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Reviews for What are you staring at, Usuratonkachi?

By : Lilly_Hatake
  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2013
    Yes please!! You need to continue with this story! At least a part 2 to make them come together for real, not just dreaming, with Sasuke unreqited and Naruto left off wondering who Sasuke dream of like that... too cruel to both Sasuke and Naruto to finish off like that!!! :(

    I agree with another reader about getting Beta. I don't want your language barier to take away/distract readers, this story's too good for that!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2013
    I really liked it, you should continue the story! Hope you will find some native speaker to help u with editing, there are some grammar mistakes... but the plot is great :)
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  • From ANON - narugirl44 on September 14, 2013
    that was AWESOME! incredible story so far and so vivid and realistic too ;O you should DEFINITELY continue it!! especially since it didn't actually happen since it was only an illusion or dream that sasuke imagined :/ good job! :) now the real thing needs to happen between the two of them ;) lol
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  • From DemonicTenshi on July 24, 2013
    I tried my hardest to read this however, there are too many grammar mistakes, also you was using the wrong words to describe things, you should really think about beta-ing your work before putting it up for others to read. Sorry >_
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