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Reviews for Thank you for loving me

By : NaruHaremFan
  • From ANON - yoh on January 05, 2015
    hot chapter! i love hot you described the sex scene! if you every want to look other authors who also do good sex scenes check out stromarrow: naruto lemon chronicles, Banging a Brat by Ippikki-Ookami and badass: warfare if the dead by The BadAss Writer!

    my suggestion for the next woman: tsunade, kurenai, shizuka!

    i hope we get to see a new chapter this year! :)
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  • From SirGeneralSir on May 22, 2014
    ok so ive read the story a few times, just to make sure i got it all and every thing and i would first like to say that i mostly enjoy it.

    first thing, the monster cock, there is no way that a woman would be able to take 12in dick, there are some that cant take 6in and if you force it you are going to really hurt the woman, even if its just a fictional story, there are some things that really should be considered.

    unless the woman had her cervix open, and that really only happens when giving birth or during some kind of surgery, getting into the womb and everything would cause injury, if you were to use a tentacle instead, well it has a small tip and could slowly force things open but thats not the case.

    over sized breasts, if every woman has over sized breasts in a story, it starts to become a gag, then it can become annoying because all the women would feel like they are just a copy of the other girl and there is no variety, its ok if thats your kink, but consider the other side of the coin.

    over all a nice story, could be better but it still works and i hope you dont take the review personal or anything.
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  • From vewtwo on March 08, 2014
    hi,
    > I loved your fic "Thank you for loving me," I hope more quickly.
    >
    > I suggest you girls: shizuka, shion, hotaru, and ino seeking redemption.
    >
    > soon.
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  • From ANON - Revenge! on January 18, 2014
    I wanna see Naruto bust out like dude from School Days and sleep with all the fraud girls and show them what they missed out on before letting them tear each other down trying to either get with him or ruin each other's chances trying to get him
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  • From ANON - A reviewer on January 01, 2014
    This story deserves more reviews, especially at the dawn of the new year. Awesome chapter, with lots of loving action with Hinata and Samui. I'd be pretty satisfied if you left the harem as it is, though it's up to you if you want more. Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ANON - Hilarity88 on November 30, 2013
    Your name may say NaruHaremFan but I see no harem or updates!
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  • From ANON - Oppai-king on May 19, 2013
    Please update! i'm on the edge of my seat waiting for this to update! also would you added Samui into the harem? also a school nurse Tsunade also?!
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  • From summerss on April 09, 2013
    great lemon
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  • From ANON - Odinson83 on April 02, 2013
    This is perhaps the hottest lemon I've ever read. I mean that sincerely, you perfectly conveyed the passion and desire while still keeping the sense that this wasn't just physical for them but like they were finding their long lost other half. I realize that this will soon be a mini-harem fic but if it was a Naruto/Hinata or just a oneshot this would be awe-inspiring by itself.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2013
    It would be awesome if you could write a second part of this story where Naruto and Hinata go back to school and show them all that they won't be taking anymore of their crap. They should kick some butts and pay back some of the emotional torment. Revenge... Need I say more?
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  • From ANON - cade117 on April 01, 2013
    Umm I'm new to reviewing on this site so I'll be straightforward. I just made a profile just now on this site so I can follow this story. please make more soon. thank you for making this.
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  • From TB on March 31, 2013
    Good story hope you continue but keep all the other guys away from Hinata and i mean if you get a idea that they should hurt Naruto by raping Hinata or if any guy even touchs her any sexual way i'll quit reading and a question will this have yuri?
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  • From kotkas24 on March 31, 2013
    Great start.
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