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By : Storm_Namikaze
  • From jamescun on November 05, 2013
    get Kushina pregnant with Bebo Zakushi baby
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  • From jamescun on October 31, 2013

    plz write more

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  • From snake1980 on July 16, 2013
    great job on the new chapter. cant wait to see what u do for anko since u used it for the tsunade already. heres a idea u could have a group of boys run into anko and make her drop her dango on the ground and she gives chance and corners them in a ally were she makes them repay her losing her food. but have to wait and see still great job
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  • From ANON - Kinkyking on July 16, 2013
    Hi, how are you? You did yet another wonderful chapter. You have what it takes to become one of the great Naruto adult fic writers. You are highly descriptive of the sex scenes and u aren't afraid to write kinky stuff.

    I was wondering if you would be so kind to write my challenge fic whenever u get a chance. I posted it on the forums. I think your writing style is perfect for my fic. This is the link

    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php/topic/51017-sakura-babysitting-fic/

    Please please accept it. If you don't like the plot and you want to change it I'm willing to hear new ideas. Please post on the forum and let me know if u can do it or send me an email.

    Thank you for your time and I hope you do my challenge.

    Kinkyking
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  • From joeparas1988 on July 08, 2013
    I like how slutty Kushina is without being cruel or adulterous. It's a fresh change. It'd be even hotter if she tells Naruto about it.

    As for Naruto, I figured you would have had him know about Sakura and just not care - he's been banging his mum and he IS the Hokage, after all.
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  • From ANON - Shoutavsmilfs on July 08, 2013
    This chapter seems kinda rushed. Was wondering, seeing as how quite a few of these are girls Naruto's age having sex with boys (mostly Kon) that now, as Naruto comes into the picture, alongside the shouta going on we see Naruto getting with older women, most of which are married with/without children (Kushina, Yoshino, Tsume, Tsunami, Kurenai etc)
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  • From snake1980 on July 06, 2013
    4th chapter may have been short but still was good wish it was a little longer but what can u do. have to wait and see what u come up with in the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Andrei on July 06, 2013
    I think Kushina deserves a chapter for her!!!!
    Make a orgy with the parents fucking their daughters hiashi/sakura/Ino Shukaku?Hinata/TenTen Inochi/Temari Minato/Hinata
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  • From ANON - Andrei on July 06, 2013
    I would like to see the girls with older men too!!!!
    Great story!!!Congratulations!!!!!
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  • From snake1980 on July 05, 2013
    glad to hear that u are going to make the story longer, cant wait to see what u do. I do have a question if u do another one how about just having kon is the only guy screwing the girl/girls instead of other guys joining the fun? u could do another story were naruto gets with the older girls anko,kurenai,tsunade,kushina, and so on
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  • From WhiteWhiskey on July 05, 2013
    For the academy orgy, you might think of adding Suzume, a chunin academy teacher from Ino and Sakura's flashbacks (Or maybe as a flashback with the guys from Naruto's class.
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  • From ANON - Jordinio on July 05, 2013
    Hmm. On the chapter with Kushina. Why not break it all up into different parts. For instance, Kushina teaches at the academy and gives a rowdy student detention. Then he fucks her after school in an empty classroom. Karin could still be under watch and a young Genin assigned to watch her could then fuck her. Mei's own fucking would be from her new apprentice and then Moegi is on a mission with a few genin who gangbang her?

    I think it would really show how much of a slut Kushina is for her to fuck one of her students because they have a big cock.

    My only gripe is, I believe you should go into a bit more description. Like dirty talk from the girls, how their big tits bounce around as their fucked, how they scream as their fucked etc.
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  • From Anon on July 05, 2013
    Ok how about a flashback where LoliHinata peeped on ShotaNaruto and her mother?
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  • From WhiteWhiskey on July 05, 2013
    Otherwise, hot story. Not usually one for cheating stories, but this is pretty good.

    Any chance of seeing Moegi make her move on Naruto? Or maybe different flashbacks (Chouji, Kiba, SHikamaru with each others mothers, or Ino's mom or Mebuki Haruno.)
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  • From ANON - lalalalaa on July 05, 2013
    Love the story and the shouta, as well as how you protrayed all the girls, my only complaint would probably be the OCs but other than that great story!
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