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Reviews for The Secret Technique

By : MathiasBlue
  • From FleeingReality on April 24, 2014
    I like your story a lot, sure its hard to ignore the cheating considering that I think marriage as a sacred union but the fact that its so hard to find some good heterosexual smut stories, especially with Naruto as the main character, is difficult in this website so I bear it. However, I think I will be skipping the future chapters of Yoshino. I don't respect a man who knows his wife is cheating on him and does nothing be it stopping it or leaving. Also what's to stop Shikaku from just getting it from some other woman if Yoshino can sleep around...oh, right, its too troublesome forgot which clan Shikaku belongs to. Still my point stands.

    However, I look forward to other chapter with Mebuki or other women. Which makes me curious, will Naruto ever settle down or will he be forever screwed up in the head regarding relationships?
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  • From ANON - zeek17 on April 24, 2014
    Hm.. I wonder if Shikaku will tell his sin to not be lazy-ass or there'll be Yoshino/Naruto/Temari scene with Nara men skulking in backgroung..
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  • From ANON - neko on April 24, 2014
    make tsume pay ! fuck her into submission... dat old whore !
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  • From ANON - shiro on April 24, 2014
    damn ! awesome fic !
    this site isnt so popular as fanfiction.net maybe u ll paste your fic there :)

    naruto x mature women ! fuck yeah :D fetishes as netorare cheating... maybe u want to try foot fetish or bondage xD

    update asap and take care !
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  • From ANON - wincest on April 24, 2014
    Mabui?

    Samui?

    Karui?

    and am i seeing Temari foreshadows?

    wishful thinking lolz

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2014
    Hardly seems like a flame to me but i think he just doesn't like cheating stories which calls in to question as to why is he reading this to begin with,while i like the story he does have a point about the little dick aspect being a poor writing tool and it takes away for the emotional aspect and makes the whole situation seem less profound.

    But anyway i really like the story and i hope that you would keep writing,and i must say that its nice to see Naruto starting to get a little pro-active and less passive..cant wait for him to tech those Inuzuka bitches a lesson

    Oh and seeing as every other cheating story is about Naruto getting the shaft the author deserves an additional kudos! :)

    Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2014
    To the guy above, why do you have to flame? Is it because you got cheated on and you have a small dick?
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  • From ANON - hugplx on April 24, 2014
    Saddling Shikaku with a little dick is both pointless and unecessary. It's also immature and makes Yoshino's legitimate despair for the state of her marriage seems unimportant - I'd argue that a husband showing no interest in his wife and putting no effort in his marriage is grounds for a divorce alone.

    Going that extra step to make him inept and little dicked just ruins it, it makes the chapter seem cheap. Heap onto that Naruto's 'views'...

    I'd love it, LOVE IT if Jiraiya fucked Mebuki and taught the little shit a lesson.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2014
    Last bit had me in stitches. Probably the best story on the site.
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on April 22, 2014
    Ahh man, awesome chapter. Man that was mean tease ... was it's Naruto's after all, man I hope so. Sorry Kenji but I hope when that little bundle of joy comes out it has whisker marks and is a honey blond mixing Tsunami's and Naruto's hair colors along with his blue eyes.

    Really looking forward to the Yoshino chapter although I do want to see him finally get back at the Inuzuka's and knock them up and to properly repay them for all they did to him. I'd also like to see him and get another visit from Kurenai that creates a different father for baby Asuma.
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  • From ANON - Jayme on April 22, 2014
    I love how fast you update this story.
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  • From ANON - Alex on April 21, 2014
    This story only gets better and better. Consistent updates and good writing. Looking forward to whatever comes next!
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  • From ANON - ghwaaron on April 21, 2014
    I enjoyed that chapter amazingly thanks for your hard work in making "the secret technique". I know your not finished but I freackin love this chapter so DO YOU!!!!!
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  • From Kdragonfire on April 21, 2014
    Can you imagine Mebuki's expression that after having sex with Naruto. She found Jiraya in her kitchen and he told her "Why don't you tell me exactly what you been teaching Naruto or you could tell Tsuande?" I wonder if Kizashi likes other guys fucking his wife. I can see Kakashi put Mebuki in a genjutsu and Inochi could always change her memories. I hope you have a Sakura and Mebuki getting fucked by Naruto as they press there pussies together or a Ino and Sakura one. Maybe a girls night with Hana,Shizune,Kurenai,Yugao,and Anko and they show a surveillance film with Mebuki and naruto and a short film with Naruto and Kurenai. I hope Naruto captures Hana and puts here in the breeding area of the veterinary clinic and gets her pregant.
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on April 21, 2014
    Darn Love this story. I'm hoping Naruto knock up several women before he gets back ... accidentally of course.
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