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By : PhoenixInnocence
  • From ANON - Talltree-san on July 11, 2013
    Gosh dammit Sasuke! He needs to learn to stick around longer and hear the rest of the tale! I wish I was there to give him a SECOND black eye to go with the first one DX !
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  • From mistic-willow on July 11, 2013
    Oooo update pwease, such a good book love your stories
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on July 10, 2013
    yay Sakura got beat. no fair just when I thought everything will work out you throw a twist in the story. loved it cant wait for more
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  • From rosestotts23 on July 10, 2013
    next chapter please
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  • From ANON - joe on June 24, 2013
    (Sakura fastening herself to Naruto’s lips, Naruto frozen in place )

    the same thing again ??? even after naruto said, 'now that i know what she's capable of i'll have my guard up- or i'll be ready- or something similar'

    why are you making naruto such a crying bitch- he's always crying in this story.

    why is naruto sobbing like he and sasuke are really over and done with ? they both know that what is happening is due to the machinations of sakura- they even knew she was gonna fuck with them-- yet they were still unprepared and attacked each other instead of sakura_ how does that make sense______you've done a lot of writing about plotting and causing problems- i hope you pay equal justice to sakura's paying for her crimes- her pain and suffering and especially public humiliation
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  • From ANON - joe on June 24, 2013
    (“I’m not an idiot. I know what she’s capable of now, so I’ll be on my guard. )

    if that's true_ then why would he allow her to invite herself into his home and why would he agree ?? they could meet at a public library, a coffee house, the mall food court_ in public....naruto allowing her in his home just proves he's a retard. you've also shown that minato is a retard- kushina already told him that she doesn't like sakura and naruto doesn't like sakura- that sakura even makes naruto feel uncomfortable- yet you had minato throwing naruto at sakura----that's fucked up.
    -your naruto is a big cry baby and a pussy. this would have been the perfect opportunity for him to tell his father that he and sasuke are dating- that he doesn't like girls, etc....why would he think that his father would be disappointed or hate him---you've written that the uchia/namikaze/uzimake have been friends forever and naruto and sasuke best friends since preschool-- it's not like they couldn't see this coming.
    it doesn't make sense that naruto would invite sakura into his home for hours when he knows what she's trying to do. it doesn't make sense that minato would go against his wife and throw naruto at sakura. and naruto's behavior only makes sense if he's a coward/pussy/retard_____you've also shared that sakura has only been part of their group since junior high- so only a few years----the gang should rally around naruto immediately and shun/punish sakura immediately- yet it's been months and you only have matters getting worse with no one coming to naruto's aid-----all the friends that you said loved him and they know what's going on and are doing nothing?????
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  • From whitetiger on June 13, 2013
    Thank you so much for posting these chapters. I'm sorry I haven't posted a review until now but I have been on a bit of a forced hiatus. I loved the chapters and I'm liking what I think you have in store for the pink haired trollop. I hope Naruto will be okay, being heart broken and having a cold can be a nasty combination. I also love the way Minoto warmed up to his son being gay so quickly and rallying around him against Sakura, that is the way all parents should be. And Sasuke's family (giggles) they are so sure about everything, but it is Itachi (Aka, sexy hunk) that I really enjoy. His protective nature and devious mind are wonderfully portrayed. I can't wait for your next post. :)
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on June 01, 2013
    Man everyone wants to kick Sakura's ass XD lol! I almost feel sorry for her she has no idea of the shitstorm coming her way :) .
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on June 01, 2013
    laughing at the way they are talking about what they would do if they saw sakura. poor naruto hope those too get together soon hate to see him sad
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 31, 2013
    Mikoto sighed. “Oh dear, I think that explains Sasuke’s reasoning for not trusting Naruto.”

    “Sasuke’s insecure, but Naruto is, or was, firm in his feelings. The issue lies with Sasuke alone.”

    Well it looks like Sasuke is taking all the heat for the incident if “The issue lies with Sasuke alone.” That's very disappointing. The fic gave an explanation for Sasuke's trust issues, which was nice and everything, but he's still the one all the other characters (and by extension, the fic itself) is blaming for the breakup. But Naruto screwed up too. Looking at the other reviews, that seems to be what other people think as well. So why does Naruto get to sit in bed and cry about it while everyone pities him, and Sasuke has to run around trying to fix things while everyone blames him?

    Oh, I know, Sakura is the real villain here and the parents are going to get their revenge on her, but the onus is on Sasuke to go apologize when HE was the one who just caught his boyfriend kissing his former crush (and for the second time)? He let Sakura kiss him long enough for her to start fondling his crotch, and all on the BS pretext that his parents told him he should be nice to girls so he didn't want to push her. (If I was in that position and told my BF that was why I didn't push away the girl kissing on me, there's no way he'd ever accept that excuse. And if I was in his position, there's no way I'd ever accept that excuse either. It's more likely there was a part of Naruto that sort of wanted the kiss because he'd had a crush on her long ago and liked the attention now.)

    Sorry for the long review. This chapter was basically pinging on one of my SasuNaru pet peeves - A Naruto who is always so forgiven no matter what he does, and a Sasuke who always takes the blame no matter what they BOTH do.
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  • From MisatosPenPen on May 30, 2013
    I'm so exciting to see a new chapter and I'm sooo looking forward to Itachi's nasty side. I really did love the glimpse into the Uchiha family. ^_^
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  • From ANON - clover on May 30, 2013
    The parents' intervention in this chapter is the best kind of intervention I have ever seen. Not to mention Itachi's intervention. Sakura has no clue what's going to hit her. I can't wait to see what they'll do to her.

    I love how you write the scenes, you make it easy to imagine what's going on. I also love how you write the characters' emotions. It makes me feel what the characters are feeling.

    Now I'm eager to know how Sasuke will propose to Naruto and after all the things Sasuke had said, will Naruto accept? Can't wait to read the next chapter.



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  • From ANON - rose on May 30, 2013
    next chapter please
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  • From ANON - caitlopez on May 30, 2013
    Hi AJ, it's been a while! ^_^ Bad, bad, Sasuke [and Sakura as well]! lol :)

    Looking forward to reading the next one! Hope things are going well on your end.
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  • From ANON - redfox9t on May 30, 2013
    thank you for commenting on my review! I hope more updates will be coming soon. I love the fact that both families are so close. I'm not as concerned about Sakura getting punished, because in the end soulmates will always find their way back to each other.
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