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Reviews for Through The Woods

By : TheLegendaryDumbass
  • From AFFModerator on April 08, 2013

    Please correct your disclaimer.


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  • From Rixxell_Stryfe on April 05, 2013
    I liked this story much better then your others. That said, I do get the feeling that you don't really like Hinata. Frankly I wish that this story in particular could have gone that extra step and captured Kurenai alongside Hinata so that we could have not only some variety in the lemon, but it would also have been more fitting to the theme of the story.

    I do hope that you come back with a sequel or second chapter that involves Kurenai coming up on the group through use of genjutsu while leaving her team to inform the village of the situation. Of course I would fully expect that she is caught with no problems. This can then end up with Kurenai suffering a similar fate which would greatly appease me and likely others. If this was to lead to Hinata and Kurenai fully succumbing to their fate in that they wouldn't be rescued and would embrace what is happening, all the better in my mind.

    I really would like you to please add more variety in your upcoming stories. I really would love if you pulled out a Naruko/Hinata/complete travesty fic along the lines of what you have so far and such a thing would be much better if it were to involve Sasuke. Or something involving the females from Team 8 plus Naruko and Ino getting themselves a mission where they must use their bodies, which ends up in a similar but different event like 'Beyond Hope' by Danny3125 would really be preferable.

    Thanks for writing and keep up the good work:)
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