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Reviews for The Uzumaki Clan: Rise of the Legendary Rokudaime

By : FishDragon
  • From Lucifer on July 23, 2017

    You should really carry on this story.

    The relationship between Kushina and Naruto is very complex and interesting. How Kushina uses Naruto as a Pseudo-Minato to cope with her loss and then pretends it doesn't happen. The way Naruto starts to love Kushina even though he knows she is using him.

    I really want to see more of thier interactions.


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  • From ANON - biob on June 04, 2015
    You are turning naruto in to a certifiable emo YES with his situation I can understand the angst but for goodness sakes it has to make sense I mean this is equivalent to a cliche romantic comedy that only has a conflict because the characters are too stupid to tell when being blunt and honest would solve the situation for example if he just straight up told kushina how he felt then there really wouldn't be a problem. Also he is in a NINJA VILLAGE how is him practicing a technique THAT big a deal sure the damage might be SLIGHTLY annoying but you would think them being in a village of NINJA who train and practice destructive techniques this would most likely be a COMMON occurrence. Then you have naruto who was training with KYUUBI'S chakra wouldn't he want to practice using his own power first before using a power he could barely control because if he had he probably would not have lost control of the technique and been in that situation in the FIRST place. I would also like to comment on how BORING it is when the main character has problems but in NO WAY seeks to fix them instead choosing to do NOTHING but brood and whine about them it's not just boring it is also ANNOYING. FINALLY and the thing I am probably most DISSAPPOINTED in is that in your summary you implied that there would be multiple uzumaki women making advances toward naruto yet the ONLY woman I see making advances toward him is kushina AN THAT'S ONLY WHEN SHE IS DELIRIOUS WITH GRIEF.
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  • From ANON - Gemini-Spark on August 09, 2014
    i think naruto should be more angry at his mother she rapes him and then calls him minato and she did'nt want to tell him about the kyuubi so he could have a normal childhood hahaha very funny naruto never had a normal childhood
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  • From ANON - meh on October 05, 2013
    Well, I guess I don't remember much from the waterfall other than Hero's water, so idk about the boasting.

    Though I do note one thing that actually deserves a mention: You did raise the age for genin and the rookies by 3 years, and I understand why(Naruto and Kushina couldn't have their situation go back years, for one). This is not uncommon, although the reasons why it is done has varied quite a bit. However, what is uncommon and worthy of notice is that you didn't keep them acting exactly the same immature way they were in canon when they graduated. It wasn't clear before, but shows in team interactions.

    Although it is kind of strange to have Ino not teamed up with Shikamaru, given how well that combination works. Although Choji often gets replaced, even he makes sense as he would enable both a distraction and another way to hold down, both of which usually don't apply to replacements. On the other hand, Kiba would enable tracking better.

    As for the Shadow clone...Well, one of the reasons I've viewed Naruto getting back from training with Jiraya strong enough to best S-class ninjas is that. More drilling of the basics and all.
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  • From ANON - meh on October 05, 2013
    "Well after I found him last night, he seemed pretty calm, although this morning he was extremely agitated, but I'm not sure about what."

    Haha, oblivious son-rapist Kushina. Gee, don't you think your son doesn't have enough of an issue for being viewed as someone else he certainly is not(Kyuubi, Minato)?

    In any case, you have my kudos for writing lemon-centric story that has plot and isn't all happiness or grimdark.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2013
    Some points I wanted to make.

    1) Jiraiya knows nothing about teaching someone about how to be Jinchuriki. His idea of training Naruto to use the Kyubi was throw him off a cliff!

    2) Reading through the first 5 chapters I was under the impression everyone including Naruto knew about Kyubi being sealing in him. He's 16 in this story and I don't believe for a second Mito or Kushina would allow him to be in the dark that long without telling him, not to mention training him.

    3) Minato credited Kushina not Jiraiya with his knowledge of seals the level of the Shiki Fuijin. He used what she knew of the Uzumaki sealing techniques to create it. So to say they would have less knowledge of it than Jiraiya is insulting to them.

    4) Jiraiya is not a master of fuinjutsu, he knows more about fuinjutsu than the Sandiame which means he's likely go be good or very good with it but Mito was a bon-a-fide fuinjutsu legend and just an overall legend herself on par with her husband said to be one of the strongest men of the Naruto world sense the Rikkidu Sannin.

    5) To have Kushina alive, and then make Mito also among the living and not have them teach Naruto about his responsibilities not only to the clan but as a Jinchuriki ... I have no words for that.

    There's so much more, but this last chapter just makes it impossible for this to be more than just lemons involving the lovely Uzumaki ladies for me.
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  • From ANON - Syxx on January 08, 2013
    What a really cool story. Looks like you have thought this story out very well. Hoping that there is a cance for Tsunade to be in Naruto harem. Looking fowrd to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Xager on January 06, 2013
    Yo, I like your fic, although I think Naruto needs to change Kushina's mind about calling him 'Minato' eventually.

    My ideas for the teams:
    Team 7: Sasuke Uchiha, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga. Sensei: Kakashi Hatake.
    Team 8: Naruto Uzumaki, Shino Aburame, Ino Yamanaka. Sensei: Kurenai Yuhi.
    Team 9: Rock Lee, Chouji Akamichi, Sakura Haruno. Sensei: THE MOST YOUTHFUL MAITO GAI! YOSH!
    Team 10: Shikamaru Nara, Tenten Higurashi (Whatever Tenten's last name is), Kiba Inuzuka. Sensei: Asuma Sarutobi.

    AND GIVE NARUTO HIS SHADOW CLONES! Naruto isn't Naruto without his damn Shadow Clones!

    Anyway, this is well written, well thought out, and needs more views for what it is. Peace out.

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  • From DevilHeart435 on January 06, 2013
    You are missing a section of the story in chapter 3 where Kushina hugs Naruto and says something to him, but it doesn't show up you might want to go back and re-edit that part so it will be easier for people to understand.

    Just thought I should let you know.
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  • From ANON - WickedT on January 05, 2013
    I want Naruto to start taking a stronger stance. No longer letting others dictate how things are done. Maybe get some revenge and show exactly how different he is from Minato. Maybe even give Kushina a taste of her own medicine.
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  • From Takai153 on January 04, 2013
    Love the story! Look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2013
    This is pretty decent actually. I'm enjoying what I've read for no.
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