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By : MathiasBlue
  • From ANON - Mike on April 04, 2014
    Looking forward to seeking the conclusion for chapter 13.
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  • From ANON - wtf on April 04, 2014
    yo! this is really really good! keep it up! i really want to see a Naruto/Ayame with a dominant naruto please!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on April 04, 2014
    You really need to put this story on FicWad. I am posting as an anonymous author that has posted stories here on AFF. Let me tell you, the moderators here are abusing their powers and are acting like the people who run FFN. Just look at The Lemon Sage, his magnum opus, Eroninja, is no longer being updated here on AFF but instead on FicWad and is enjoying success with that audience there. You should post that story just as a safety precaution if something were to happen to you here on AFF.
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  • From ANON - S on March 30, 2014
    Good story and i like the character development....Good Luck on your exams :).....
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  • From ssvidel3 on March 29, 2014
    I like how this story is turning out. since there are no naruto/mebuki stories, I think you chose wisely. and I agree that fanfiction.net is not the best out there especially when it comes to adult stories. if I may make a suggestion though. perhaps maybe make an account on ff.net anyway but you don't need to post a story to your profile. maybe it would be easier for fans to speak with you since ff.net has a pm system while this site does not. this is just a suggestion, its your choice. well look forward to the next chapter, and good luck on those exams!
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  • From 123rodx on March 29, 2014
    Nice chapter it was hot. Naruto's erotic dream coming true. The perv in me love it:P.

    I get your POV about Mebuki use in fanfic but what makes me think there are less Naruto/Mebuki, well Mebuki story in general is that we only know her name and appearance till recently in road to ninja movie and that's it(2 filler I think but nothing much done with them in the real story). Plus she's alive and have no importance at all in the manga good so no popularity for poor Mebuki:(. The only help she has as a character is that she's the mother of Sakura, a main character but Mikoto and Kushina take it all in the popularity of the Milf department. Well that's my opinion.


    About your story, most of those fic featuring her or another Milf in the Naruto Universe just don't put the husband in it. Like the Naruto/Kushina fic. Except Mikoto cuz yeah, Fugaku really kind of an ass so it's easy to work on that angle. On fanfiction 2/8 feature Kizashi and he is OC as shit in one :p, and gender swap for a 3some yuri in the other lol.

    What I mean is yeah it's a bit sad, but you've got the balls to show a reality that happened a lot in real life (almost sad to admit this). But in the end, when a man neglect a woman or the other way around for too long, when she express her need over and over and he just find excuse not too, well he had this coming.

    The lemon and the premise in those kind of fic is hot and let those fic remind us to listen to our other half need:).

    And for the record yeah, they are 8 M story in fanfiction about mebuki(6 of them are Sakura/Mebuki, 1 is Naruto/Mebuki and the last is a 3some with Minato/Kushina/Mebuki) I guess you could get away with your story on the site but anyway reading it here is just as good as a lemon in fanfiction.

    Well with that said, it's ok that you won't update as quick cuz hey, you got a life to live, so good luck with your studies for your final exam:).
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  • From zamkotje on March 29, 2014
    As somone who views Naruto as innately good, I am looking forward to this version of Tsume and Hana getting whats coming. I am curious how thats going to happen... while naruto has tremendous potential, he's not going to be capable of defeating a jounin straight on for another 1-2 years... but then again if he gets her with her pants down, or through traps/seals... hmmm, a divergence on his pranking/trap making abilities perhaps... or perhaps he co-opts hana somehow...

    Anyway, excellent story.
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  • From ANON - Thither and Anon on March 29, 2014
    If it makes you feel better about what you are doing to Kizashi, you should be aware that some guys get off on being cucked.

    For that matter, maybe Sakura isn't really his either and the reason Mebuki doesn't know is because she was put under genjutsu or a Yamanaka technique so she wouldn't know that she'd been with someone other than Kizashi at his behest.

    Hell, the time between when Mebuki offers and Kizashi accepts might have been him checking in with Sakura's father to see if he'd be willing to do it again.

    Just a thought.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 28, 2014
    This story is Awesome i can't wait to see who do you plan next to take naruto and see who do you make preg.
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  • From ANON - oh on March 28, 2014
    Your doing a great job keep up the good work
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  • From 123rodx on March 27, 2014
    Love that chapter and how you setting up things in motion with Sakura little by little. That was an excellent use of her inner here. The lemon was awesome in this one. Do you plan to have Naruto have anal sex with Mebuki soon, after all, lesson 2 got Naruto playing with her ass and will mebuki come to see Naruto has more than just a toy for her sexual need.

    Finally as much as I like this story, I almost wanted Kizashi dead cuz I kind of feel bad for him cuz it's like on of the few guy that respect Naruto in your story only to have Nauto fucked is wife. If he was an ass of something, no problem there but in this, he's just the gentle boring husband.I guess that is one face of reality :(. This chapter shows the conflict between Mebuki showing she still love him but it become boring overtime, it's real but sad.

    Great quality of writing and you update faster than most and it still consistent and good:P. Can't wait to see what's next.


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  • From ANON - Ren on March 27, 2014
    I'd like to see Mebuki's feelings change over time, but either way this story rocks.
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  • From ANON - zeek17 on March 27, 2014
    Ah. That one review was written before reading chapter.
    By the way, time-stop fucking sounds interesting, looking forward to it ))

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  • From ANON - zeek17 on March 27, 2014
    Yeah, I somewhat get it. It's just..I don't really like femdom stories, and through your fic positioned as such, it's quite mild. If you just skip Interludes (which I do), even if Mibuki is Dom'ing and throwing insults, she does that and keeps that in her mind. And thus, Naruto is quite happy in current relationship. Is he under the heel? Yes, just like most of males are. But submissive? No (I repeat, I'm skipping Interludes. Reading one was enough to just ignore them all altogether).
    So, I'm hoping that Mebuki will tone down her hatred for Kyuubi, if she is not willing to see Naturo as Naruto. It's not like Kyuubi has done something to them personally, no? Anyway, when Sakura will join (I hope it's 'will', and not 'if') to their relationship, I hope Naruto, while remain under the heel of Mebuki, will take far more active role with Sakura. Not Dom'ing, mind you, just to have relationship on equal grounds, with Naruto being slightly more active.
    Hah. I hope for a lot of thing, no? :)
    PS. If you're looking for reason to add Sakura, then there is one: Sakura on some mission get injured and get scar, cries to her mom about being ugly or whatever, and Mebuki shows her that magic healing cream she's using herself.
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