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Reviews for Revenge Of The Mind Walker

By : TheLegendaryDumbass
  • From ANON - SuperSamm on November 18, 2016

    Ino can't make a solid clone.


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  • From ANON - MagicMan on December 04, 2014
    lololol at all the raging Hinata fans. Great fic! Akamaru fucking Hinata, while Hinata eats out Ino was just perfect
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  • From ANON - spiritwolf on June 26, 2014
    I really like this story I would love to see you do more chapters where Akamaru has sex with all the Naruto Females
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  • From ANON - spiritwolf on March 25, 2014
    I think you should do more stories like this but have it where Akamaru has sex with more girls than just Hinata if you do a story like that then I would love to read it
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  • From ANON - Jeff on September 04, 2013
    Let's see what Ino says once the Hyuuga clan goes to war with them.
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  • From ANON - Mars on April 25, 2013
    Why didn't Hinata,say, Jyuuken Ino in the heart or throat when she was so close? Trigger a clot that would lead to a pulmonary embolism if not reversed; see how that changes Ino's tune.
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  • From ANON - summer on April 09, 2013
    more stories need to use that Jutsu,
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  • From AFFModerator on April 08, 2013

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2013
    Although this has been said before, I'm guessing you aren't a fan of Hinata
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  • From snake1980 on April 06, 2013
    man great job on the one shot. it was very good. im guessing u dont really like hinata since in teh 3 storys u have she is pretty much screwed. so looking forward to see what u do for your next story. did 2 akamaru with hinata and one with her being caught. so what next hinata taking care of hanas dogs and tehy have there way with her?
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  • From ANON - Minato on April 05, 2013
    Omgosh!! *claps* what a story!! Awesome dude! That was kinky! I'm loving your stories dude! Seeing how your fucking Hinata like the bitch she is only makes it better haha. Keep on the great work and don't listen to the haters. Nothing worse than whiny Hinata fags.. Sorry I mean fans.. Lol
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  • From ANON - guest on April 05, 2013
    Do you have a deep hatred for hinata or something
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