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By : MathiasBlue
  • From ANON - damien on March 27, 2014
    I would love to see a naruto milf seducer. like he is attracted to older ladies like mebuki, tsume, tsunade, tsunami and such. plus i would love to see a naruti/mebuki love pairing.
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  • From KaelHyun on March 27, 2014
    If you're going to include anyone Make it Sakura really its getting tiresome how she's not in apart of this yet!
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  • From ANON - Akuma-Heika on March 27, 2014
    Without the affinity for it i doubt he could make the town a lake.

    stop the SIGH

    hoping you add some others.

    Will this solely be a subNaruto or will he become a dom with age/Kyuubi/Yami Naruto coming into play? He is an Uzumaki and they are hardly submissive.


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  • From 123rodx on March 26, 2014
    Well done. Good idea for the threesome of Naruto/Kurenai/Hinata. Kurenai can catch Hinata and corrupt her a little with a woman touch before setting a plan to get Naruto together.

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  • From ANON - zeek17 on March 26, 2014
    "but at least she had kept her ‘extracurricular’ fun to something not really human"
    Oh really? It's either Uzumaki's healing bloodline or "not human". And since Mebuki is portrayed as someone smart and cunning, she should be able to understand that by now.
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  • From snake1980 on March 25, 2014
    great job on the chapter and u should have kurenai catching hinata in the act while she is watching naruto. I will be looking forward to read the naruto kurenai hinata when ever u do that one. keep up the great work
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  • From Ragingspeed on March 25, 2014
    Another great chapter hope you add in one of the other umknown milfs like shikamarus mom :D
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  • From ANON - ghwaaron on March 25, 2014
    I was kinda disappointed with chapter 7 and 8. But this chapter completely made up for it. 7 and 8 seemed rushed like you were just trying to get them out of the way and were very predictable. anyways great story keep up the good work, or not it's your choice. Oh please put this on fanfiction.net. please!
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  • From ANON - lol on March 25, 2014
    Dooo it
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  • From snake1980 on March 24, 2014
    man what a chapter. and what a twist for hinata at the end. im so looking forward to the next chapter. maybe the next lucky girl could be kurenai? like say she was in the hotspring and hear some noise and when she looks she see naruto leaving the area thinking he was looking at her so she will teach him that being a pervert is very bad.
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  • From 123rodx on March 24, 2014
    love the 2 news chapter, reward time with Mebuki was great and maybe Sakura will be in that story after all so YEAH:) and I so hope in your sidestory arc that Naruto make Tsume and Hana learn that payback is a Biatch:P

    Great chapters man, you work really fast and the quality of your writing doesn't drop so good work :). Love both idea for your next story but I would like to see A come to be 1st.
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  • From ANON - guest on March 23, 2014
    Damn dude, you're a machine.

    Never seen someone pump out chapters so fast.
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  • From ANON - shrike8675309 on March 23, 2014
    Hinata should be placed on naruto's team. after one very bad swoon makes her faint into a mud hole, Naruto should take her Mebuki to get cleaned up and when she sees Hinata almost come from Naruto asking if "she needs anything" from the other side of the closed bathroom door she decides training is needed and rationalizes it as keeping hinata from being killed
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  • From AgentGv01 on March 23, 2014
    I'd like to vote for A: The fucking yellow flash and you did find a way for Sakura huh, that should be interesting to see how she gets pulled into this. And would make Naruto's day screwing not only the girl he's wanted all this time but her mother on top of it.
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  • From ANON - Damian on March 23, 2014
    Dreams.
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