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Reviews for Naruto and his Kunoichis

By : sheltiedg
  • From ANON - Williamgbirkin on August 30, 2014
    Can you do another FemHaku one?
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  • From ANON - DeltaFive-O on April 13, 2014
    Love your stories. i see that you have not made a Karin chapter yet, i would like to read that one.
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  • From ANON - meh* on April 12, 2014
    'Tenten was amazed. Naruto knew how to act like a gentleman.'
    Um, this part seems rather jarring.
    'Once they entered and checked with the maître’d Naruto again showed he was a gentleman as he pulled Tenten’s chair out for her then once she was seated he sat down himself. '
    And, given the usage here, unnecessary.

    Well, here is a piece of a review. Collect all and you'll get a special prize!

    *No way meant to imply anything about the story, but to the busybodies checking the names. Wait, you checked the name, didn't you?
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  • From ANON - a on April 12, 2014
    any chance of FemSasu+FemItachi threesome OwO
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  • From ANON - Milflvve on April 11, 2014
    Nice work till now keep going btw. can you add a few filler's as mebuki haruno or fuuka?


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  • From ANON - William Birkin on March 16, 2014
    Can you do a chapter with Karin?
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  • From ANON - hnn on March 14, 2014
    Continues to get worse, just terrble
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  • From ANON - Lord Farsight on February 16, 2014
    May I humbly ask for a preliminary between Hinata and Naruto? Please.
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  • From ANON - batman on February 14, 2014
    Oh yay another boring cookie cutter chapter, just what nth is story needed more of /s
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  • From sarge2223 on January 14, 2014
    would like to see a Mei Terumi, one with all the MILF's, and one with female kyuubi and female nibi.
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  • From ANON - Day on January 11, 2014
    The Sakura bashing ruined this chapter, which is a shame because it otherwise was above decent. Only massive cunts bash characters in fanfics, especially considering the Sakura chapters in your story are actually the better ones compared to the others.

    You should rewrite this chapter to get rid of the bashing and Sakura a more plausible excuse for not being there, so you don't seem like a massive douchebag.
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  • From AgentGv01 on January 11, 2014
    I really wish you'd stop character bashing in your chapters because I consider that one of the lowest forms of fanfiction writing and I stop reading chapters at that spot like in chapter 60 that ruined the entire chapter for me.
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  • From ANON - Williamgbirkin on January 11, 2014
    I think that you need to redo this paragraph.

    She then tore off Naruto’s pants and boxers to reveal Naruto’s hard appendage. She eyed it like she did a new weapon. He was much nigger than Neji definitely. How she knew this was she snuck a peek of the Hyuga prodigy when he went to take a tinkle. He was adequate that was it though. She didn’t dare to even take a look at what Lee looked like. She already had a pretty good idea with him wearing that green spandex all the time.

    Since you put "He was much nigger than Neji definitely."
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  • From ANON - Star on January 10, 2014
    You should do another sequel to this, this time with a time skip, around the time Naruto returns from his training trip and Sakura expecting him to greet her, instead he greets his three girlfriends.
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  • From ANON - Hilarity on December 25, 2013
    Requesting RTN Hinata, Mito Uzumaki, and Mabui.
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