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Reviews for Naruto: Starting Anew

By : Dansama92
  • From Poseidon on June 06, 2024

    Waneer komt het volgende deel online

     


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  • From ANON - Mistress Kitsume on November 06, 2015
    Absolutely amazing story. I can't wait for the next chapter ^μ^
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  • From cooutlaw on March 08, 2015
    More write more I hate watching stories die
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  • From SirGeneralSir on May 23, 2014
    ok so not a bad story, it needs a little fixing up, like ch8 has 2 copies of it one after the other.

    I think that the reasoning behind WHY each girl cheated on him should be explained, was there something stopping them from having the relationship continue and so on, was there pressure, rape or what have you.

    i think you mostly kept the characters that are actually known in character for the most part, and i mean that in a good way, it makes them feel like who they are.

    one thing that i feel is annoying to see, is the constant "Lemon" or "Time Skip" and so on, we don't need that, you have written it well enough that we can tell the change, even if its meant as a warning, its an adult site so ... yeah.

    hope to see you finish the story.
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  • From ANON - Thonia on February 27, 2013
    Great story I really enjoyed it and please continue this story!!!!!!
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  • From Teeraal on January 07, 2013
    good story. bit short of chapters though. i feel very sorry for naruto and how he had his heart broken 10 times this is like a more extreme case of what happened in Do I Have A Purpose Anymore? by Kingkakashi on fanfiction.net. the same thing happened there only hinata was forced to be with kiba by him and hiashi ino was tricked by shika and sakura was just a stupid bitch that deserves to die for the way she acted and then after her betrayal thinking he would just take her back.

    though to be honest... i think i like his better for the plot but yours shows alot of promise in the other areas. (though i do hate hinata being with kiba... thats a scenario i just can never stand for some reason)

    anyway hope to see more of this
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  • From ANON - Tempest on January 03, 2013
    I was really hooked by the story of this fic, though the lemons were a bit short it still has a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Rescue 007 on January 03, 2013
    I could swear I already read this story on fanfiction.net ... None of these chapters are new
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  • From ANON - shortfused24 on January 02, 2013
    good story i liked it when i read the few chps on ff pls keep them coming
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  • From ANON - Aluma on January 01, 2013
    I really hope you get some back story for some of the cheating Ayame especially. AN would be fine.
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