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Reviews for The Secret Technique

By : MathiasBlue
  • From ANON - Storylover213 on June 23, 2014
    Very nice story man i hope to read more soon though i also wish to speak to you about something so drop me an email at spartin2211@verizon dot net.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2014
    Great as always. Your chapters are always well written, and of a chunky, satisfying length. I know it is a Mebuki focused story, but I do wish there was a little more Anko in there, now that Naruto is all grown up and more dominant.
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  • From snake1980 on June 15, 2014
    great job on the new chapter I hope its ino next or after she has a talk with sakura. or what about ino catch's naruto again but this time with tsunade and could be screwing her in her office. have to wait and see who is the next lucky girl. keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Alex on June 14, 2014
    Yet another amazing chapter, though I think an opportunity was missed as you could've fit both Tsunade and Sakura in there.

    I definitely like Sakura in your story, as she's more worried about her good friend Naruto, as opposed to canon Sakura, who still wasn't sure who's side she'd take in a confrontation, as far as Naruto and Sasuke.

    If you take reader's votes into consideration, definitely Yoshino. Though this chapter also got me thinking of Tsunade again.
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  • From porphyra on June 14, 2014
    It's faint not feint, as in:
    She is fainting, she fainted etc.

    Kinda important considering it seems like Hinata will be a recurring character.
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  • From ANON - pill_pushr on June 14, 2014
    How about a troublesome twosome chapter. Ino and Yoshino at the same time. Notice how ino is part of Yoshino's name. A little revenge on each girls part. To spend time with someone, who does not treat them as troublesome.
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  • From AgentGv01 on June 14, 2014
    I saw go for Ino next as it would be the next thing logically as you can have her confront Sakura about it and during that talk maybe Ino starts getting a bit turned on and could ask Sakura if she minds if she takes a shot to see what Naruto is like. Plus with this you can lead up into a Naruto/Sakura/Ino threesome. It would create some nice solid flowing and you can also use these chapters to help set up future things as well.
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on June 06, 2014
    Great chapter. I should have known it was Hanabi by the title ... got to wonder if Hinata was watching and what she thought. Looking forward to the next chapter although a bit sad that Hinata's chance won't be coming, but it is understandable. Actually waiting makes more sense until the Pain chapter.
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  • From ANON - Da Foxxy One on June 05, 2014
    Damn, this is one erotic - and at the same time, fucked up - fic. Well written, very neat premise, and kinda sad too. Mebuki is a little nuts, but you write her so well. The characters are as IC as you can make them (given that this is a lemon fic; I doubt Tsunade and Shizune would compare notes on how good a lover Naruto is), and the chapters are decent length.

    I congratulate you sir; this is one hell of a fic. Excellent.
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  • From ANON - spiritwolf on June 05, 2014
    I actually like this story but I would like read more with Naruto and Moegi and Sakura heck how bout next chapter where Naruto has sex with both Sakura and her mom at the same time
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  • From porphyra on June 03, 2014
    I'm not sure why Naruto's features are described as being more delicate, especially compared to Sasuke, which doesn't really fit with the visuals in the anime in my opinion, is it just so that he comes across as more vulnerable or something?
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  • From porphyra on June 03, 2014
    I've noticed a consistent grammatical error that keeps popping up in every chapter, you use 'sat' in places where 'sitting' would be more appropriate, it is an informal version in some english dialects, and not really something that should be used in written form. sat should only be used in past tense, the present participle sitting would often be more appropriate, also when you use sat in this context one might also think that you are using a passive verb instead.

    Here are two examples from this chapter:
    to see Sakura sat at the kitchen table - to see Sakura sitting at the kitchen table
    until she was sat on him - until she was sitting on him
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  • From ANON - Steel on May 09, 2014
    I remember precisely on a piece of paper I wrote my size changes. I still have it infact.
    12-5'2
    Considered above average for that age.
    If I'm a human with an above average cock, Naruto should have 5'5.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2014
    Any chance of some movie girls coming in? Like Koyuki or Shion
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  • From ANON - Dafox on May 07, 2014
    Another fantastic chapter as always I must say. I quite enjoyed this chapter as many others did as well. Near the end I had an idea. Mebuki has a cheating fetish....so why not have Moegi have something similar? Such as have a Naruto/Moegi chapter where she thinks she is better than mebuki even doing it in her apartment....just a thought is all~ And I hope you do well on your exams. Good luck.
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