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Reviews for The Road of Life

By : LollyDream
  • From ANON - kit on June 19, 2013
    I was very excited to see the next chapter posted up so quickly. I really enjoy your writing style and the way the relationship between kakashi and ino is developing. The back and forth banter they have is cute and also highly amusing. It seems like I'm siding toward a kakashi/ino relationship rather than a shika/ino. I actually giggled when kakashi revealed that he had sensed shikamaru's presence the other night. how embarrassing for shikamaru. I love how blunt kakashi is and the fact that you are able to portray him in character. Bravo! Unfortunately, there are not that many authors who are capable of that.
    hm....so sasuke is coming back. I wonder how you will write that out? I find it frustrating when in some stories sasuke is able to return with no repercussion or explanations. I prefer when he has to go through some form of probation.... I have faith that it will be well-written though!! Hopefully sakura isn't too obsessed over him. I wonder who the yaoi couple will be? I have a few guesses as to who....
    I can not wait to see when it is revealed. :D
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  • From MisatosPenPen on June 18, 2013
    Still enjoying it! I like the slow creep up. Glad to hear Sasuke's alive.
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  • From ANON - kit on June 17, 2013
    This story is so cute!! I love the interaction between kakashi and ino. When I first started reading this, I didn't think they would pair off well as a couple, but after this chapter I am rooting for them!! I feel bad for shikamaru though.
    I was curious about the fact that shikamaru had followed them. Wouldn't kakashi be able to sense his presence since he is a highly ranked ninja? just wondering. It doesn't negatively affect my perspective on this adorable story
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  • From MisatosPenPen on June 15, 2013
    You're low star rating depresses me. I'm enjoying it. I love Kakashi and this is a cute pairing. Sakura and Sasuke have to make an appearance at some point, not so? And maybe Sai? But don't let me lead you because I love what you're doing. Kakashi's so cute!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on June 13, 2013
    You wrote Kakashi very well. I enjoyed it and was sad when it was over. Please update soon. The flirting was spectacular by the way.
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