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Reviews for Don't Tell Sasuke

By : Levi-The-Great
  • From LUCIFER-X5 on May 05, 2018

    Continuation please 👏👏👏👍👍👍


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  • From ANON - Darrius Mcgavock on February 04, 2015
    Hello my name is Darrius and I want you to please continue updating your story it's getting better and better now that I can't wait till you update your story but yeah Please continue to update your fanfiction it's getting better and better now so please continue to updating but I think you should keep it so that it's naruto and the woman not minato or killer bee or raikage a it kinda just ruins the title because what reason would killer bee or raikage a or minato need to talk to sasuke for killer bee and raikage a is all the way in kumo and minato is fucking dead inside the fucking shinigami's stomach and yeah you get the idea but yeah so continue updating so I can continue reading please and thank you.
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  • From ANON - t on December 10, 2014
    Please update soon

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2014
    after reading some of the other reviews please keep mikoto with Naruto. Maybe have Kushina join in (Hinata, femjinchriki,konan, ANko would also be great). As the last male Uzumaki/Senju no other man on the planet could rival Naruto in bed (or the kitchen table lol). the vitality of a god is what is family inherited. The wording used pretty much assures his family would be VERY virile, but therating would not let Kishi say that.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2014
    I hope you continue this!
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  • From ANON - zindo on January 25, 2014
    Nice, i would like to see more of your stories.
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  • From Rixxell_Stryfe on January 25, 2014
    Very nice story. I always love Naru/Miko stories, though not quite as much as Naru/Kushi stories, but this was pretty damn good for a first attempt. Also considering that you're planning a Naru/Kushi story in the future, why not take it a step further and have an immediate follow-up for this lemon by having Kushina pay Mikoto a visit since Sasuke had recently left town? Maybe starting such a deal off with Naruto hiding in a closet and having Mikoto initiate a yuri sequence as if the two had a history when they were much younger for Naruto to walk in on and surprise his mom with the best ride she has had in over 15 years?

    As for a Naru/Tsume, I'd love if this somehow involved Kiba pissing Naruto off(maybe involving Hinata in some way?) and ultimately ended with Kiba coming home to see such a scene before Naruto has to kick his ass for not announcing himself like a proper person would? Such a scene involving Hana Inuzuka also getting on Kiba's case for interrupting their mothers' free time might also be nice, especially if Naruto was in the buff when accosting Kiba on his indiscretion, as this can lead to other Inuzuka clan fun times;)


    As for Minato/Mikoto and a Mikoto/Kumo leadership gangbang, so long as these involve Mikoto dissing here own clan to an extreme extent and maybe even having Itachi as half Uchiha(especially in the Kumo case as this would be a great example on his decision to purge the Uchiha clan, though the same can be said of his being Minato's child), I could care less what happens and how you make them out, but please hint at past relations between Kushi and Mikoto as these are always great. This would especially be interesting in a Kumo gangbang, as such a thing can explain why it started to begin with(as in Kushina suggested going after Mikoto due to who her husband is and why she would need to taste Kumo chocolate, though such a thing also hints at a past Kushina relationship with one of said Kumo characters during her kidnapping attempt, not that I'd mind however;)

    Thanks for writing and please keep up the good work:)
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  • From theflamingdictator on January 24, 2014
    I have to agree with the other reviewers. If this is your first story, I can't wait for what's in store later on. For a pwp, it has some nice short and believable plot points. It wasn't some pointless sex, it had an erotic undertone. Something that is quite refreshing. But what might be the most important thing in a pwp, are the sex scenes. And those are awesome! Keep it up, and I would love to see more of your work! And if you are looking for some pointers on pairings, might I suggest something involving Minato? I've never seen that much of him as a main character. MinatoxMikoto will be quite something!

    cheers,

    theflamingdictator
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  • From snake1980 on January 24, 2014
    for your first one I have to say great job and cant wait to read the next one. keep up the great work
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  • From wicked_smile360 on January 24, 2014
    for your first story, this is really good. i do hope you'll write more stories and update quicker than other!
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