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Reviews for Naruto and his Kunoichis

By : sheltiedg
  • From Hydra-Hunter on October 21, 2013
    Hmm...you ever thought of doing one of these with the RTN versions of the good females? Heck, you could even do that with Menma instead of Naruto as it IS an alterante world. But that's just an idea you are free to use if you want to.
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  • From KhaosKyuubi on October 06, 2013
    I REALLY ant a sequel to this Chapter, It's one of my faves of all in this story.
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  • From ANON - eneas on October 05, 2013
    just amazing

    could you make a chap with shion or shizuka??
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  • From ANON - sss on October 05, 2013
    Your quality has dropped so much. Last few chapters have been pure crap. Especially the orgy.
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  • From ANON - imavirus_2 on September 29, 2013
    You should do one for Kurotsuchi and more female kunoichi like Fu, Mabui or Shizuka
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  • From ANON - desertpunk2 on September 07, 2013
    Chapter 47 was awesome. If you make a sequel to it I think it should be Hinata, Hanabi and Hitomi.
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  • From Takai153 on August 09, 2013
    Liked the use of clones in 43 and 44, but I'm disappointed that there was no DP. Why is this story tagged for several things that never seem to come up, like DP and Anal? That's what I'm looking for!
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  • From ANON - kjs on August 02, 2013
    you should turn this chapter and the first one with tamari into its own story
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  • From ANON - CitizenCain on July 07, 2013
    This is a general review for this fic and your HP(brainy girls) fic; I've noticed you started using an AU/real-life setting for some of your new chapters and all I can think is that your are running out of ideas (pretty reasonable all things considered).

    Another thing is that your chapters seem to be slimming down, there's no mini-build-up anymore , now it's just straight to the sex and nothing else.

    Some of the newer chapters are kind of lacking for the most part. Sure, delivery complete on who Naruto is paired with for the chapter but the dialogue is poor and the descriptions are nearly verbatim of almost every other chapter in both fics when it comes to the actual sex.

    I hope you are able to gain a new sense of creativity to bring a little bit more to these chapters. Perhaps creating new scenarios in which Naruto ends up having sex with the chapter-girl
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  • From ANON - fgh on June 14, 2013
    fix your fucking line spacing. srsly.
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  • From WhiteWhiskey on May 31, 2013
    How about an obscure Kunoichi suggestion...

    Karenbana from the third movie...
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  • From AgentGv01 on May 25, 2013
    Well so far I'm enjoying these little one-shots of yours the only complaint I have is try to refrain from character bashing as that's one of the chidish things to do while writing and I hate that. Also I skip chapters with characters like Hanabi mainly because they are WAY too young generally for this kind of thing unless it's when they are older.

    If you take requests how about a few teaming up ones like with Sakura/Hinata, Sakura/Ino, Sakura/Hinata/Karin with Naruto? Plus I don't think you did Karin yet and I think she could be a nice one. For plots how about he has to rebuild his clan (which can be used for several girls) and is trying to get them pregnant during sex. I forget if you've done any light bondage with either the girl in charge or Naruto. You know like tied to the bed while being teased (blindfold optional so the person has to guess what's happening to them). Maybe even a few role play chapters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2013
    seriously, everytime I read your stories it reminds me of how much I love the inspiration it gave me. also, why not do a Naruto/Shizune/Tsunade chapter? everyone loves that one. or maybe Tsunade could give Sakura some extra lessons
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  • From ANON - Deltafive-O on April 12, 2013
    i think naruto should try it with karin since she is an uzumaki
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  • From VFSNAKE on April 12, 2013
    Awesome! Love it! Get Naruto to have a threesome with Anko and Kurenai!
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