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Reviews for Naruto's Best Training Session Kitsukage Style

By : NH23aqp
  • From kole on April 24, 2022

    yeah it was a letdown.

     

    so many unused women.

     

    few chapters

     

     


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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2015
    Haku (No)
    Kurotsuchi (No)
    T_T

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  • From AFFModerator on October 17, 2015

    Please correct your disclaimer.


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  • From AFFModerator on October 04, 2015

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  • From ANON - Reviewer on September 27, 2015
    Seriously dude, have you ever heard of spacing your paragraphs?!

    This story of yours is nearly impossible to read simply because you didn't bother to space your sentences apart from each other, because of which they are all cumbered together in a huge mess that is very disorientating to even look at, let alone READ!

    It needs to be fixed.

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  • From ANON - Ryne on September 27, 2015
    You need to edit this. It's just a block of text now.
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  • From Rowin on September 26, 2015
    I think they messed with your story i began reading it the other night and when i reloaded it yesterday everything was jumbled together i'm pretty sure it wasn't like that when you originally posted might want to take a look at it.
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  • From Gemini-Spark on September 25, 2015
    I think it would have been nice to See the talk beetwen naruto and kushina
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  • From Gemini-Spark on September 25, 2015
    do you like incest if yes could you somehow bring Kushina(narutos mom),Mikoto(Sasukes mom)and Hinatas mom back to live you could make them bi and let them have sex with Naruto and Hinata
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  • From BBWulf on September 25, 2015
    Pretty good thus far. Could be a bit more descriptive, but it's certainly not bad.
    As for who I'd like to see next; Mebuki Haruno, because Sakura's mom. XD
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  • From snake1980 on September 24, 2015
    i have to say for the 4 chapters its pretty good. looking forward to see who the next girl will be. I might have a idea for a request.
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  • From joeparas1988 on September 24, 2015
    It kinda gets repetitive with only Naruto and a bunch of girls.

    Would be curious to see some swinging to even the balance. Thought this story might go that way in the beginning with Kurenai there, or even with the Inuzuka. So maybe some partner swapping with Kurenai/Naruto Asuna/Hinata? Doesn't have to be them, but something to that affect.

    I'm just not a fan in general of Naruto being able to shag other women whenever he likes while his partner is only ever seemingly doing so with other women.
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  • From lordamnesia on September 24, 2015
    This story is super fun! I love that it's literally the girls grabbing Naruto and Hinata, not the other way around. As for a suggested next, Ino or Tenten!
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