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By : SasuKushiFan
  • From ANON - guest on July 09, 2014
    hey can you put this story on ficwad webpage
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  • From ANON - jdksjahfskf on July 09, 2014
    good story man
    can you make a story in Genjustu world Sasuke and Kushina
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  • From ANON - hyest on July 09, 2014
    come one man bring one more Sasukushi story
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  • From ANON - guest 1993 on July 07, 2014
    can you bring genjustu world sasuke having affair with kushina uzumaki
    this would be great story
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  • From ANON - guest123 on July 07, 2014
    come on bring another sasukushi hot stories
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  • From ANON - guest on July 06, 2014
    can you make another Sasukushi stories
    you such a great lemon writer
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  • From ANON - guest2014 on July 01, 2014
    wow man you really make good hot story.
    can you make another one Sasukushi stories.
    Ignore haters
    I'm really big fan.
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  • From Darkbladerx666 on June 19, 2014
    I love this story, it's so rare to find this pairing especially one so well made. Just ignore the haters they just love to hate.

    Could you do a story set in the genjutsu world where Kushina is having an affair with Sasuke?
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  • From AFFModerator on May 30, 2014

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.


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  • From frix on May 28, 2014
    It's a pretty good story. It's original and decently written and paced. Though I feel the scene where she throws away her wedding ring is a bit too extreme for most people's taste. Moving on after Minato died is one thing but that's just cruel and heartless.

    Apart from that you might want to insert a scene break in between the different scenes. Right now there are sentences where you literally jump months ahead in the story without any proper indication that you did so, that is confusing. I don't think there is enough material to justify splitting it up in several chapters, but a few "XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX" in between them would clear things up a lot.

    Overal it's a pretty solid story, no spelling errors or grammatical errors either.

    People who dislike this have a problem with the pairing rather than the actual quality of the story. 8/10
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  • From teddy on May 28, 2014
    hey can you write a sasuke fucking Naruto wife hinata and his mom kushina in frot of Naruto say they love his cock
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2014
    So you have Kushina profess her love for a boy she met 2 hours go because he complimented her hair?
    I mean she said it to Naruto but he's her son, that's expected. This would've been a lot better if she never said that.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2014
    My god this is awesome.there's finally a stor out that doesn't just suck naruto's dick. Instead it's kushina sucking sasuke's dick we need more stories like this
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  • From ANON - SasukeLover on May 27, 2014
    Fucking hot. Sasuke is a fine young stud. We need more SasuKushi oneshots. Ignore the haters. They don't know that Sasuke is one of the best character ever created.
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  • From ANON - asggfnfg on May 27, 2014
    Fucking terrible
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