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Reviews for The Heart Of The Matter

By : Daydreamer79
  • From Anko-Rocks on March 20, 2018

    Simply beautiful.


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  • From lara5170 on October 04, 2015
    This was both a sad and encouraging story, but I wish it was longer because I can't help wondering if it worked out or not.
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  • From ANON - dru_neko on April 25, 2013
    mew would purrrfer chu write out the story with more ups and downs as is all relationships and let the smexy time naturally come in.
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  • From bloodshound on January 21, 2013
    i'm glad they didn't rush to smut. it have felt... rushed or wrong sort of. give them time to get comfy with each other.
    anywho, well done.
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  • From whitetiger on January 10, 2013
    I really loved your story. I was beautifully written. I was hesitant on reading it at first because I have never been one for sad stories, but I'm really glad I chose to read it. As for the lack of smut, you were right to leave it out. (but a little sequel later would be good.) Thank you for posting your story. :)
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  • From satterb on January 10, 2013
    I think it ended perfectly. You would have had to skip a lot, or prolong the story to make it believable that Naruto would hook up with them both. LOL. But I'm not against the idea of a sequel. Hint, Hint. Thanks for all your hard work on this one. I loved it!
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  • From smint45 on January 09, 2013
    Oh that was such a sweet story!!!! I really hope there will be a little smutty epiloge but the story is completly perfect without it!!!! Such a great ending^^I adored all of it!!! Thanks a lot for posting this!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on January 09, 2013
    Aw, it's ended already. I was hoping to read more Kisame and Naruto interaction. Not necessarily the sex, though that part is definitely nice too. But this is pretty much the first story with Kisame paired up with Naruto that i actually really, really like and is interested in. Naruto with either Sasuke or Itachi are my top favorite couples, so imagine my surprise when i actually looked forward to reading a story with Naruto and Kisame. I believe you have made me a fan of this pair. Even though it was shorter than i expected, i really liked this story and enjoyed reading it very much. So thank you.
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  • From ANON - Bree on January 09, 2013
    This was a beautiful read. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - nekotsue on January 09, 2013
    I love how you wrote this story capturing all that survivors go through very well and the ending is perfect.
    I would love for you to write an epilogue it'd be fun to see what's happened to them down the road a ways.
    A truly touching and encouraging story it leaves hope that healing really does come.
    thanks.
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  • From ANON - ichigopudding on December 21, 2012
    Aww so so cute, poor Itachi
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  • From ANON - ichigopudding on December 21, 2012
    Aww, bye-bye Sasu
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  • From ANON - Nejislady on December 16, 2012
    T___T This is so intense and full of emotion. I love this story cuz it is hard to let loved ones go. You capture that so expressly with Itachi that I can feel his pain and trepidation. Naruto will be the light they need in their dark lives. Itachi needs to realize this and then he can grieve properly. Can't wait for your next chapter. This is great reading.x3
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on December 14, 2012
    I'm not ordinarily a fan of incest between Itachi and Sasuke and i've never really went out of my way to read a story involving Kisame. But i have to say, i'm glad i went ahead and starting reading this. I'm finding it to be a very touching story so far and i especially am enjoying Kisame's character in this. And sweet Naruto, being so open minded, compassionate and willing to listen and not judge. Looking forward to reading more chapters.
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  • From satterb on December 14, 2012
    This second chapter was just wonderful. I love how you made the plot work so effortlessly. It was believable that Naruto would have huge reservations and that Kisame would turn Itachis own manipulations around on him. LOL. I thought it was super sweet and sexy the way Kisame was nervous yet intent on "wooing" Naruto. I can't wait to see more of this story. Thank you for all your hard work.
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