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Reviews for A Lewd New World

By : EvilFuzzy
  • From Christopher11 on December 15, 2013
    Actually, I would have to disagree that the Ten-Tails is not evil. At best, it is greedy (doesn't want humanity to evolve past what it thinks is 'best') with it's "I want 'my' Chakra back!" insanity.

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  • From ANON - Kenshin Ryuu on December 14, 2013
    I really wanted to see Kumiko get down and dirty with the two maids. With all her experience, she should be able to blow their minds so much they will gladly keep their new lives in the real world.
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  • From ANON - meh on December 14, 2013
    "When you can do something like that without getting in trouble, being bothered by inclement weather, or feeling emasculated, then why the hell wouldn't you? :P"

    Because teleporting is faster?

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  • From ANON - Kenshin Ryuu on December 13, 2013
    I would have liked to see more of Hinata and Sasuki's time together. I can't wait to see Gaara-chan and what she's like.
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  • From ANON - Kenshin Ryuu on December 07, 2013
    Bring on Tenten as well as Naruto and Ayame flavored ramen... and make a combo dish of the two if possible.

    Sasuki and Hinata kissing was hot... bring on hot bisexual girl sex!!!!
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  • From FuzzyMittens on November 20, 2013
    Is Sarutobi (the third hokage) alive in this setting? Will we be seeing Konohamaru later?

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  • From ANON - Kenshin Ryuu on November 19, 2013
    I'm a little surprised Teuchi is a woman since he is a civilian and one of the first people to be nice to Naruto. I'd think that would make him more resistant in Naruto's mind to change since he's known Teuchi for so long.

    I love Naruko clones being futa, can Hinata get double teamed by Naruto and Naruko at some point???
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  • From ANON - Kenshin Ryuu on November 19, 2013
    I actually don't mind the lack of sex in this chapter, it's pretty good character development and we finally get a glimpse of Kumiko's personality. I can totally see her baby sitting a horde of Naruto's kids who are routinely tickled by her tails while Naruto takes their moms on dates.
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  • From ANON - Akuma-Heika on November 17, 2013
    is naruto the only male? Original statments suggests no but more recent ones suggest yes. Explained. If neither of Sasuki's parents slept with a guy or in vitro? Futanari?

    Is Sakura a whore? Her private life being known across the lands suggest yes.

    Why did Sasuki bring up the three women cell bit. Konoha is the only one who does not have solely women cells.

    Hope Hanabi joins in as well! SOunds like we might get femNagato (is her legitimate name Pain?); hope Konan joins them!

    Mari and Obi get VERY OOC...are they drugged?

    Tsunade would be a couple of decades older than Mina.

    How did Mina not recognize Obi?

    Where can I find your fic Remember the Name?

    Please continue this!
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  • From ANON - Christopher on November 16, 2013
    Good on ya with that idiot on whatever website you are talking about in the latest chapter (betting it is FF.net). I can understand narc'ing on somethin because it is 'against the rules' (though I never understood why FF.net just did not put up a M-rated or X-rated story rank) but as you said, doing that just because there is something in the story that you dislike is moronic at best.
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  • From ANON - ManagerBob on November 16, 2013
    Don't let the ramblings of an isolated lunatic get you down. Just think about the fans who truly enjoy your work.
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  • From ANON - Azachiel on November 16, 2013
    It's a nice story, but you do realize that what you put as Chapter 12 doesn't apply for AFF, so there's really no point putting it here. This site allows smut, so there's literally no chance of that idiot doing anything to it here. What you put as Chapter 12 is for fanfiction.net, it doesn't have any purpose on AFF.
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  • From ANON - Kenshin Ryuu on November 16, 2013
    Oh man, your reply to that Douchebag is epic! I'm glad I found this fic on AFN, that way I can keep following it here without any problems.

    I loved the NaruHina scene, I hope there will be a wedding soon. Of course, given the nature of the current world... Hinata will probably come down the wedding isle in wedding night lingerie instead of a dress and it wouldn't surprise me if they consummated the marriage on the altar in front of everyone.

    I would like to see a little more of Kumiko, you'd think she'd be more attached to Naruto with him being her current container.
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  • From Shinjin_the_Shinobi-Assassin on November 16, 2013
    Don't listen to them folks. This story is great, though it'll take getting used to lolz. There was another that also had Naruto as the only Male ninja and any other was female. o.o

    You can always put it up at the fanfic site: "Ficwad", as a precaution. :)
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  • From ANON - T on November 16, 2013
    Sounds like you got trolled, the thing with trolls is you don't feed them. They feed on attention since
    they get none in the real world. Ignore them, they will go back to their cave and the world can once
    more pretend they don't exist.
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