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Reviews for Control

By : intricateorchid
  • From EntityLvr on March 18, 2018

    More please!


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  • From ANON - Huni on April 24, 2016
    Man, this story is my favorite that I've read! It does a great job with the BDSM scenes, and I would love to read more. I'm doing my best to keep this readable, but holy hot sticks, this is such a great story! I can't think of enough adjectives to properly describe this. My only problem is that there isn't more! I keep checking this story regularly because of how well it is written. There's no parts where I think, "oh, that could have been done better." I'm just left with this giddy awe of not only the words used, but the content of it is and how well representative it is of the BDSM community. Please oh please keep writing, I just love this story so much!!
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  • From ANON - h fb uh JJ on September 12, 2015
    When will you update the story it is quite good
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on August 24, 2015
    I just found this story while browsing, and I gotta say, it was wonderful. I felt kinda bad for Sasuke in this last chapter cause he feels like he's getting left behind by Naruto and Sakura. It's like he's emotionally stunted in certain areas. Poor little tink tink. Can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From Kays3r on June 17, 2015
    Love it! Cannot wait for the update.
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  • From ANON - asalea on June 17, 2015
    It's cool to have background story, sasuke seems more human. Im looking forward the next chapter!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on June 07, 2015
    I'm into this. I'm writing several BDSM stories and I'm very interested in how others write the scene, so I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - asalea on June 03, 2015
    Naruto fandom counts few of good bdsm fanfics, Im glad you started it like this. Sasuke is in character and I laughed how he marked sex as his limit, its so him! I hope you will continue. Thanks for sharing :)
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