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By : PhoenixInnocence

From ANON - redfox9t on May 24, 2013
updateeee pleaseee!!!!
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From ANON - Angel on May 02, 2013
I hate Sakura. And I really hope she hasn't completely ruined Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. Keep up the good work and update soon! :D
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From whitetiger on April 30, 2013
Another wonderful chapter, thank you sooooo much for the update. First off, forget having one of the other characters knock Sakura on her ass. Write me in as a character, I'll give her a beat down that will have the school talking for generations. -_-
I love the way you have exposed Sakura's evil genius for us all to see, she is a woman who knows what she wants and does everything in her power to get it. It's just too bad she is so willing to destroy something special to reach her goal. I know a few people like that in real life.
I feel bad for Naruto, he wants to be a good person, and is someone who gives all he has to those he cares about. However, in a way he got exactly what was coming to him. He knew Sakura was ruthless in her desires, he witnessed that first hand when she chased after Sasuke all their life, so her behavior shouldn't come as such a surprise to him when she switched her focus to him.
And Sasuke, can we say trust issues? Seriously what was he thinking? When he realized Sakura was the one that sent the text and set the whole thing up he should have slapped that bitch so hard she saw stars, but no he over-reacted and turned on the one person who loves him most. I know you can only give someone so many chances to change but he should think before he reacts.
I truly hope the both of them can come through this storm together and find a deeper love that CAN stand the test of time. -sigh- I sound like a hopeless romantic, but what can I say? I always root for true love. :)
Good job, I can't wait for your next post.
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From ANON - G on April 27, 2013
The problem with Naruto's behavior around Sakura is that it should be EASY to reject her. He's GAY. And yet he can't find the backbone to put her in her place. A simple, "I'm not interested and your behavior is making me uncomfortable" is usually enough to chase most people off. Sakura isn't most people, but Naruto hasn't even done the minimum (directly confronting her about her behavior) to get her to stop. He just runs away and avoids confronting her whenever she's making him uncomfortable. Come on now, he's no baby. He needs to man up and handle his business instead of avoiding the issue or waiting for Sasuke to take care of it for him.

Here's a scenario: supposing the one after Naruto were another hot guy with a charming personality, someone who would be legitimate competition for Sasuke.

Sure, Sasuke is stupid for doing exactly what Sakura wants, especially when he knows there's no way Naruto could return her feelings (even though she did do a good job planting doubts in his head), but supposing the above scenario were to take place (and it's very possible that in the future it would, especially since Naruto is cute), what's Sasuke supposed to do then? He's supposed to be able to TRUST that Naruto could handle his business without Sasuke constantly needing to watch over him so he doesn't get himself into trouble with other people.

Naruto isn't stupid (much) and he's not a princess, so why should Sasuke need to intervene on Naruto's behalf with a forceful suitor? Does Naruto ever intervene with Sasuke's fangirls (and fanboys)? With all the people who want Sasuke, you'd think Naruto would also be stressed out about the competition, but he's not. So Sasuke deserves to feel the same kind of security in their relationship that Naruto does. It's not much to ask for.
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From ANON - kkt on April 26, 2013
uh-oh! Naruto better not take Sasuke back too easily. The boy's gotta learn there are no take backs when it comes to breaking up
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From ANON - Athrun434 on April 25, 2013
thanks for the wonderful chapter. when I got to the part about to ring I thought it was very lovey dovey but then the ending poor naruto fantastic cliff hanger.
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From ANON - clover on April 25, 2013
I seriously cried on that last part. Either Naruto's too nice that he doesn't just push Sakura away -- literally and figuratively -- or he's too dumb and oblivious that he doesn't get what Sakura's trying to do. I know it's cruel, but I would've done the same thing Sasuke did. Naruto needs something to shake him up and that break up may just do the job. I hope. Maybe if he sees Sasuke hanging out with someone new, he'll grow a back bone and bitch slap Sakura.

I am enjoying the story. Please keep it coming. I hope you update soon.

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From ANON - Kyoko21 on April 25, 2013
Ano... Ano.... Can u like make Kushina help fix the relationship between sasu n naru. Maybe she give advise to Naru like... What if U put sasuke in your shoe, u saw him been kissed by another girl and he didn't pushed her away, how would you feel?.... And then naru would realize his mistake and try to fix it... Kushina invite sasu to dinner n that's when naru try to fix it and being stubborn not to break. And somehow Minato find out the relationship and was about to oppose but stopped by Kushina and been talked into reasons.... Meanwhile itachi and shikamaru found out about sakura's scheme and torture her, in secret.... Hehehe.... That's my version of next chapter but if it's different then what u want then it's ok if u don't want to make it like what i imagine. I would love to read your story anyway.
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From blugirlami21 on April 24, 2013
That was interesting. I can definitely see both sides of Sasuke and Naruto's sides. Naruto is way too nice and timid which while brash fits into his people pleasing nature. He thinks the best of people and while he knew that Sakura was after him, he would never think that she would intentionally hurt him by sabotaging his relationship with Sasuke by raping his mouth, lol. I mean she's hard core, not many people can get away with manhandling a teenage boy but she somehow managed to both do that and set him up at the same time. Bitch is definitely an evil genius.

I find Sasuke's reaction both stupid and realistic. He's doing exactly what she wanted, he pushed Naruto away because of something that she did. Sasuke thinks that Naruto should have never put himself in the situation to be taken advantage of but he knows deep down that Naruto doesn't want Sakura that way. I don't think that he should have pushed Naruto away though. You don't fix these kinds of trust issues by stepping back. I also think that despite what Sasuke says to Sakura there is doubt there about Naruto's commitment to their relationship. He can't even acknowledge it to their friends, which would worry anyone, let alone Sasuke who knows first hand how much he liked Sakura before they started dating.

Naruto hopefully now knows what Sakura is capable of and he needs to be very candid about who he is with and who he doesn't want to be with. It's that simple. I don't understand Sakura's thinking though. I just can't see Naruto ever wanting her after all the things that she has done and that she continues to do. She's not exactly super discreet with how she feels or what she is doing. I will say that your take on a spurned by Sasuke Sakura is very interesting but they do say that the flip side of love is hate.
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From solitare1 on April 24, 2013
guess the bitch won. great story.
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From ANON - Ladydeath2013 on April 24, 2013
I really wanna hit Sakura and Sasuke. Poor Naruto. I cant wait till the next chapter
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From ANON - Talltree-san on April 24, 2013
PHOOEY I don't like drama... and yet I still crave it all the same ( what's wrong with me XD )! But what's a story without some pink-haired menace trying to mosey on in your beau :) . And what the heck is Sasuke doing?! He knows what's going on but then he does that crap DX ! But I guess I kinda see where Sasuke is coming from, Naruto should have known just a little better about being alone with Sakura and putting his guard down. Though alas Naruto is just too trusting for his own good :( .
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From ANON - clover on March 30, 2013
I hope Kushina will give Minato a good smack in the head and have him sleep on the couch. lol. I just hope Naruto will come out to his dad so he won't try to hook him up to any girls anymore.

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From ANON - Talltree-san on March 29, 2013
WHOO! Go Sasuke, go Sasuke, GO (waving pompoms wildly) XD ! Yeah... I'm feeling quite energetic right now jamming to Bojo Mujo's Straight Forward on Youtube, and I seriously do have a set of pompoms on hand so... LET THE LOVEY DOVEY GAMES BEGIN (shaking pompoms loudly)! (^-^)
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From whitetiger on March 29, 2013
Ooooooo.. and it's on! May the best person win,(Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke.)
A great chapter as usual! I love it all, the way Naruto's mom loves Sasuke, the way Itachi gets in his little jabs, and the rivalry between Sasuke and Sakura. Though I really don't like the way she is acting. She needs a good beat-down by someone. (Please let it be Ino.)
Can't wait for the next update. :)
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