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  • From ANON - summer on April 09, 2013
    awesome toilet chapter
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  • From theimpacientone on April 07, 2013
    okay, that is one chapter to look fpward to, as well as the reaction that both Hinata (which strikes me that she doesn't know what her girlfriend is up to, but still more than willing to get in the fun (because its ALWAYS the quiet ones))and Ino what they find out what naruko's into, also thank you for adressing the scat thing. as for your question it boils down to what you want from the story: you want a smut fic? then a PWP is more than enough, if you however wnat something beyond that, where there'sa reason to what the character is doing but still sex is teh primary part of the plot (like lemon sage's eroninja) then you need to add something else beyond writting smut, as gratyfing as it is. That being said can you add samui and mei terumi somewhere down the line? and finally for teh challenge you presented in teh first chapter, does a HP fic counts for it?
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  • From ANON - Mars on April 07, 2013
    Not really, it's enjoyable as is.
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  • From ANON - batgerel on April 07, 2013
    not twisted enough

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  • From ANON - VOGoshinki on April 06, 2013
    Not bad, I like it.

    Just again no futa and your good(if you dont know what that is its a girl with a dick)

    Im hoping tenten isnt the girl mentioned in this chapter, I figured she would be better jsut as a nomral sex slave or something.

    I can think of a nickname and role for her if you need one.
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  • From ANON - Ornaldus on April 06, 2013
    Hi,

    Love the Story, I'm looking forward to the Toilet chapter. Personally I hope you will also branch into incest.

    I saw a few people suggesting what fetishes not to do (scat), I think you can whatever you want to. Of course any chapters that go too far in my opinion (snuff, guro) I will make sure to skip, others should do the same.

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  • From Snailfap on April 05, 2013
    Thought I should provide some feedback since I enjoy this fic so much. I enjoy the plot, not usually into complete yuri but this is great.

    I love how you're introducing a variety of characters, a lot of secondary characters are completely ignored so it's nice to see them used.

    I'm not a fan of piss so that makes me slightly uneasy but I also understand that some enjoy it and the quality of the story makes up for it.

    Perhaps in the future you could have slaves pit against each other or placed into mutual bondage, maybe even get a reversal so Naruko gets her turn as a slave.

    Great story, don't stop writing.
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  • From theimpacientone on April 05, 2013
    a bit twisted, I hope it doesnt get weirder than this, just pelase stay way rom scatt or fecal play, that's where i draw the line
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  • From ANON - VOGOSHINKI on April 05, 2013
    Just dont do any scat or futa and youll be fine.
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  • From ANON - Kevin on April 05, 2013
    If you want a villianness to use in this story that is totally un expected then I would go with Demona or the Evil Kim Possible from another story on this site. Demona just because she hates humans witj such a passion and the Evil Kim because in the story I am thinking of has her morals flipped and will do anything she wants.
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  • From ANON - annon on April 04, 2013
    Try karin She is the most annoying charecter to date
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  • From ANON - cmcwiki on April 04, 2013
    in regards to female villains. a shippuden filler arc has provided a perfect one. http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fuka fuka. I think she is exactly what you are looking for
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  • From iamjmph01 on April 04, 2013
    im not sure i can help with ideas, but i wanted to say thanks for writing this. Its great.

    Umm...female villans..
    Karin-she willingly worked with orochi and then sasuke.....
    Fuuku
    http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/F%C5%ABka
    Guren-before she trys to be a better person
    maybe one of the fuma chicks who joined orochi...
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  • From Snailfap on April 04, 2013
    Some hot stuff, really enjoy the total helplessness of the situation. I'm glad to see you included Tayuya as well, she was a great character that was wasted for nothing. I don't know if they meet your requirements but a few female villains include Konan, Karin, Guren and Fubuki. Fubuki is probably the closest to your criteria but she only appeared in one of the filler movies. Anyways keep up the good work, eagerly anticipating the new chapters.
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  • From omegadelta on April 03, 2013
    love it, need more.
    can't wait to see ten ten or shizune, or better yet naruko using hinata to capture and break kurenai.

    10/10
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