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Reviews for Deception

By : Disgracefulsoul
  • From ANON - clover on June 02, 2014
    I have no idea how I could've missed this. I've been too busy and rarely checked fan fic updates, but I'm glad I decided to spy on your account and well, here it is. I loved how you presented Sasuke's side of things. It wasn't so OOC, so don't worry. It was so Sasuke, in my opinion. This, like the first installment, brought me to tears. It made me hate Sakura more :D I can't wait for the third installment. I hope Sasuke faces a bit of a challenge, like having to face someone else who is interested in Naruto and has even more power than he does.
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  • From ANON - mysticaldragon11 on May 18, 2014
    Okay my heart broke with Goodbye Sasuke, I was pissed at Sakura in Deception and now that you have teased us mercilessly, please, please write another to show the mending of the relationship. I am a sucker for happy endings. :)
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  • From pssnangel4 on May 08, 2014
    I can't tell you how much I loved this story. I read every word with baited breath, as if at any moment something would happen so suddenly I would miss it if I wasn't paying attention. As if the words would fly from the page and I wouldn't get to find out what happened. I cried, cried for Naruto, cried for their relationship. I'm invested way too much into this fictional story. "xD That's how much I love it. But having said that, I wish you wouldn't end it like this. Leaving it to open. We know Sasuke is going after Naruto, an we can kind of guess how everything could go, but it's just unsatisfying not seeing the journey, not going along with him on his mission to find Naruto, explain everything and try to fix their relationship. To see where Naruto is, where he chose to go and why. Not seeing Naruto's reaction to Sasuke's story, not seeing their emotions. I feel where missing too much, and it makes me sad.
    Please don't end this story here. You have the potential to keep going, to do more, at least for another chapter. I understand if you don't but I just hope you do. =]

    If anyone hasn't read this story yet, let me tell you, give it a chance, it's worth the read. Make sure to read her 1st chapter/story Goodbye, Sasuke. They go together, an are both beautiful and amazing. x3
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