Reviews for The Banishing ActBy : Blackkitten23 |
oh, this is not good
I don't mean the story, the story sounds brilliant!
Wow, such an awesome story! I will admit some of the animes I haven't seen but that didn't stop me from reading it, is there a sequel? Anyways keep up the awesome work & don't let anyone tell you that your stories are bad, they are just jealous xD
I liked the story in fact I loved it. What I hated the most was Sakura and the Hinata in this story. Both of them were sluts. And I couldn't even stand it. I'm glad that Naruto survived that curse, as always he finds a way to get out of certain situations. Naruto and Neji is a perfect pairing, I love it. Choji and Sasuke... hmmm.. I would have thought Sasuke would have paired with Shikamaru. After all Choji is not really the best candidate for a yaoi pairing. At least that is my opinion, a yaoi pairing has to have good looking anime guys. There shouldn't be any flaws in their looks either. However this pairing I guess was alright. Keep up the good work, please update soon.
Love this story! You did pretty good with the crossover parts; normally I don't like to read crossovers but this was awesome! Can't wait till the next part!
I've never read a full crossover. I'll only read the good interesting parts because your writing is awesome!
Really love this one is not ended either. *pout* not nice.
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