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Reviews for Moving Forward Fangs First

By : Blackkitten23
  • From lara5170 on September 17, 2016

    Thank you for a great story. I really enjoy stories that show Naruto as powerful, intelligent and attractive.


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  • From ANON - rose on December 06, 2015
    please update soon thank you
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  • From smint45 on December 05, 2015
    that was amazing!!! Great chapter!!! Hope Itachi and Genma will be alright^^ See you soon!!!
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  • From ANON - smint45 on November 02, 2015
    So finally minato and kushina see reason^^ I'm glad!!! Can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Antoinette on October 29, 2015
    I loved this story and how it's playing out. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From smint45 on October 02, 2015
    Really nice chapter!! I really liked Sasuke fainting^^ That was fun!!!! Thanks a lot for the update!!!!
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  • From ANON - rose on October 01, 2015
    please update soon please thank you
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  • From ANON - rose on August 29, 2015
    please update soon thank you
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  • From smint45 on August 29, 2015
    Great so they finally know^^ Thanks a lot for the update see you again soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2015
    Second Grammar Nazi moment. Spell check. Use it please. If yours isn't working for whatever reason, please find someone to read over your work. Thank You.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2015
    OKAY. Story is interesting, but I'm having a grammar nazi moment here. When a person begins to speak, it is like the start of a new sentence, even if it's in the middle of one. This means CAPITAL LETTERS for the start of the first word. Auto Correct doesn't always pick that up so YOU, the author, need to watch for it. Please do. The lack is distracting from what would otherwise be a fun read.
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  • From smint45 on July 25, 2015
    That was great!!! Can't wait for the fight to come in the next chapter^^ Wonder if the others will finally realize what he is!!!! See you again soon!!
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  • From ANON - rose on July 24, 2015
    update soon please thank you
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  • From ANON - rose on July 13, 2015
    update soon please thank you
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  • From smint45 on July 04, 2015
    I'm happy narutos mates are pregnant^^ Can't wait to see the babys^^ See you again soon!!!
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