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Reviews for Shadow of Lust

By : Xita
  • From ANON - omnimon12 on December 23, 2016

    Do you have any plans on continuing this story? I find it interesting…if for no other reason than that Tatsu, despite his libido, is a far better person than Faust; bluntly honest about his desires, but not malevolent.


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  • From AgentGv01 on March 16, 2014
    Wow...a gary stu OC (maybe self insert OC) fic where the character is god like and gets all the girls and everything...never seen that before -_-

    Besides the fact that this is something that has been done to death some of the paragraphs did look a little weird to me for some reason. Maybe a few of them should have been broken up a bit as they seemed a little too large in some areas. Not to mention I didn't get that Sakura completely understands that it's only his powers doing this and just accepts it and goes with it never once questioning anything? That he bascially drugged her against her will to have sex with her and she's not pissed? Plus how in the world are you going to explain someone not from the village being Hokage? That makes no sense at all to me but then nothing of this fic makes sense to me.

    Well the good points I guess is that at least your spelling is good too many times I've been really badly written English fics here and there, other than the some of the paragraph length being a bit too long the grammar as far as I can tell is decent. Sex scene I guess was okay as well although I kind of skimmed through the chapter as I was losing interests at some points. Plus the chapter length was good too and it wasn't some short half-assed thing done in five minutes although I wish with all the time you put into it I wish I could have enjoyed the story.
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