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Reviews for The lemon games

By : HunterBerserkerWolf
  • From ANON - G0KP on May 31, 2013
    Honestly one of the best lemon stories EVER, especially since I love the video game concept. Can't wait for a new chapter(especially of one features Mei Terumi the Godaime Mizukage, honestly one of the hottest anime girls ever)
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  • From ANON - fallenthantos on May 28, 2013
    why is there not a game like this also really well done and can not wait for the next part.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on May 11, 2013
    FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

    I hope you update more
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  • From ANON - guest on May 04, 2013
    Just wanted to know if you knew someone using the name Upstream River has uploaded what is essentially an exact copy of your chapter one, of this story, using the exact same tile on Fanfiction.net
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  • From ANON - Selias on April 13, 2013
    I have to wonder, what are you going to do about Naruto's travels with Jiraiya? Is it just going to be a time skip, or are you planning on having him meet other women?
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  • From ANON - ookami arashi on April 12, 2013
    you should do an ark with 3 girls that are kami, yami, and shinigami, or even better Mito and Kushina Uzumaki, i meen if he got a perk for gang banging Mikoto he should get at least like 7k points
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  • From ANON - ookami arashi on April 12, 2013
    this is my all time favorite story man tips for the next girls: Guren, the cristal user Konan, the paper mistres of the akatsuki Yuago Uzuki, neko mask anbu the late hyatye gekos fiance, Pakura the scortch style user from sand, Maubi, Saumi, Yugito, or the red head [forgot her name] from kumo, Shion the preistess, hell even the Jubbi[ten tails] or girls from other shows, like benders from avatar, or maka from soul eater
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  • From agnar on April 07, 2013
    Uh, did I miss the bit where sasuke got the curse seal? He didn't get it in the chunin exams that I saw in your fic. And naruto has had at least 2 A-ranks, counting koyuki's mission.

    Also a bit annoying is it gets kinda choppy in parts. I know it's mostly for the lemons, but you included something of a storyline. But you left tsunade's reaction to her de-aging and maybe getting mokuton out totally, and how much younger she is now.

    We can assume naruto still has fun with the various konoha residents offscreen. But anko at least I'd think might get a revisit with naruto's apparent ability to take out the curse seal. Did kurenai ever come back for some live action? Did ino actually keep up the real training/diet?

    I'm not complaining too much really, just think the fic'd be better with a few less holes/huge time skips. Because I find myself liking the changes to canon, though there aren't near enough (like surely shika wasn't the only one promoted? Surely this naruto deserved to be chunin also?) as well as the lemons.
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  • From ANON - revan2811 on April 03, 2013
    I like your storry, can't wait for the next chapter.
    There is one thing in the last chapter that doesn't add up however...

    Seventy-two points left, Naruto skimmed through the skills and spotted one. It wasn’t one for him, but rather for the girls. Naruto poured eighty points into it.

    How can he pour 80 points into massage with only 72 points left?
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  • From cade117 on April 01, 2013
    thanks for putting so many updates out so quickly. it really made my day. I would follow this story, or whatever it is you do to get info on when u have updated a new chapter, but I don't know shit about how to work this site.
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  • From ANON - Illand on March 31, 2013
    Awesome fic, but I feel like you kind of forgot Hinata. If the problem is 'she's the heiress it would be noticed if she fucked someone', then use the Oiroke, no penetration, but some Hina-loving. Besides, she's been in love with him for a hell of a long time, don't you think she deserves some loving? Maybe a parting gift before leaving for his mission ? Or during the vegetable thingy ?
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  • From ANON - donalgraeme on March 31, 2013
    Very nice and steamy, as always. Question: Are you just going to keep coming up with new medals, or actually improve on old ones?
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  • From ANON - Mangaobsession on March 30, 2013
    Isn't this by eroninja???
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  • From Screamindivr145 on March 30, 2013
    another great chapter. Keep em coming. I can't wait to see what's next.
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  • From ANON - Silverscale on March 29, 2013
    Awesome story. though I am curious, wouldn't it be logical to add a Fertility stat too as Naruto should have a risk of getting girls pregnant, the stronger his fertility the bigger the chances are, could even make the fertility gap 1000 so that he can impregnate bijuus even though they are masses of chakra, that is one damn strong sperm.
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