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Reviews for Not good enough?

By : Sasunarufan13
  • From ANON - jesi on June 28, 2014
    hey! i hope youre doing great today but what im really hoping for is more of a chapter 4 or 5 wherein sasuke and naruto will have a happy ending. haha! youve got a really really great story here and i hate to think its the last chapter. so if you have spare time, please please dont make it an open ending. i dont wanna think about it every night thinking what could have been.. what might have been. hahaha. please!! T.T and thank you for writing this down. kudos! :D
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  • From pssnangel4 on May 08, 2014
    I loved this story. Thank you for writing it. Normally I don't like open endings, cause they leave to many unanswered questions. Most of the time it feels like the writer couldn't decide on an ending and just decided to instead, opt out of writing one. Leaving the reader to make up and ending for themselves, only it leaves me feeling unsatisfied, like I just read a "to be continued" message to a story I know will never be finished.
    But having said that, I have to say I liked your ending. I feel your ending was fitting for this story. So much happened between Sasuke and Naruto, they truly loved each other but they made a lot of mistakes. This ending or rather this chapter was unapologetically realistic, I could see this happening in any relationship that had too many mistakes to keep going as they where. Because sometimes, love isn't enough. If the relationship is unhealthy for you, if your unhappy, you have to end it no matter how much you feel you love them. And sometimes, being apart for a while, can help. It gives you room to breath, think about what went wrong. It also gives you time to heal old wounds, and time to get to know yourself again, time to grow up. And after everything, who knows, maybe your both ready to finally be in a relationship again. Maybe you both realize your not, either way, when your ready the answer will come to you.
    I feel your ending was open, but also implied. You gave enough hints leading up to the end to imply the ending you preferred, but left it open enough to give the impression that it was a natural ending. And I loved that. So thank you for this story, I truly loved it. =]
    By the way, I have no idea who Naruto was with, but I just assumed it was Gaara. xD I feel they make a lot of sence. But then again, you never know who it could have been. ^^
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  • From pssnangel4 on April 27, 2014
    So much happened in this chapter. To see how much Naruto truly loves Sasuke, how much he's willing to forget everything that's happening if they can just stay together. To be together, keep what they had. To love someone so much but, finding out, or noticing your body isn't what they want. To make love with them, with the illusion your body is no longer your own. How could Naruto note hate himself, hate the illusion even more. Makes me want to cry for him.
    But having said that, I can also tell Sasuke really loves Naruto. He doesn't want to give him up, even knowing the risk of his family finding out, he still doesn't walk away from the temptation that is Naruto. But I also feel like sasuke is using this illusion on himself, not just his family. He want's to be the perfect son, want's to make his father proud by being straight and with a woman. But he Loves Naruto, and Naruto is a Man. This Illusion is Sasuke's way out. He can be the perfect son, and pretend he is Normal, he can keep Naruto but pretend he's with a woman. I pray sasuke will wake up and realize what this is doing to Naruto. That he will put a stop to all this and be with Naruto as he is. As a man, and stop hiding him.
    I loved this story, I really can't wait for more. I also can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. Sasuke must be going mad, after all, Naruto just told Sasuke the dreaded 4 words no one in a relationship wants to ever hear..."We Need To Talk." What a cliffhanger. x3 I'm sure all kind of thoughts are going threw Sasuke's head. Maybe the fear of losing Naruto will finally wake him up, and see what this is all doing to him.
    Side Note: I'm so happy you decided to lengthen this story a bit more. Now I must wait on Bated Breath. Also I just wanted to mention I was listening to music while reading this chapter and your story went so well with [Lies By Marina And The Diamonds]. It felt as if this was the perfect song for Naruto's emotions toward Sasuke and their relationship. =]
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on April 23, 2014
    I'm glad there is going to be a third part. poor Naruto I hope everything works out for him. thought this story was well written had my attention from the start. cant wait for more
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  • From YojiKato on April 14, 2014
    Very good! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on April 07, 2014
    loved the first chapter. started reading and couldn't stop. hope Naruto stands firm next time about telling Sasukes parents. don't want to see him hurt
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  • From pssnangel4 on April 05, 2014
    I'm really interested in where you go from here. I have a feeling things are going to go down hill. I love how Sasuke is with Naruto, always feels like he's worshiping Naruto, whenever he touches him. But I also feel like he's not going to tell his parents. Like he wants them to be like this forever. He want's to keep Naruto but eat his cake too. I'm also starting to get the feeling that Sasuke is getting off on the fact that Naruto looks like a girl. Now if it was just that, and nothing deeper, then it would be ok. A kink if you will. But It feels like Sasuke wants to pretend he's not gay. That for a moment, while Naruto is dressed like a girl, he can pretend he's straight and "Normal". That He isn't gay, and that he can make is father proud. I hope not, cause if that's true, I can see a big down hill coming soon. He's practically using Naruto to pray his gay away, while still keeping a tight hold on him. But at the same time, when they make love it's amazing, you can feel Sasuke worship Naruto. It's odd, but I truly love this story so far. I can't wait to read more and see what happens. Poor Naruto. He has to be someone else, just to be with Sasuke. When all he wants is to be himself and be with him in public. To kiss and hold hands as a boy, not dressed as a girl. It's sad really. I hope Sasuke realizes this, and tells his parents when things start to hit the fan for them in their relationship.
    Please keeping going. I'd love to read more. ^^
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