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Reviews for The Demon Prince

By : Leah237
  • From Asian_Rose on July 15, 2014
    Love this story. I hope you continue on with it. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Candsandn on March 16, 2014
    I absolutly love it. i noticed one or two mistakes but they were not major. i would love for you to continue this story.
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  • From ANON - yohanita21 on January 09, 2014
    I just finished reading chapter 3 and absolutely love your story! I love how Naruto is slowly melting the dark, cruel and sadistic prince's heart! Really looking forward to your next chapter. Thank you for writing and sharing your story with us and hope you update soon! ! Happy New Year!!!
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  • From ANON - Killua17 on December 30, 2013
    I really like this story I can't wait to read more!! XD
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  • From AlienixX on December 14, 2013
    I have nothing to add. The 3rd chapter only proves my point, as Sasuke only turns to Naruto seeking comfort, pleasure, fun.
    He sees Naruto purely as source of some entertainment. He pays attention to Naruto's problems only when they're in the way of having fun with the boy. That's it.
    The episode with that crying potato was realy nice. Isn't it the image of his soul?
    The pitiful, pained expression that haunts Sasuke had nothing to do with himself or his actions towards Naruto. Will he stop or regret if he's the one who cause it? Regrets spoil the pleasure, after all.

    The memory of a torture with a hot poker mind me think of one episode of 'Slave Market' and 'For The Love of His Son', of course.
    Personally, I don't believe that Sasuke's sudden attention to the slave is more than a whim. Some Naruto's emotions bother him. After all, it's hard to tease crying and distressed, sullen person. And sex with the person not in mood is so much like rape. AndSasuke can't let himself fall to that level. Purely out of pride.
    Comforting Naruto with sex was easy because it's something Sasuke wanted and had planned to have from the beginning. Will he be able of something that goes against his selfish desires?

    So far I see only one possible way of making them equal. It's if Naruto's powers make him a worthy ally and independent on his own. If he has something unique only he can bring to Sasuke and bargain with. Right now, it's only his life that is at stake. It's a normal situation and nothing much or special. He's defenceless, fragile and absolutely vulnerable, totally dependable on Sasuke's whims. It won't go further even if Sasuke falls in love with him.
    Of course, the author knows better. It'll be interesting to read what's going to happen next. Thank you.

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2013
    I just found this story and enjoyed reading the first 3 chapters. Your writing flows well and it's entertaining. I hope to read more soon. Thanks for writing and sharing.

    lunamist
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  • From ANON - smint45 on December 08, 2013
    I really love this story!!!! So can't wait for more!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on December 07, 2013
    Oh, I love this. Naruto's slowly changing the demon prince's heart!
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on December 07, 2013
    I'm really enjoying Sasuke succumbing to Naruto's charm! Their joking over a potato was to cute:)
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  • From AlienixX on November 23, 2013
    It's also funny to note that no matter how dark, hard and hopeless Naruto's life is, no matter how dirty he is himself, he always, always in a certain type of fanfiction stories "tastes of strawberries and sunshine", his scent is "sweet and delectable". A rare slave, indeed :D
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on November 23, 2013
    I think I'm going to like this Demon Prince Sasuke! The harshness on the out side and the gooie softness inside:) Naruto whom I love dearly can't help himself talking back! I can't wait to see how you have the boys going at it verbally and in other ways ^_^
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  • From ItalianPirateGypsy on November 22, 2013
    Sasuke in alo his forms should be sexy! Great job in portraying that!
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  • From ANON - Miichu on November 21, 2013
    Really awesome cant wait for more :)
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  • From AlienixX on November 21, 2013
    I've already read plenty of similar stories but not sure if I have right to leave my comment here after 2 chaptersonly. OK... I may get it be wrong.
    Your Sasuke is one-sided character: sadistic, purely evil, having nothing better to do than teach weaklings a lesson. What's more, you gave him super-mega-uber-aura enough to kill.
    Sasuke's also trapped in his own position, so he can't show any shade of kindnesss in public - and this not going to change any time soon.

    It seems to me Sasuke misjudged Naruto, taking his unability to hide his emotions for truly rebellious nature. After all, he had witnessed Naruto when the latter was preparing to die. "But he couldn't control himself. He had no way of fighting the reluctance of submission within him." (c) And after the 2nd chapter I think Sasuke overestimated Naruto's resouces of defiance. OK, he *already* has Naruto whimpering and pleading under him, so... what else? "The heady combination of defiance and submission in his slave had made him lose control. " (c) So, when submission overweighs defiance, Sasuke's interest in the man will disappear.

    What I liked about Naruto is that he's fully aware of his position and doesn't have any illusions. He's also already creaking, if not broken altogether, under pressures and hardships.'The inner submissive' in him?.. I think you meant Naruto's sexual disposition and preferences here. But what other place can he imagine himself into, being born a slave?

    And what made naruto deem Sasuke 'the cruellest master possible'? Was Sasuke's behaviour that much crueller than his previous masters'? They weren't exactly kind or considerate to him either, and this one made him walk over a long distance... after having saved his life! His instincts only, maybe, then.

    I liked the passages with Sasuke and Naruto but I find their situation 'locked' in circumstances; it's intresting how it will be able to develop if one side has absolute power and dominance over the other one, which I think is an overkill. Can it be developed at all?
    All Sasuke's following 'compassion' and leniency can be easily explained by the need to use Naruto's body and arouse himself by his reactions, for his own profit only.
    Hope I'm mistaken and this story will grow into something as interesting as lemony :-) Good luck and thanx!
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