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Reviews for Kitsunes Seduction

By : stormwolf3710
  • From Stres on November 02, 2017

    Well after 2 or 3 chapter is geting bored will love it if you add more time and description to scenes because at the moment the idea realy good but you need some plot ass lemons as with his geting the vilage under him . Also is easy to see you are a hinata hater , and thats ok but you need some reason for it. Try to expand your imagination because the start and idea is good but the end result is 4 of 10 . Thats my opinion at the moment al chapters are the same with realy little diference .


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  • From ANON - Doomzday96 on April 18, 2016
    More please
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  • From Tazax_DuFaelyn on September 15, 2015
    Very nicely done. I hope you aren't finished with either of your Naruto stories as I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Jimbo Jones on July 05, 2015
    It's....interesting, I'll admit. Not a big fan of the Hinata bashing, but I understand why. Early Sakura was worthy of bashing, but she did wake up in the Chunin Exams.

    Could we get a list of who all Naruto will claim, and is he going to take either Fu or Yugito?
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  • From ANON - Friendly Guest on December 21, 2014
    This is great stuff please update more
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  • From ANON - Lord Farsight on September 30, 2014
    First off, this review is in no way intended as flames, I tried to contain my frustration, if I failed, I am sorry.

    I had decided to give this story another chance, it was a mistake.

    Your 'payback' is counterproductive and makes me want to write some Sakura-bashing, and that's something I despise!

    Naruto has no valid reasons to treat Hinata in such a cruel way, but I'm not going to engage into a rant because you'll probably not care.

    Here's just one thing : She would be better treated in Kumo, and I include the constant rape!
    In this fic, she's being raped and insulted, if she died Naruto would probably say something along the lines of "damn, the cum-dump broke, gotta find a new one." There's no attachment, no affection she's treated like a furniture!

    And the attachment problem is present in your other fic too.

    You lost me as a reader. I'm including my e-mail in case you want to argue, but I don't see how you could convince me, or any Hinata fan, to keep reading your story. I understnad how annoying it can be to have one of your favorite characters bashed (yeah, I understand it very well right about now) but 'payback', especially in this form, is not only useless, but counterproductive.

    Farewell.
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  • From ANON - Clay Holland on August 12, 2014
    nice.
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  • From Clay20 on August 10, 2014
    very good
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  • From ANON - Lord Farsight on July 08, 2014
    Too much Hinata bashing for my taste. I mean, seriously? He knows a girl has been holding a torch for him for who knows how long, and he simply turn her into a cock-sleeve? No tenderness? No appreciation for her loyalty? Someone that beat him and abused him is treated better than someone that had feelings for him for the longest time?

    And what's that comment in the last chapter? 'at least Kurenai had a personnality' I belive it was. Not really nice to Hinata. I get that you obviously don't like Hinata, but you present Naruto like a bastard that would degrade someone that cares for him.
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  • From EvilFuzzy on April 28, 2014
    Man, I tried to read this, but the borked up formatting just ruined it for me. I wasn't even able to discern anything about the quality of the story or writing. The messed up spacing just distracted me too much.

    Have you tried fixing those issues? That should make the story infinitely more readable.
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  • From ANON - dracco on April 12, 2014
    be a cool story but no formatting, you have a wall of words that makes your story impossible to read
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  • From ANON - flawlesscowboy2552 on April 09, 2014
    I had issues reading this fic because of what I think is a formatting error on AFF. For some reason, random spaces got turned into returns and caused sentences to be broken up into multiple lines.
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