It's always refreshing to read some fic with Kushina. hehe
Waiting for the continuation.

Fuck, do not leave us like that, the truth despite the fact that there is little action, is very well written that catches the reader and leaves him wanting more to end, the truth all the chapters of Kushina has this effect. Leave wanting more and I can not wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work.

Daaaaaaaamn! Smoking chapter. Don't be leaving us hanging.