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Reviews for The first time

By : vermilioncream
  • From ANON - Daga on October 08, 2013
    WOW! I can't belive it's you first story and that english isn't your first language. I is so damn good!
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  • From Mysticaldragon11 on February 11, 2013
    I absolutely loved this story! English may not be your first language but you really nailed it. :)
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  • From ANON - Serenity-James on February 10, 2013
    i thought it was really good for ur first fic and i hope u do a sequel or more naruto/sasuke fics so far just bout every naruto/sasuke fics i found they have made naruto a girl im glade u keep them both boys anyway i loved it and cant wait to read more of ur work
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  • From whitetiger on February 09, 2013
    This was really good for being your first fanfiction. And I am very impressed at your ability to write it when english is not your first language. If there was an individual rating system you would get five out of five stars from me. Thank you for the post I look forward to many more from you.
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