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Reviews for Demon's Dirty Dreams

By : MathiasBlue
  • From ANON - Wulf on May 07, 2015
    Lol, another great chapter. I quite like the vapire-like 'mist form' he can take. Well, his is smoke, not mist, but you get what I'm saying. XD I also lol'd pretty hard at the thought of Tenten crawling in circles tring to clean up the mess, but not succeeding because she keeps leeking more.
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  • From ANON - UnknownReader93 on May 07, 2015
    Oh great Mathias-sama, please upload more!!!!
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  • From ANON - RedFox on May 07, 2015
    This is great can wait for the next update

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    (Lord_Farsight and treantdeu) Awesome. i second that reviewers idea.
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  • From ANON - treantdeu on May 07, 2015
    i saw another review where the idea cam up to have naruto heal hint after her fight with nevi and decide to take payment. he then uses the method he did on tenets and asks who she loves. only to find out its him. that would be so awesome. especially he just changes her to be more confident and awesome. i second that reviewers idea. i hope naruto decides to make her his official girlfriend or something. be cool if he did not have to hypnotize her at all for sex. he just gives her the confidence to be stronger and to come to him or something. make her help him get girls or something.
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  • From ANON - treantdeu on May 07, 2015
    this is by far my favorite naruto story out there. I'm loving this. so please continue this amazing work.
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  • From ANON - Lord_Farsight on May 06, 2015
    Alright, kinky chapter.

    I have a few questions : how will Naruto manage to become Hokage without a moral compass? It'd pretty much put him on the same level as Danzo morally, and we both know it wouldn't really help him.

    Also, I find myself wondering exactly how old the characters are. I mean, the time period would hint at them being 12/13, but you mentionned Hinata's hair being splayed on the pillow, and Naruto seemed to be the same height as Tsunami, and that would imply that they are older. Clarify plz?

    Next, after Hinata's match with Neji, why not have Naruto find a way to heal her (maybe with Kurama's help?) and then, aroused by the place his hand is (on her chest, obviously) he decides to take a little payment for his service, and use the smoke on her again. Only, this timehe uses it like on Tenten and decides to ask her who she loves, to know who he's stealing her from. Just a suggestion though.

    I left my e-mail if you want to talk ^^
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on May 06, 2015
    Another awesome chapter. Loved the hypnotic ability of the smoke. I'm guessing Kin is next, love that he has a maid now. At some point he's going to get a house ... and maybe sell some of his collectibles.
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  • From ANON - naruhinalover20 on May 05, 2015
    Dude awesome chapter love they way naruto can sort of mind control them cant wait to see him making kin and tayua his maids/sex slaves
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  • From VFSNAKE on May 05, 2015
    Yeah! Revenge on Tenten for being a bitch! Love it! Soon Kin will be next. Make her the sexy slutty maid of his rich little hideout. LOL! Also, have Naruto take pictures of Tenten while she is playing with herself just because...well because he can. LOL!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2015
    Great chapter! I can't wait to read how things change with Naruto having nothing holding him back now.
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  • From ANON - red demon on May 05, 2015
    Holy shit Naruto captured Kin and had his way with Tenten. Looks like Naruto has gotten his maid. You know there was a fic around here that had Naruto getting Kin and Tayuya as his maids, shame I can no longer find it. I loved team 7's reactions to Naruto's night with Tsunami. I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Elazul on May 05, 2015
    Great chapter, thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - JustAFan on April 21, 2015
    I would love to see Naruto take a second shot at Ibara, and maybe since she's already been "injected" by him, she finds herself feeling strangely different towards him for some reason. I'd also love to see him go for Yuka Yamanaka, possibly awake, using maybe a new power from his smoke that could wake itself up anytime now that would enable him to put others into a seemingly drug-induced haze while planting suggestions into their minds - all without leaving any detectable traces should anyone go poking around in the victim's head afterwards.
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  • From ANON - Aegis on April 15, 2015
    Yay for additional porn! Yay for additional plot! Three cheers for the author!!
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  • From ANON - Erik vargas on March 31, 2015
    Awesome!!! please update soon!!! can you considered the next Kunoichis for Naruto Sex-mate? Yuhi Kurenai, Terumi mei (The Mizukage), Samui, Tsunade and Hotaru Tsuchigumo?
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