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Reviews for Holiday Revenge

By : PhoenixInnocence
  • From Lolita-buNoToni-sama on February 27, 2014
    This fic was so good! The emotion and drama was amazing and the conflict ran high. Sasuke was a total arsehole and I never felt sorry for him because I totally blamed him for everything. It was his fault. He never gave Naruto the benefit of the doubt or tried to let him explain. I was on Naruto's side the entire time. This was wonderful and Sakura pissed me off so much, but she was dealt with in a manner that she deserved and made me happy. It was wonderfully written and I didn't catch any mistakes, you did a really good job! Thanks for sharing this ^_^
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  • From ANON - Britany B on November 22, 2013
    Amazing story! I could not stop reading this, good job ;D
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  • From ANON - lo on November 19, 2013
    Wow! I ate this all up! This was a lot of fun to read the drama and heart ache were wonderful in this story. Nice work.
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  • From ANON - neko-tan on November 10, 2013
    Hnnnnnngggg!!!!! >.< !! I loved it sooo much!
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  • From ANON - Daga on October 08, 2013
    Well, I must agree with alienX. Your Naruto is completely unconvincing for me... it's like only the name is left from the original character... The story starts promising but... The characters are very shallow, one-dimensional (weak Naruto, bossy Sasuke, sugar-sweet parents...), the plot gets more and more unrealistic (all the involvement of parents to get back and eventually merry their underage and clearly very immature children, no credible reason for Sakura's change of heart etc.) Not to end with pure criticism - you have quite nice writing style and some original ideas, I like the kaka/ita end - it was a really nice touch. I would guess that you are still very young (the story shows teenage perspective on life) and with time maybe you will get more into characters psychology rather then strange plot twists and use your writing skills better. But thats only my opinion, you have a lot of support from other readers. I hope I won't discourage you only motivate to get better :)
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  • From ANON - catiemon on September 09, 2013
    Oh, it's done now... I really loved the ending. I was smiling the entire time I was reading it. In the end, I felt sorry for Sakura. I guess she truly did love Naruto. ^_^
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  • From NAnderson on September 09, 2013
    That was a sweet ending to such a cute story :) Great writing!
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on September 08, 2013
    Two weddings huh? Sounds like an excellent reason for a sequel story hmm ;3 ?!
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on September 08, 2013
    thankyou so much for finishing the story. defiantly happy everything worked out in the end. would love it if you maybe fif a story on Itachis relationship or maybe a oneshot of sasuke and naruto's married life.
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  • From Katrellepps on August 12, 2013
    This is a Great Story! I'm finally Happy that someone made a Story Where Kushina, Minato, Fugato, and Mikoto are Alive!!! As well as Itachi, but the reason this is one of my a protea is because it Crosses the border between The Naruto Saga we know and brings it over in Reality and gives it some problems that most people go through like Rejection, Sexuallity, Parental Aproval, acceptance, and just Plain Love and Hate! PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE ILL BE LOOKING IN ON THE NEXT CHAPER!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ZarahJade on July 24, 2013
    I love love love love love this story! I hope you continue it!!!
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  • From AlienixX on July 14, 2013
    Honestly speaking, I’m disappointed with how the story is progressing. Our lovers are nothing more than two spoilt boys, absolutely incapable of resolving a simple misunderstanding, reach to each other, even write a text message make a phone call… talk. And now you play the standard *Sasuke’s pride* card… Do they know what love is? A thriller turned into foolish sitcom or farce.
    What’s the use of constant involving in-laws and Itachi at all? Sakura isn’t some Terminatrix :) If Sasuke and Naruto are unable to stand this little test, what kind of future do they have at all? To threaten her with ruining her career prospects her family’s businesselse is a gross overkill and just not fair. And for Itachi to use any ‘heavy’ methods on the girl, already humiliated and hated by her schoolmates – again.
    To me, it’s just one more proof that our two guys are spoilt brats. And Sasuke wanted to propose…:)

    But my biggest disappointment is Naruto’s character. Constantly running away from his problems, getting hurt all the time, crying on everyone’s shoulders, pushing the unwanted person *just a second* later etc. etc. He’s just *too* weak, dependent, hyperemotional and plain – weak. Who would need such a creature in real life? Sakura’s more man than him : )
    I honestly don’t know what could make this story more incredible and unrealistic as it is now…

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  • From ANON - FallingStar on July 14, 2013
    I LOVED THIS FANFICTION. I hope both of them just get married soon. I can't believe the 'reinforcements' includes Fugaku too. lol go Kushina!
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  • From ANON - clover on July 13, 2013
    I wouldn't want to be in Itachi's shoes. Dealing with a stubborn brother and that brother's stupid boyfriend would undoubtedly be too much to handle. Still wondering what Itachi will do to Sakura. Wouldn't want to be in her shoes either. Here I thought everything will get resolved but Naruto just had to be stupid and obtuse once more. He's right, he keeps messing up. Any level-headed person would think of avoiding Sakura knowing she had stirred up trouble already. But no. Naruto just had to stay after class to talk to her. Oh well, I'm with Sasuke this time. He may be stubborn and insensitive but if I were in his place, I probably would've jumped to conclusion as well and save my heart from further pain. Thing is, if Itachi was right and Sasuke isn't one to bend easily, then it would be difficult to get those two back together.


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  • From NAnderson on July 12, 2013
    Another deliciously heartbreaking yet funny chapter. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter :)
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