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Reviews for The lemon games

By : HunterBerserkerWolf
  • From ANON - naruhinalover20 on July 16, 2013
    Nice chapter I glad to see the fuma girls in here and all in 1 chapter
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  • From VFSNAKE on July 16, 2013
    Awesome! Three kunoichi for the price of one mission. Sweeeeet!
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  • From ANON - psodude on July 02, 2013
    Keep up the work, your doing great on this so far! youve kept up with all the stats etc realy well, i dont see any grammar issues so far, and its a good read!
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  • From ANON - agnar on June 28, 2013
    I like the great majority of the fic. It's one of the best, if not the best 'life is a game' type fics. For most of the fic, you've actually had him knowing how to use, or getting auto scrolls to learn how to use the new game skills he earns, unlike some of these types of fics, where he only seems to have the skills or powers in name, but no clue how to use any of it.

    But I was annoyed by a few things. Studying the sealing books from Jiraiya, when his sealing was already at 150 or something crazy. He either shouldn't have needed the books, or studying them should have boosted his sealing higher, as it played out it didn't match with how you'd handled things earlier.

    Once he learned the rasengan, like so many other fics, he seems to use nothing but the damned rasengan suddenly. It's his 'big finisher' despite being boring and predictable. You ended the fight with Doto and kabuto and featured it here with this inuzuka chump, all with rasengans, as if Naruto doesn't have dozens of other weapons and abilities.

    Doto alone naruto had many, MANY more effective weapons against the chakra armor, but we just got a slight variation from canon. Just saying, if you're going to give him loads of bloodlines and high stats, actually use them. He's easily on par or stronger than any jonin (not elite jonin up to kage level yet), and has so many bloodlines and skills his enemies shouldn't be ready for all of them. Just be careful not to fall into a rut with his move set.

    This fic is unique in that it has good plot in between the lemons which is what keeps me reading. I can get pure lemon all over, finding it with a fun, decent plot is rare though, so don't lose that.
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  • From ANON - RyuArashi on June 27, 2013
    OMG...I loved this story!!It is well written, and I love the comedy and how Naruto is loving & caring towards his ladies..Please update asap!
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  • From Takai153 on June 27, 2013
    Love it! I like how you had Naruto beat Ryoji by using Ryoji's underestimation of him to lure him into a trap. The date with Hinata was fun too. Hiashi was hilarious as was Tsunade winning the bet. Though it also is a bit scary as thats supposed to be a bad omen. And I absolutely loved the sex scenes! Naruto taking Hana anally was GREAT, and Naruto using kage bunshin on Tsunade was AMAZING! Big fan of those things incase you can't tell. ;D Can't wait to see what will happen, and who he'll do, in the next chapter! And I'm hoping Naruto will get his full reward from Mikoto and for Tayuya to finish showing how concerned she was soon.

    Keep up the absolutely awesome work and please update as soon as you can! :)
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  • From ANON - darksoulalchemist on June 16, 2013
    Fantastic chapter and thanks for the update
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  • From fg7dragon on June 11, 2013
    What about the stat gains?
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on June 05, 2013
    Love having another Tsunade chapter. I like that your taking your time with this story, making sure it is well crafted. It really stands out as a great story. Too bad about Anko mentioned to not have feelings for Naruto. (Naru/Anko is my personal ship) oh well, maybe that will change in future chapters. Looking forward to the Tsume chapter hinted as well. Thanks again and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on June 04, 2013
    Awesome chapter. Shame Naruto won't get much for it, but I'm sure he could care less about that. Look forward to the next chapter and who the lucky lady is. I'm hoping you do the prison break and Naruto takes real good care of Mizuki's girl before beating the punk down ... or maybe after he beats the punk down.
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  • From ANON - Leaf ranger on June 03, 2013
    Ahhh, another excellent pair of chapters. very nice, very nice indeed. *nods* can't wait for naruto to finally get Hinata. XD;

    keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 03, 2013
    Nother great chapter and looking foward to next one
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  • From ANON - Vfsnake on June 02, 2013
    Awesome! Naruto domainated Hana and tsunade. Wonder what the stats are now? LOL!
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  • From Kenshinryuu on June 02, 2013
    Nice chapter, good to see Naruto defend his mates and take down an arrogant bastard.
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  • From Kenshinryuu on June 02, 2013
    Oh man, I loved chapter 17!!! Such a romantic date and yet some funny side notes as the others keep trouble away from Naruto and Hinata. Well done!
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