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Reviews for Innocence

By : Night_Being
  • From Ronin on February 13, 2015
    This is the first Itachi/Sakura story I ever read, and I really like it. The pairing seems organic, and well-crafted. Excellent writing, and some very stimulating sex scenes as well. Keep it up!
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  • From NTheRuf on January 19, 2015
    OMG HONESTLY THIS IS LIKE THE 5TH TIME I'VE HAD TO START MY WHOLE REVIEW OVER!! MY SURFACE KEPT DELETING ALL MY MATERIAL AND JUST NOW FROM MY LAPTOP I COMPLETED MY REVIEW AND EVEN HAD IT POSTED AND THEN REMEMBERED I WANTED TO MAKE ONE MORE COMMENT AND TRIED TO EDIT AND DELETED INSTEAD!!!
    SO FOR HOPEFULLY FOR THE LAST ATTEMPT HERE.... WOW!!! YOU ARE SO TOTALLY AWESOME!!! I am a die hard SasuSaku fan! I only found Fanimation and Fanfiction a few weeks ago and am totally hooked!! I spend every free moment reading stories or watching videos of SasuSaku! And I have to tell you that while Itachi is my #2 Favorite character in the series... I haven't been able to enjoy any stories or videos where Sakura has a relationship with him. I have enjoyed for just pure lust reading some stories and videos where Sakura is captured and raped by the Akasuki. But My heart has been with Sakura and Sasuke.
    YOU HAVE ME TOTALLY SOLD ON ITACHI IN THIS STORY!! I'm like "oh well Sasuke... You snooze you lose!!" ITACHI'S ABILITIES TO EFFECT WOMEN OMG! I am totally hot for Him like never before!!! He TRUMPS SASUKE ALL THE WAY IN THIS STORY! SASUKE CAN'T TOUCH HIM! And your concern about expressing Sakura's agony when Itachi took off and after returning to the village was done exquisetly!! Believe me take if from a woman who has experienced the exact same thing FIRST HAND IN REAL LIFE!! Only with one person but I've spent 10 years hating that person for leaving because everyone else pales in compareson!!
    So I am just now finished with ch 16 and am IN AGONY waiting for more!!! There is so much you can still do with this story!! I am hoping that you continue with this story the way the manga continued!!! Endless!!! lol There is Itachi's kinkyness to dive into with Sakura learning to Submitt on an even deeper level!!! And I don't know what your thoughts are about Sasuke but if Itachi does die in your story then Sasuke is the only one who can hope to fill his shoes!!! And of course Sakura is the only one who can save him! And then there is all the Angst of her being with Itachi... And with the Gengjustu Itachi can SHOW SASUKE 1st hand every moment of Sakuras' surrender if he so chooses!! What kind of torment would that make for Sasuke and Sakura in the bedroom afte4r Itachi's death??? The posibilities are endless!!! I love the way she loses total control of her body and mind the most!!! ONLY UCHIHA'S CAN MASTER THAT EFFECT UPON THEIR MATE!! AND IT'S ONLY REALLY HOT WHEN THE UCHIHA LOVES THE WOMAN, CAUSE THEN HE IS ONLY TORTURING HIMSELF AS WELL!!
    So in the desperate words of Sakura.... "PLEASE DON'T EVER STOP!!" And I WOULD DIE TO SEE THIS STORY IN VIDEO FORM!!! OMG!!
    So thanks for the GREAT ARTICULATION AND EXPRESSION OF YOUR THOUGHTS!!! YOU'VE MADE A FAN!!!
    P.S. AND ABOUT THE ENGLISH.... I'VE LOVE THE WAY YOUR ENGLISH IS... IT'S PART OF THE NUISANCE OF THE STORY! WITHOUT IT WOULD BE LIKE WATCHING NARUTO IN ENGLISH SUB!! YUCK AND NO NOT EVER!!! DON'T CHANGE A THING!! I HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU SOON BOTH IN STORY AND EMAIL!! PEACE
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  • From ANON - astarte_gore on January 18, 2015
    Wow just wow. As soon I started too read this I was hooked. I need more. This story is amazing
    I can't wait to read the rest of the story! !
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  • From ANON - irune1981 on November 27, 2014
    Loved this chapter. Although it's hard to explain the feelings Sakura might be feeling, you did it wonderful!!!!!!!!!!

    I'll keep waiting for another chapter. Thanks a bunch for updating so soon.

    Waiting, your fan.
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  • From ANON - irune1981 on November 11, 2014
    OMG!!!!! Sorry if I didn't review earlier (and sorry for my english, 'cause I'm spanish). Since the first time I started reading the story, I felt myself lost in it. Wooohhh. I don't really know how to express it. It's fabolous, marvellous, ummh, what the fuck, I almost could feel all the mixed feelings they had myself. I got angry with them, cried with them, and yes, turned on with them (I raped savagely my husband after reading ch 8, or was it 9 and 10?)
    Nevermind, I NEED you to keep going on writting this story, otherwise, I'll hunt you down on your sleep ;) (kidding... or not). Anyway, you have my full respect as a writter.
    Waiting for an update, your fan.
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  • From ANON - Asphyxiated on October 16, 2014
    Hey! I really enjoy your writing. I have to be honest, I didn't have the patience to read the entire thing. I did however skim through some chapters, and I love your style. Keep up the good work :)
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  • From WonderMint on October 05, 2014
    I think they won me over. I wouldn't worry about them being out of character... after all, the situation has taken them so far out of their usual place that it hardly matters. I find their development to be believable enough, and certainly not too fast or arbitrary. I'm rooting for them to make it work! And hoping that Itachi manages to change his plans.
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