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Reviews for Soul Rehabilitation

By : Xiophelia
  • From smint45 on December 11, 2012
    Oh that was such a wonderful story!!!! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!!!! See you agian soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - tsuzuke on December 09, 2012
    I see that you like the Kisame/Naruto pairing! XD Anyways, I have enjoyed this story so far. It pains me to read about Naruto going through all this shit, and Sasuke and Itachi being jackasses! (Wants to strangle the pair) I have never really read a Kisame/Naruto pairing, yet I love the way you write the two. Also, I am very glad this is going to be 4 chapters because I don't want to read about Naruto suffering anymore, I want him to be happy asap. I do hope you add little side chapters as well^^ Cannot wait for the next chapter!
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  • From smint45 on December 08, 2012
    Oh that was fantastic!!!! I really love the way Kisame helped Naruto with his episode!!! I just wonder what will happen when Kisame has to work again... Well we will see soon cause the next chappy is the last!!! Hope to see you again soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Smint45 on December 06, 2012
    That was so sweet!!!! I totally adored this chappy!!!! Thank you so much for the fast post^^ I really like how the relationship between Kisame and Naruto is going!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - G on December 06, 2012
    I think the premise to this story is good. I don't read enough second chance at love pairings, or pairings featuring a disabled character, so I'm interested in this fic for those reasons. Having said that, for a first chapter, this didn't grab the way I'd hoped because I felt like there was too much summarizing of Naruto's past and the SIN relationship. For the most part, up until the end of the chapter when the actual plot kicked in, I felt like I was reading a summary and not a story. Getting a little background information on Naruto's past is a good thing, especially because the SIN pairing was such a long and complex one, but I think a lot of the stuff that was revealed here wasn't stuff we absolutely needed to know in order to understand the beginning of the story. As far as the characters go, all the extra information doesn't make me care more about Naruto, Sasuke, or Itachi, it just ends up being extra details. You can always save background stuff for later on instead of throwing it all into the beginning. That is, if you plan on making Itachi and Sasuke a big part of this story. If they aren't going to be, then that's even more reason not to give so much background info. What's really important is the emotional impact of the breakup on Naruto, not so much the whys and wherefores of it, or what they'd been like when they were together. Naruto is supposed to end up with someone else, right?

    Sorry for the bad review. I was only trying to provide some constructive criticism (I hope?) not that you should take this as a flame, because I honestly don't mean for it to be. Just something to think about for the next chapter/next fic.
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  • From ANON - reader on December 04, 2012
    this is a sad story but i'd like to read more
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  • From smint45 on December 04, 2012
    Really nice start!!!! I want to read more of this!!! See you again!!!!
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