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By : MathiasBlue
  • From Darksnider05 on April 19, 2014
    Was really hoping he would deflower Hinata before he left.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2014
    Hooray, the Tsunade chapter! A lot sweeter and more romantic than I was expecting, but thats actually kinda cool. After what happened, I wonder if she is gonna have a little Uzumaki while Naruto is away training.
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  • From ANON - hugplx on April 19, 2014
    Two things,

    Having people in your story blow off Naruto not being a virgin and sleeping with older people in general ruins it. I assume the point of this story is to be somewhat kinky, I dunno why else he'd be banging older women almost exclusively. It's not that hot, or impressive, if everyone in the universe doesn't treat it like it's a big fucking deal - like they should. Shame, horror, incredulity, indignation, these are just some of the things people should be feeling when/ if they find out about Naruto and his dalliances.

    Second, Naruto is big for his age, he's not hung yet. Having Tsunade think that she'd never been filled so much in her life by his cock, even if he's on the girthy side, is a bit of a stretch...
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  • From snake1980 on April 18, 2014
    great job on the new chapter I hope in the next one naruto has a go wit tsunade?
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  • From 123rodx on April 17, 2014
    Finally, Like the way you portray the inner of Sakura in this intercourse. I like the way Naruto want to make her 1st time memorable and all and initiate a 2nd round.

    Like the way you didn't make Sakura a dominant girl for Naruto too much, especially since it's her first time, inner or not.

    I know you want a submissive Naruto cuz there is a lot of Dom Naruto fic out there but when it come to his interaction with Sakura, she's portray the dominant one most of the time .

    Here's she was portray just as a pervy innner:P, which is great where Naruto show some lead by engaging 2nd round and Sakura engage the 3rd and so on. Having them try to outlast or outperform each other after the timeskip could be an idea.

    Well Great chapter man :)
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  • From ANON - Syxx on April 14, 2014
    Loving this story. Liking how you are moving around the events that I am pretty such everyone knows. Hoping that Tsunade is one of the women that Naruto gets with. Also, have you thought about addin this story to ficwad? Looking foward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Mason on April 14, 2014
    Nice chapter, cant wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2014
    This is probably the best fanfic on this site. Keep it up.
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  • From 123rodx on April 14, 2014
    Man those two chapter were awesome, Love the 2 second Kurenai was struggling within herself and that genjutsu practie idea:P.
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  • From ANON - gui on April 13, 2014
    Yes, but the question is how many woman will be impregnated by Naruto before he goes on his training trip? I'm betting at least two others will have intentionnally allowed him to knock them up. Hana being one of them.
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  • From ANON - ghwaaron on April 13, 2014
    Awesome updates man can't wait for the second Tsunami part if there is one she's my favorite milf of the naruto franchise but I also love the affair parts to so please keep um cuming(pun). Nice story do you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2014
    I'm waiting for the next chapter. Hope that she want as fast as possibe get pregant. I also hope you add tsunade and Yoshino nara. Yoshino must hornier than kurenai because of her husband with his speak of troublesome this and bla bla bla.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2014
    Damn, that Kurenai chapter was hot, and it is always great to have more of my favorite girl Anko in the stories, even if its not in a lemony capacity this chapter. I Can't wait until Tsunade's turn. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Gui on April 12, 2014
    Good chapter, I wonder if Asuma'll be happy at Kurenai's change of attitude or if Kurenai won't be pleased if Asuma's not as "gifted" as Naruto. Also, will Mebuki's kid be Naruto's?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2014
    If you want Naruto to get the ultimate revenge against Tsume and Hana, have him dominate and mark them during the sex and then knock both up as the final insult.
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