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Reviews for A Lewd New World

By : EvilFuzzy
  • From ANON - on January 24, 2017

    Wow! Way better then I'd expected! Thanks for your time and effort!


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  • From ANON - Smilingjack on April 14, 2014
    So reading your A/N led me to a thought(smut)bunny you could try. I blame recent trists into some Avatar fiction. But what about gender-bending. As in, a character who could be called a gender bender and did just that to other people and used it as a method of defeating enemies. It could even be a naruto cross over, which is fairly common, and give an excuse to expand the pool as it were. I just thought it would be hilarious to see someone say "I'm a gender-bender"
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  • From ANON - SmilingJack on April 14, 2014
    A fun read so far to be sure. I find the most interesting part to be seeing how you rule 63 each new formerly male character that's introduced. The only complaint I had so far, strangely, was that Ibiko had such a short scene. I was surprised how sad I was that some of it was glossed over with explanation rather than details. Aside from my apparent fetish for scarred up amazons, the story has been quite enjoyable. I also enjoyed your rant to that one reviewer. The only thing I can think of that qualifies as unoriginal would be a blatant use of somebody else's plot points and/or designs. That would however be closer to the realm of plagiarism. I'm intrigued to keep reading and see if "Obi and Mari" ever regain their previous identities/memories and if they find a dilemma of having to admit to themselves that they are happier as women on Naruto's frequent fuck list
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  • From ANON - Kenshin Ryuu on February 28, 2014
    Nice chapter, I can't wait to see the meeting with Orochimaru-chan
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  • From ANON - Daydreamer on February 19, 2014
    Lol this story desearves all of its praise. A good porn PLUS an interesting plot!!!! Only gifted(and perverted lol XD) authors could mix such things together and make it good
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  • From ANON - con on February 03, 2014
    Dude finally! Lesbian content. That has been waaaay overdue in this story.
    Hot as always.
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  • From FuzzyMittens on December 24, 2013
    Im torn...On on hand Hinata is always going to be my first choice when it comes to pairing, on the other hand Garra would make for some interesting in story consequences as they two kage's marrying would possibly unify both villages...

    Can I vote for both?

    I totally want to see Hinata, Garra and even Tenten as his wives though, whichever the order.
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  • From ANON - Unknown-nin345 on December 22, 2013
    I love this story. It has a very nice mixture of humor and very sexy lemons.

    As for the first wife: I vote Hinata, mainly cuz I'm shameless NaruHina shipper myself.
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  • From ANON - x on December 22, 2013
    hinata for 1st wife
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  • From ANON - Kenshin Ryuu on December 21, 2013
    I still vote Hinata and I think Sakura shouldn't even get a chance for the very reasons Hinata mentioned. The only candidates I consider are Hinata, Sasuki, and Gaara-chan. And out of all of them, Hinata gets my vote. Especially since Sasuki seems to be supporting her over Gaara.
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  • From holymarine on December 21, 2013
    And just when Naruto gets with Sakura he just has to be interupted. Anyway great chapter.
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  • From ANON - shelly on December 20, 2013
    make Sasuki the first wife! Hinata and her should also have the children at the same time together!!
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  • From ANON - alex on December 19, 2013
    Personally, I will vote for (in order) : Hinata, Sasuki, Gaara and Sakura. The 3 last can change, but Hinata should definitely be the really first wife.
    The reasons are :
    - Hinata seems to be the only "official" girlfriend of Naruto
    - Hinata asked Naruto to provide for her, implicitly asking to be with him and live with him and their children. And she asked it the first.
    - Hinata is (certainly) pregnant from Naruto. And she did it before the 3 others.

    Some could say that Gaara has a stronger political card than Hinata. A wedding between the Kazekage and the Hokage to be will link strongly Suna and Konoha together, and specially if Gaara is the first wife.
    But :
    - in case of multiple women, if the first wife is not the first to have a baby from the husband, it's a real shame on the first wife, and she can lost all her influence. This means that if Gaara is taken as first wife, but Hinata gave birth first (and that will certainly be), Gaara and by extension, Suna, will be ashamed. Politically, they can keep a grudge against Naruto, Hinata and by extension, Konoha. On the other hand, Gaara can still be second wife and save her dignity if they say that her ask to be married was after Hinata's wedding. They only have to say that she is so in love with Naruto that she doesn't care to be "only" 2nd and Naruto has to show that his wives are treated equally (which he sure will do).
    - Naruto doesn't give a shit of politics, or at least he puts feelings much higher than politics. Taking Gaara as first wife is a kind of a punch in Hinata's face : she is Naruto's girlfriend and not Gaara. I do not see (won't understand) if he choose Gaara before Hinata : Hinata will be extremely sad and feel kind of betrayed (even if she can understand the politics), and Naruto knows it. If Naruto still does it (taking Gaara as first), it's a Naruto completely out of character.

    All of that brings Hinata as first wife to be taken. The other numbers can be discussed, but I don't think I will understand if you don't put Hinata as first (except if you kill her or put her in a coma or if she betrays Naruto something like that).


    That aside, your story is very good and really original. The only reproach I can do is : you are a hell of a tease ! You rise the sex temperature perfectly, but sometimes, when it's about to reach the pic, you change the scene, or you finish the chapter there... ! ^^
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  • From holymarine on December 18, 2013
    Great chapter. I believe Sakura should get a chance
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  • From ANON - Kenshin Ryuu on December 18, 2013
    I vote for Hinata as first wife, she's my favorite and she is going to be the first one to have Naruto's kids.

    I hope Kumiko and Naruto are able to turn Obi completely to their side with all the love she's getting, that might throw a big wrench into Madara's plans.
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