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By : HunterBerserkerWolf
  • From GZulu on September 08, 2013
    I really loved the whole story so far. Great Job. Cant wait to LOL at the other scenarios you have cooked up for Naruto. And that BS about Naruto not being ready to receive the key...yeah. Jeraiya, you are a twat. Naruto doesn't have to fight Kyu-chan...urm. It feels kinda strange to refer to Kurama by such a name. Yeah, anyway. I enjoyed this. Looking forward to some more in the 'not too distant future' I hope.
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  • From GZulu on September 04, 2013
    That Omake was BOSS!!!! Thanks for this great Lemon Story, btw!
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  • From ANON - Kuflarger on August 15, 2013
    I really love this series. Please Keep it up. I'm looking forward to next chapter
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  • From ANON - Saga on July 21, 2013
    In chapter six, toward the end, when Naruto is in the level up/review process you called him having sex with 3 women in 24 hours the bronze hat trick instead of silver. Also, is there some way that I can send you corrections of errors en masse if I get motivated enough to?
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  • From ANON - rantzilla on July 21, 2013
    I simply love the story, but one thing that I've noticed and am kind of annoyed with is that in the oral sex department Naruto has only been on the receiving end of things. I understand that with him getting it, it can help to show dominance over the various girls, but if he was to give it then it would help to show how much he cares for the girls in question. This had never really bothered me as much before until reading chapter 19, where it mentions that both Fuu's and Nanabi's pussy juices have a particularly sweet scent, which begs the question do they also have a sweeter taste as well? But since the story seems to focus more on the mans pleasure/dominance it seems that we may never find out.
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  • From CodeRR on July 19, 2013
    well, I do like all the perks he can get. Their unique and you don't really expect them to exist. I am interested in the true susanoo perk though (i love the jutsu, it's my favorite)
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on July 19, 2013
    Another awesome chapter and so soon after the last one. Love that he rescued Fuu and the Nanabi. I am wondering though why Nanabi didn't give him her true name to further show her loyalty. And the mutations to both Fire and Earth were awesome. But I so would have picked Titan of defense, yet Golem of defense suits him perfectly so I understood taking that.

    The Fire mutation though sounded a like Scorch Release.And turning the Sage female as well ... makes me think somethings being set up for down the road. Looking forward to the next chapter. Shame the Fuma didn't join Konoha.
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  • From ANON - Xager on July 19, 2013
    Nice work as always, looking forward to the next chapter already. Who will be next, I wonder? Isaribi? Guren? Mei Terumi? Update soon, I wanna find out!
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  • From ANON - naruhinalover202021 on July 19, 2013
    Nice chapter update soon wow 2 chapters in just a few days nice im glad fuu is out of that town and cant wait to see who comes next

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  • From ANON - Vfsnake on July 18, 2013
    Awesome! Simply awesome! More women and power to him.
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  • From ANON - Leaf Ranger on July 18, 2013
    Rather quick on the update. So now Naruto has Fuu and Nanabi. That leaves Yugito and Nibi, Sanbi, Yonbi, Gobi, Rokubi, and hachibi for him to find. And adding in Kyuubi, all of them to unseal and have sex with.

    Overall, awesome work. Keep it up!
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  • From NightEye on July 17, 2013
    Kagero? Someone actually used Kagero in their fic? Dude, you have no idea how fucking happy that makes me! Only wish her part had been a bit longer.
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  • From ANON - Leaf Ranger on July 17, 2013
    Wow. Most impressive chapter. Three Oto babes now have slept with him. Hope Kotohime turns out okay. *nods* Maybe Tsunade can help her?

    Overall, awesome work here. Very awesome indeed. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on July 17, 2013
    Love this story and the new chapter was one of the best.With all his amazing skills & perks/abilities that he's gained it's easy to over look that Naruto's stats aren't all that impressive yet and that he still has some ways to go even if the perks/abilities and skills give him a leg up against most he'll face before the skip.

    Speaking of which I will be interested to see what you do with the skip, but seeing that you used one of the post Sasuke retrieval arcs I'm guessing there is still at least one more arc that you will feature or one of the movies.

    I was surprised that Naruto went defensive on all 3 of his best elements. Water was understandable, as was Wind when thinking of the advantage that will give him on any terrain land or water. And that he combine his water defense with his wind defense when battling on water or land close by a body of water to form and even stronger natural defense that could make him appear godly to weaker foes.

    Picking the lightning defense was surprising though, but once I thought about it does open up a lot of very strong possibilities in the future. Like the Storm release and I'm sure E's Lightning Armor. Still would have been cool to shoot lightning out of your fingers on command.

    I am surprised by how low his Earth Manipulation is though. It's only at adept level. That's definitely a defensive element might even gain Iron Release and Iron skin from it, which is awesome. The Fire release will be the interesting one. Looking forward to see what the mutation options for that one will be.

    And I'm betting once he completes all 5 something interesting happens, but I'm curious if his sub-elements will also open up at some point to being upgraded in similar manner. I guess that's something for after the skip though.

    Looking forward to the next chapter in your amazing story. Great job with this, please keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - G-Boy on July 17, 2013
    You over use the words little bit and how long is he going to keep wearing that jumpsuit
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