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Reviews for Exhibit N

By : AvenaSativa
  • From ANON - HBWD on March 20, 2015
    Omfg, I am so in love with this story!! *makes grabby hands*

    -HBWD
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  • From ANON - taffy on March 10, 2015
    Love this fic. Can't wait for the next xhapter, I'm wondering where this story will end up :)
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  • From DagA on January 22, 2015
    Well, I'm not into tall, muscular man with huge... everything ;) I also never liked reading about male masturbation or exhibitionism, so it was a big no no for me... Except you kept me so intrigued that I just couldn't stop reading... and I really enjoyed your story so far! I love the detailed descriptions, making my imagination work to the point I felt I was there :) The plot is interesting and quite unique. The characters, despite strange events, seem so real. Last part was a bit exaggerated, but it was hilarious at the same time so I liked it too. Can't wait for next chapters!
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  • From Adoredra93 on January 17, 2015
    Beautiful and a magnificent plan on Sasuke's part. I had no idea what he was going to do until he acted even with your previous hints. I was in disbelief when the main action of the chapter occurred, but it made so much sense. Literally, a taste of his own medicine (you can totally steal that cliche).

    Masterful use of description with immaculate grammar as usual.

    You still keep the suspense strong as we don't know Naruto's end-goal (if there is one) and his logic other than he is a shower and a grower. At the same time, it would be nice to have Sasuke take a closer look at Naruto's life in a manner similar to Naruto's attention to Sasuke. Obviously, it wouldn't be completely analogous, but Naruto clearly has an expansive list of extracurricular activities and a group of friends to use as reference for Sasuke.

    Thank you so much for updating your fanfiction regularly, and I hope you can keep that feature going as long as possible.

    Relating to contact you mention in the previous chapter, if needed, you could always use the e-mail attached to this account in terms of personal messaging. I am unaware of a PM system with adult-fanfiction.org, but fanfiction.net has a system if you also use that database for posting fan fictions.

    I wish you the best, and may your muse never leave you.


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  • From Adoredra93 on January 13, 2015
    I made an account just to review this fanfiction. I absolutely love it, well, to be precise it's more like how you described Sasuke's remembrance of what happened at the movie theater. It is stuck in my head.
    I can honestly say I have read a lot of fanfiction, and this one is quite unique.

    You have excellent character descriptions physically, especially with Naruto and his muscles.

    In terms of preference, I enjoyed the movie theater scene a lot more than the bus scene. I didn't like how people were actually reacting to Naruto's indecency. I just want to be him and Sasuke's thing.
    I suppose that is the point of exhibitionism, but I do not fully understand the concept. I envisioned it as people sending nude pictures.

    I would be lying if I said I didn't want Sasuke and Naruto to get together, but I feel you are leaning that way. I believe Sasuke's belief that this couldn't be coincidence rang a bell. Also, the fact that Sasuke's first thought was how it would fit into someone's mouth. Well, I hope so because I immediately envisioned him blowing Naruto in the back of the theater. Icha Icha Paradise version I suppose.

    Please continue writing and updating your fanfiction.
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